Take a day off tomorrow to think about the plot and fix the previous article

The modifications include: word and sentence optimization, plot logic repair, character design repair, plot foreshadowing addition, hot-blooded plot supplement, etc.

Because Xiaoshui does have limited qualifications, and the online article requires fast writing and not much time to think, so he takes care of one or the other, resulting in many plots that do not touch the cool point, there are problems with logic, and the character design is not full.

Revised tomorrow.

After that, depending on the situation, roughly state the changes.

Well, come on.

By the way, the current plot has not collapsed, it may have gone through a lengthy transition and started a new chapter.

Sitting in the galaxy of the universe, the resentful soul of billions of years.... emmm, isn't it quite emotional?

Please be sure to continue to support Kosui ~~~

"Long Live the Imperial Brother" will take a day off tomorrow, thinking about the plot and repairing the previous text is in the middle of the hand, please wait a while,

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