This poem is obviously better than Jiang Can's work, in the end, he is a person born in Xuehai, and his talent is not trivial. Pen | fun | pavilion www. ｂｉｑｕｇｅ。 ｉｎｆｏ

What surprised Cai Yuanzhi even more was that this Qiao Fang could be called a genius.

Even Jiang Can nodded, although he didn't like Yao Yizhou, this poem was done very well.

Qiao Fang is really a talented person.

The audience applauded and was amazed.

Lu Zhaoxue and Xie Yuzhi were once again shocked by Qiao Fang's talent, how could someone who could write this kind of poem be a general?

Cai Yuanzhi moistened his throat and said, "Lord Yuan, are you here to comment?"

"No, it's a bit of a waste for me to comment on such a masterpiece. It's right for Cai Lao's analysis!"

Seeing this, Cai Yuanzhi was not polite, and said loudly: "This poem is enough to be called a masterpiece!"

In one sentence, Qiao Fang and Yao Yizhou were lifted to a fairly high height. The crowd was in an uproar and there was a lot of discussion.

But no one argued, after all, the poem was really well written.

Whether a poem is good or not, in addition to whether the sentences are beautiful or not, there is one of the simplest and most important criteria, which is that it is not easy to understand.

Those who read books will not talk about it, and there will be no problem in reading any poems if they have writing skills.

But if a poem has both a level and at the same time allows farmers who have not read a book to understand the artistic conception of the poem, it is enough to prove that the poem is good.

And this one is exactly like this, no matter whether you have read the book or not, as soon as you hear it, the picture described in the poem will naturally appear in your mind, and you don't have to struggle to understand it at all.

However, when the picture appears, I naturally feel the artistic conception in the poem.

Qiao Fang waved his hand again and again, and he was also full of admiration for Yao Yizhou, he was a "fake" talent, and he just borrowed Tang Caizi's talent.

And Yao Yizhou is a real talent, with artistic sentiment and literary accomplishment that are difficult for ordinary people to achieve.

Now let's objectively evaluate this poem, strictly speaking, this is the work of the two. Looking at the four sentences made by Yao Xuexue, they have the style and artistic conception of poetry. But there is a lack of sentiment, as if it is just for fun. ”

However, the last four sentences show the character of a poet and the pursuit of life. Immediately afterwards, he explained why the author chose to live like this, and gave a reasonable explanation. If the rich are compared to the poor, one on the flat ground and the other in the sky, if the flowers and wine are compared to the carriage, he has to drive me to be idle. This reflects the author's realm and his reluctance to pursue fame and fortune. ”

At this point, the author's thoughts are clear, telling everyone that it is better to get drunk than to compete for fame and fortune. And in the last sentence, the author shows his attitude, you can laugh at me, scold me, what?"

Cai Yuanzhi's analysis is quite thoughtful and understands it very thoroughly.

But in fact, Tang Caizi is a model of a scholar who has never met talents, and his life can be described as bumpy.

This poem is also his own life after he wants to open it.

Just looking at this poem, you can see Tang Caizi's freedom and uninhibitedness, but behind this is the misery that is not accepted by the world.

Tang Caizi's kind of experience, Yao Yizhou naturally did not have.

It's just that his thoughts are quite consistent with Tang Yin.

And this poem was also done by Qiao Fang to guide Yao Yizhou.

Looking at the first sentence, I can only see that Yao Yizhou is a prodigal son.

If he had been allowed to write it alone, he would not have been able to compose this poem.

It all relied on Qiao Fang's cooperation to change the direction of Yao Yizhou's poems.

"Only the sentence that I don't see the tomb of Wuling heroes, no flowers and no wine hoeing fields, the old man doesn't understand it very well. Can you explain?"

When Qiao Fang heard this, he secretly said badly, where did the Wuling of the Shenwu Continent come from, he immediately changed his mind and said, "This is just a metaphor." The focus is on Haojie. Look at the graves of those heroes in history, they are not desolate now?"

"I see!" Cai Yuanzhi's eyes lit up, and he said in his heart, this is a poem that sees through the world!

I didn't expect Yao Yizhou and Qiao Fang to be so young, they actually had this kind of realm!

No, the last sentence was written by Qiao Fang, what kind of teenager is he?!

Qiao Fang wiped his sweat, and on a whim, he almost overdressed.

