Just copied the content, Gao Zhan continued to send it: "In addition to the unqualified name, your profile is also unqualified!" What poignant love, what love changes, what epic big scenes, these are all things that readers don't care about, or even hate, so to speak...... Your profile has the opposite effect, and finally someone comes in, but when you look at your profile, most of them will turn around and leave, and if people don't enter your page, you won't increase clicks, so you fail again! ”

"No...... No way! I didn't know how to write the introduction, so I filled it in randomly. Teacher Hu said cautiously.

"Khan ......" made a sweaty expression, and Gao Zhan smiled bitterly: "You're not, the introduction is very important, basically...... The so-called introduction is to point out the golden finger. ”

"Goldfinger? What's that! Seeing Gao Zhan's words, Mr. Hu was confused again.

......Seeing this, Gao Zhan opened his mouth, scratched his head irritably, and continued to reply for a long time: "This is troublesome to explain, let me say so, have you seen the vendors selling goods on the street?" Your profile is like their shouting, write down what you want to sell, and the selling points of those things, just ask...... You don't even know what the other party is selling and what characteristics it has, will you buy it? ”

Gao Zhan's example is very vivid, and Mr. Hu instantly understood, right...... If a car is parked on the side of the road, covered with canvas, and does not even know what it is selling, and does not know what its characteristics are, what is the use of just shouting and selling, who will buy it?

While thinking about it, Gao Zhan continued: "For example, if you sell apples, you call my apples red, sweet and delicious, one dollar and one catty, this is the selling point, as soon as everyone listens to your introduction, those who want to eat apples will come over, buy a few catties and go, this is the role of the introduction." ”

Suddenly patting his head, Mr. Hu completely understood how big his mistake was, and originally felt that he had done a great job, which was perfect, but now he realized that she was so bad and so wrong!

Originally, she had absolute confidence in her own works, in her opinion, the things Gao Zhan wrote could not be compared with her at all, and felt that their fame was all luck, the so-called no tiger in the mountains, and the monkey was the overlord, but she didn't expect that when she really went to write, she found that everything was completely different from what she imagined.

I looked for a reason for a long time, but she really couldn't find it, so she found Gao Zhan, but she didn't think about it...... It doesn't matter if Gao Zhan doesn't say this, as soon as she says it, in just a few words, she will be completely convinced, the so-called...... Pay attention to the knowledge everywhere, this code word seems very simple, but it really works, and the knowledge inside is big.

It can be said that a good title can create a book, a good introduction, can also create a book, although these two secrets seem simple, but to look through, the starting point of more than one million books, can meet these two requirements, an average of 10,000 books, may not be able to produce one! And all that meets these requirements is the work of the fire.

quickly copied Gao Zhan's words, and Mr. Hu couldn't wait to say, "Is there anything else?" Are there any other reasons? ”

In the face of Mr. Hu's inquiry, Gao Zhan continued: "Yes, your opening chapter is not successful. ”

"Ahh In the face of Gao Zhan's words, Mr. Hu was completely speechless, at the beginning, she wrote for a week, repeatedly scrutinized and revised, which was her most proud part, but Gao Zhan couldn't say it!

Without waiting for Mr. Hu to ask, Gao Zhan continued: "If the reader can't be attracted after opening it for two minutes, then he is likely to give up on it, especially for new works for novices, on the contrary, if you can catch the reader's appetite at the beginning, then everyone is likely to continue reading......

"That's right!" slapped her thigh, Mr. Hu's eyes were shining, although Gao Zhan didn't finish her words, but she already understood, although her beginning was very beautiful, but there was nothing for everyone to look at, just simple beauty, but it couldn't attract people, since it was not attractive, it was natural for everyone to leave.

After thinking about it, Gao Zhan continued: "Now, your problem is basically this, the title of the book is not good, readers don't come in to read, and finally some readers come in, and your introduction is not up to par, or even counterproductive, directly scaring half of it, and then ...... The remaining half of the people came in trembling, but they couldn't find anything to attract them, so they ran away, and that's why you're down......"

"Hey......" let out a long sigh, Mr. Hu was completely convinced, he originally thought it was a perfect masterpiece, but under Gao Zhan's comments, it was so unbearable, but if you think about it carefully, it's really the case, not only her, but also those who are not successful, basically the same.

The title of the book is not good, everyone is not interested, the introduction is not good, everyone does not know what you want to write, the beginning is not good, everyone can't find the attraction point, why should you read such a book? As Gao Zhan said, no matter how good the author feels, if the reader doesn't buy it, it's rubbish.

Quickly copy all the words of Gao Zhan, and then ...... Mr. Hu asked Gao Zhan for advice on some specific issues, such as how to come up with a book title, how to write a introduction, what is a golden finger, and how to write a good start......

