Thank you all for your comments
It's terrible, I was shaken by the comments of readers, and I began to lose confidence in all the plots behind me. I finally understand why in those guidance texts for newcomer writers, it is repeatedly emphasized that newcomer writers should not change the text at will.
But fortunately, I should say that things must be reversed, and I have seen too much, but it has strengthened my belief that I want to write down according to my own settings. According to the book friend ny_cn, it is to die firmly.
At the end of the two chapters of the old version, everyone's disacceptance indicates that there must be a problem, so I rewrote it. I think there is something wrong with what I wrote. But I firmly believe that there must be a way to express this premise in a way that everyone can accept.
I know that you are not optimistic about this setting, and this is also related to my previous vague statement, not making the setting clear as soon as possible, which made you misunderstand. However, there is no such thing as a bad subject, only an author who can't do it, and I just want to write this setting, and I don't care about anything else.
By the way, there is also the issue of party strife about Lily Marrying, in fact, I have never wanted to pay attention to it, because when I am a reader, I read both, and in my opinion, no matter if Lily marries a single person or any other strange play, as long as it is reasonable. So the reply to the book friend Xiaoyou-chan is the last reply to this question.