In separate order

Why is it another preface, naturally because I have done a preface before, but the emotion of that preface is too strong, and the things expressed are considered to be abandoned.

In this silent night, after half a year, I just want to make a calm order.

In half a year, many things have happened, and my swordsman still only has 170,000 words, half of which were written in September last year, and the remaining half was pieced together in half a year.

The so-called slow work and meticulous work, although it is a patchwork, but after all, the longer the time, the more things that come to mind, and the quality is not to worry. One or five years after the Spring Festival, I was going to revise the first chapter that had been criticized drastically, and I listed a lot of ideas, but after I really changed it, I found that it was not necessary, and I scrapped the beginning of more than 30,000 words to write, which naturally makes sense, and people who really like this story and this narrative style, the first chapter should be regarded as an introduction.

And the more important reason is that I'm more used to old things, too lazy to change, in my heart, after the first decision, the story is like that, too many deletions will only make me feel uncomfortable.

In the end, I only fixed a few inappropriate places, and the rest, basically unchanged.

Of course, these texts are very redundant about the elaboration of an act of revision, but I understand that most people don't actually read the preface. If you read it, I still remind you that Zhu Dashao, who appeared at the beginning of the first chapter, is not the protagonist.

However, it's still that sentence, what you really like, you don't need to be reminded, the result of the reminder is often that the reader will omit Zhu Dashao's content in a large paragraph, and go to the moment when the protagonist appears, so that a lot of enjoyment is lost.

Well, as a separate preface, my words are very one-sided and cumbersome, so I wish you all a happy read!

-- In the early morning of February 28, 2015