After chatting, time flew by, and when Mr. Hu finally came back to his senses, he was shocked to find that he had been chatting for more than two hours!

After hurriedly saying goodbye, Mr. Hu sat down on the chair and dragged others to chat for more than two hours, oh my God...... Wouldn't it be too much, although she is very difficult now, but she can't put her own difficulties on the shoulders of others and let others help her fight!

Looking at the computer screen, the dense handwriting in the folder, Teacher Hu sat up suddenly, she copied every word Gao Zhan said, and took it to school tomorrow to take a good look, and subconsciously counted the numbers, and there were more than 14,000 words......

Sitting there wordlessly, Mr. Hu was speechless, with his current value, the value of these words is nearly 20,000 yuan! This favor is too much to owe.

The value of the words themselves is not enough, the most important thing is that she knows that what Gao Zhan taught her is very valuable knowledge, although the number of words is only more than 10,000 words, but there is no doubt that Gao Zhan gave her the golden rooster that lays eggs and led her into the palace of writers, which is priceless.

I looked at the time, it was already very late, I had to go to class tomorrow, I didn't dare to look more, wrapped in a bath towel, Mr. Hu walked to the bedside, untied the bath towel wrapped around his body, got into the warm quilt of Xiangjie, and slept contentedly, tomorrow ...... Tomorrow, she will reimagine her work according to Gao Zhan's requirements.

On the other side, after Gao Zhan closed the computer, he stretched a big lazy waist, and then got up and walked downstairs, although it was very late, but now the young people, all of them are night owls, and it is absolutely impossible to sleep at this point.

Sure enough, as soon as he walked to the stairs, Gao Zhan heard the sound of the TV downstairs, and went downstairs to see, more than a dozen girls watched TV series in front of the TV, although everyone likes to surf the Internet, but for beauties, the Internet must be controlled, and the computer is the natural enemy of beauty!

Walked directly to the gap between Li Qian and Sun Yazhi and sat down, feeling Gao Zhan's squeeze, Li Qian and Sun Yazhi frowned at the same time and looked over, seeing that it was Gao Zhan, they gave way to both sides, and then continued to watch TV.

Get along for so long, everyone has long been used to it, and there seems to be no suspicion of men and women, even if they sit together, there is no problem, although it is very hot outside, but the air conditioning is on in the living room, and it is very cool.

Although I really want to enjoy it with everyone, but watching the Korean kimchi romance movie on TV, Gao Zhan only watched it for a while, and he was completely speechless, what is this!

Korean kimchi TV series are basically the same type, they are all girls from poor families, who are favored by n handsome guys, and then how to work hard all the way, and finally the sparrow becomes a phoenix, they are all carved out of a mold.

If this is the case alone, Gao Zhan is acceptable, but what makes Gao Zhan unacceptable the most is that the TV series is full of angry bolts, so that you can't throw them away when you see it, and you can't stop watching it one by one.

Basically, in TV, the protagonist is always oppressed and insulted by a certain villain, and those bad guys are bad one by one, constantly harming the protagonist and the people around him, and the angry audience is angry, but it leaves a trace of the protagonist's outbreak, leading everyone to continue watching, and if you don't see the protagonist out of this breath, you can't give up if you don't see the final fate of the bad guy, but in fact, until the end, the bad guy is still a bad guy, and he can't get the punishment he deserves, so he ...... It's time for a sequel......

In the process of watching the TV series, the audience's hearts are full of depression, wretchedness, and anger, but they can't get an effective way to vent, so what should I do? If the control is poor, they will find other ways to vent out, go out to fight, or quarrel with their family, or beat and scold their children, and their temper will be very bad, and I don't know how many family problems will be caused.

And if you have a good temper, you may not have an attack, but if you anticipate your anger in your heart for a long time, you can really hold back the disease, and many cancers are held back in this way, and long-term depression can make people depressed.

To Gao Zhan said, this kind of TV series that purely relies on the atmosphere to tie up the audience is no different from murder for money, such a long TV series, the broadcast period is very long, and during the entire broadcast period, the more and more the anger in the hearts of all the audience gathers, the most cruel thing is that even if the TV series is over, I don't release this breath and strive for a sequel......

It can be said that such a TV series has a huge physical and mental damage, watching such a TV series, not only can not relax, but will cause a lot of family problems, social problems, and bring huge harm to themselves and society, basically, families who watch such TV series will have all kinds of contradictions and problems, and people who watch such TV series will be very short-tempered and have an iron face all day long, because they have too many depressions in their hearts.

In the face of such a TV series, Gao Zhan really doesn't know what to say, although the content is very healthy, but it is harmful to the audience, to the family, and to the society, why can it be broadcast? And it's also a huge amount of money introduced!