It's just that he really couldn't hold back, as soon as Yao Yizhou started, he read it out.

Cai Yuanzhi clapped his hands and said: "The talents of Yao Xuexue and Qiao Xuexue are enough to be the first in this Wentai competition, and there is no need for Qiao Xuexue to make another song in the future, how about the two of you jointly take the first place this time?"

The two tied for first place? Everyone was in an uproar, and this was the first time that this situation had occurred in the Wentai dispute.

This is good, Qiao Fang is overjoyed, saving him from having to use his brain to make up another song.

"Mr. Cai, Lord Yuan, everyone. I have something to say below. Yao Yizhou said: "The first place this time should belong to Brother Qiao, and I really don't dare to be cheeky and tied for first place with Brother Qiao." ”

Qiao Fang was stunned when he heard this, and said, "Why is Brother Yao so polite?"

"The finishing touch of this poem is all in Brother Qiao, and I am just relatively cooperative. It is also all thanks to the guidance of Brother Qiao that this poem can become such a masterpiece, so I dare not call it the first. ”

Hearing this, Cai Yuanzhi smiled and nodded, this Yao Yizhou is modest and not arrogant, it is rare to have this kind of person in Xuehai, not bad.

Qiao Fang was not hypocritical when he heard this, he thought about it, the rings were a pair, and it was also weird for him and Yao Yizhou to be one each. immediately said: "That is the case, but Qiao is disrespectful." ”

"Of course, Brother Qiao, please!"

With that, Yao Yizhou stepped aside.

"Okay, the old man officially announced that the first person in Wentai this time is Qiao Fang!"

Suddenly, applause erupted.

Qiao Fang arched his hand in all directions: "Thank you, thank you!"

Lu Zhaoxue was overjoyed, and Xie Yuzhi said in disbelief: "Qiao Gang Leader is highly talented! Zhaoxue, you have found a good Langjun!"

"Go, what a good Langjun!"

"Below, Student Qiao can receive the reward, come on, present the jade ring!"

With that, a small maid walked out with a plate, and the two jade rings lay quietly in the center.

Qiao Fang was overjoyed, and gave one of them to Zhaoxue for a while, and kept one for himself.

I think so, but I don't know if Zhaoxue will accept it.

While thinking, Qiao Fang stretched out his hand.

Suddenly, the black shadow flashed, and the little maid exclaimed, Qiao Fang felt that he had been lightly bumped, and when he looked closely, the plate containing the jade ring was no longer there.

Qiao Fang was furious! Where is Lao Tzu's ring!?

This happened suddenly, Cai Yuanzhi and Lord Yuan didn't see what happened, and when the situation was clear, the ring was no longer there.

Boss Yang of Jade Xing was shocked, and hurriedly came downstairs and said to the little maid, "Where is my ring?"

"No...... I don't know. The little maid said in fear.

"You!" Boss Yang was furious.

The rest of the people also hurriedly came downstairs, "What's the matter!?"

"The ring was stolen. ”

"What's the situation?"

Everyone shook their heads, Cai Yuanzhi and Lord Yuan glanced at each other, this was the first time such a thing had happened.

At this time, Lu Zhaoxue and Xie Yuzhi also ran up.

"Little Qiaozi, what's wrong?"

"The ring was robbed!"

"Huh?!"

The second daughter was shocked, and when everyone saw Xie Yuzhi, they all greeted: "Isn't this Miss Xie? Why are you here? When did you arrive?"

"I came to see the play, and I saw the end from the beginning. ”

"Then why don't you come up and let you stand, what a faux pas!" Sun Tongxin was shocked, this kid has already gotten acquainted with Miss Xie?

"It's okay, just stand and watch. Xie Yu said: "This daughter of the Lu family in Los Angeles." ”

"Ah, it turned out to be Miss Los Angeles. It's rude!"

"You're welcome. ”

When Lord Yuan heard this, he said, "Miss Xie, Miss Lu." Both of them are martial arts masters, did you just see the problem?"

"No, I just watched Qiao Gang Leader accept the award, and suddenly there was a commotion. ”

Everyone was puzzled, and Xie Yuzhi smiled and said, "This is Qiao Fang, the leader of the Los Angeles Beggar Gang." ”

As soon as these words came out, everyone was shocked, this young man is still the leader of a gang?!

"I took this pair of jade rings!"