After only thinking about it for a while, Gao Zhan sighed, the reason is actually very simple...... Although I am very reluctant to admit it, as a writer, Gao Zhan must admit that domestic TV series are really not successful, what is that thing to shoot! No matter how bad Korean dramas are, they can still attract people, but domestic TV dramas have lost even the ability to attract people, speaking of which...... Domestic TV series, very similar to the text written by Mr. Hu before, looks beautiful and has a local flavor, but there are few attractive ones.

Some people may think that this is alarmist, but you can think about it, how many people around you are watching domestic TV series? Even if they chase it, how many have they watched? The answer doesn't need to be said......

Now, domestic TV series have made people completely speechless, everyone is looking at money, not daring to try new things, nor daring to innovate, but only according to past experience, what is good to do.

Master Jin's fourteen heavenly books, that is indeed a cow, supreme, but you can't shoot it repeatedly, right? But now I recognize this, I don't lose money when I shoot this, and TV stations love to buy it, so I will continue to invest a lot in it, what? Just made the fifth edition last year? It doesn't matter, let's shoot the sixth version, if we don't achieve the seventh edition, we won't lose money anyway......

That's right, it's not a loss, but the more the audience watches it, the more boring it becomes, and the more they watch it, the more boring it becomes, and when they see the end, they simply don't watch it, and then the TV series is sluggish, and then they all say that the market is sluggish, and while shouting about the recession, they start filming the seventh version......

The TV series is like this, and the animation is also like this, a Zha Haohai can be filmed countless times, and then shoot Journey to the West after filming, let's not say that this is not good, but I always shoot this, from childhood to adulthood, everyone has watched the n version, and they can all memorize it, and shoot it!

To say that some people's heads are really kicked by a donkey, or they are squeezed by the door, is it interesting to copy cold rice so repeatedly? Things are good things, but no matter how good things are, copy them repeatedly a dozen times, and they are tired.

Could it be that the Chinese can't do it? Can't get something good? Not...... Don't say that, there is nothing wrong with the Chinese, 1.3 billion people, pull and pull at will, 100 million people pull out one, then you can pull out thirteen grandmasters, who dares to say that the Chinese can't do it, that is almost equivalent to saying that the earthlings can't do it.

Xiyangyang and Big Big Wolf are examples, which are enough to prove that Chinese can shoot good animations, but today throw the words here to see if there is any stupid x to shoot the nth version of Journey to the West, what about the sea, Baolian lantern, and the god list? Yes...... There must be, and it won't be far away, maybe everyone will find out tomorrow that the one hundred and eighth edition of Journey to the West has come out!

There are too many good things in China, and basically foreigners take Chinese themes to shoot, and then go to the international awards to win awards, but Chinese drags a few magic weapons and doesn't let go, and they all come out of the water and don't let go...... Can you broaden your horizons a little more?

"Damn ......" cursed in a low voice, the more Gao Zhan thought about it, the more atmosphere became, now it's like this, I really have the right to decide something, my thoughts are so stubborn, so rigid, so uncivilized, it's just the same as primitive people, but people who are impulsive and energetic are now all minions, and they don't have any right to speak at all, and when the post-70s, post-80s, and post-90s can have the final say, there will be hope for this circle.

Hearing Gao Zhan's swearing, Li Qian turned her head suspiciously, she had known Gao Zhan for so long, this was the first time she had heard Gao Zhan swearing, and usually, he didn't even have a verbal speech!

"What's wrong...... Did something happen? Looking at Gao Zhan cautiously, Li Qian asked in a low voice.

"Hey......" with a long sigh of depression, Gao Zhan stood up, walked to the balcony, looked at the night sky outside the window, and was dazed.

Seeing Gao Zhan's heavy face, Li Qian frowned, followed, and stood side by side on the balcony with Gao Zhan, looking out.

After a while, Gao Zhancai opened his mouth in a low voice, and said the inner activity just now, and he wanted to say ...... Gao Zhan wanted to find someone to talk to, and if he wanted to find an audience for himself, Li Qian was almost the only choice.

Lu Lu can't do it, she's too young, Lu Ying can't do it, the environment she lives in is destined to have different worldviews between the two, from a certain point of view, Lu Ying and Bai Lu are like two elves from ancient times, they don't know much about the current society, world view, outlook on life, values, and Gao Zhan are not the same.

Only Li Qian can fully understand Gao Zhan, world view, outlook on life, and values...... Both of them are almost the same, have a common language, and have basically the same views on the same thing.

Listening to Gao Zhan's words, Li Qian's expression became more and more serious, she had actually thought about the same thing, but this is reality, this is society! She is also powerless to change anything, now it is a market economy, the market determines everything, even if she is powerful, she cannot change the overall situation.

But soon, Li Qian thought of something, slapped her face violently, and said happily: "There is!" They don't shoot, in fact, we can shoot ourselves? ”

"Shoot it yourself?" Hearing Li Qian's words, Gao Zhan couldn't help but be stunned for a moment, then shook his head with a wry smile and said: "It's simple to say, but it's angry, but we can't shoot it ourselves, no director, no screenwriter, no drama, no actors, no camera, no field affairs, no funds, no technology...... It can be said that there is nothing to want, how to shoot! ”

Looking at Gao Zhan deeply, Li Qian said seriously: "I don't think there is anything in this world that is absolutely impossible to do, at least...... As far as this matter alone is concerned, as long as you want to, you can do it, maybe you can't do it as well as you imagined, but it can be infinitely close, the key is only whether you want to do it or not......"

"This ......" Hearing Li Qian's words, Gao Zhan couldn't help but hesitate, although he has always regarded himself very highly, but he is not omnipotent! Looking at Li Qian with a serious face, Gao Zhan knew for the first time that she was so tall in her mind!

Under Gao Zhan's gaze, Li Qian continued: "There is a shortage of everything in this world, but there will definitely be no shortage of talents, no one can find, no equipment can be bought, no technology can be learned, no money can be earned, didn't you say it before?" Difficulties exist not to hinder you, but to be solved, aren't they? ”

Scratching his head, Gao Zhan suddenly found that what Li Qian said was indeed reasonable, he couldn't refute it, it was indeed ...... Although it is a lot more difficult to think about, in fact, as long as you do it, these can be solved, the key is only whether you want to do it or not, and how good you can do it.

After thinking for a while, Gao Zhan finally shook his head and sighed, "Forget it...... I'm too busy now, I still have to go to school, I have to code words, and I have to worry about the company's affairs, so I don't have time to do this. ”

Shaking her head, Li Qian did not agree with Gao Zhan's words, and continued: "I don't agree with your statement, going to school is not an excuse, and code words are not a reason, you should face your heart, the only thing you need to know is not excuses and reasons, but whether you want to do this, since you have time to go to Biaoche, you definitely have time to do this." ”

"Okay......" sighed, Gao Zhan shook his head and said, "To tell you the truth, I want to do it...... But what can I do but pay? You know, even if I could spare time, I wouldn't be able to spare much time, and just giving money wouldn't change anything, would it? ”

"No!" Shaking her head categorically, Li Qian smiled and said, "Actually, you complicated the problem, why do you want to do it in one step?" Why not start with interest? Nobody wants you to just take this to the big picture. ”

Speaking of this, Li Qian seemed to be in good spirits, and said excitedly: "Where is this?" This is Choshu! If you want to engage in this in the media capital, there is no shortage of talents, and several major art academies can provide you with a variety of talents. ”

Hearing this, Gao Zhan couldn't help but be moved, seeing Gao Zhan's tempting expression, Li Qian continued: "We don't need to be so complicated, we can set up an interest group and recruit interested people to participate, I can guarantee that as long as you go to the art school and post an advertisement, a lot of people are willing to join, let's pay some money and shoot a small TV series together to have fun, just shoot your peerless god of war, as for good or bad, does it matter?" I didn't expect the TV station to broadcast it, so let's just post it online to entertain ourselves? ”

Speaking of this, Li Qian became more and more excited, and said with glowing eyes: "As for the actors, it's better to say, there are more than a dozen people in the living room, and they are guaranteed to be on call, so that everyone doesn't have to stay at home and watch TV on the Internet as soon as they get out of school, and they're about to go crazy when they're bored, isn't it great?" ”

"En'en En'......" Listening to Li Qian's words, Gao Zhan became more and more tempted, don't say it, it doesn't cost a lot of money, but it can make results, which is really interesting.

Seeing Gao Zhan nodding again and again, Li Qian grabbed Gao Zhan's arm and said excitedly: "Let's do it!" This is really okay, in terms of costumes, Sister Lu Ying can be responsible, the props can be customized by Boss Zhou, and even the car can be spelled out for you, not to mention making a few props, it's absolutely no problem. ”

Costumes, props, actors, equipment...... After thinking about it carefully, Gao Zhan suddenly found that all the problems were solved! What excites Gao Zhan the most is that he can be a director himself, although he is not sure what he can shoot, but he can truthfully restore the TV picture according to the scene in his mind when he coded the words, which is an ability that the director does not have, no matter how powerful the director is, he cannot completely restore the original state of the work!

Getting more and more excited, the two didn't pay attention to the fact that the girls in the living room watched TV one after another, washed and slept, until the sky was dark, the two came back to their senses, looked at the slightly lit sky outside the window, and the two suddenly realized a fact, they had been chatting all night!

(To be continued)