Guo Ming was almost amused by this big fat man, looking at him as if he had seen his own youth.

So, he said patiently: "Zhou Yu, I came to you today, it doesn't mean that your story will necessarily be chosen." It's just that there are a few points that I don't know very well, so I want to ask you to understand, and by the way, I also put forward a little bit of my personal opinion, and I want to make a second creation based on your story. ”

"Huh? Oh. Zhou Yu was stunned at first, it turned out that he was not selected, but he immediately reacted again, and hurriedly said: "Director Guo, please speak." ”

Guo Ming pondered for a moment and said: "The background of the story you wrote seems to be placed in the city, but the protagonist, the dog named Lightning, is actually an alternative in the city. ”

"Yes, it's actually an anomalous superpower!" Zhou Yu hurriedly explained: "The protagonist of the story I wrote is Lightning, and Lightning is actually not an ordinary dog, but a dog with superpowers, he can see, heal, and has the strength of a bear, the speed of a leopard, the courage of a tiger, and the flexibility of a monkey." He is the superman of dogs, that is, the superdog! ”

"Yes, that's what I can't agree with, I know that the superpower is a classification in urban novels, but it's still necessary to be steady when making movies, so it's too middle two." Guo Ming said.

When Zhou Yu heard this, his heart was half cold, but he still couldn't agree verbally, "Director, this is not the second middle school, but a hot-blooded pet text, I think my setting is normal!" ”

Guo Ming knew that the other party would say this, so he patiently relieved: "Don't worry, I didn't deny your story, for example, there is a plot in your story called 'Lost in the mountains and no one rescued, fortunately wait until the lightning comes', in which the plot of lightning saving people is very good, the helpless demeanor of the trapped people, as well as the disappointment of being abandoned by their companions, and the psychology of not wanting to drag down their companions, are all described very well." ”

"However, in the end, when it comes to describing how lightning saves people, it is too distorted. I remember what you wrote was that lightning quietly put its paw on the man's leg, and saw a pale green light imperceptible to the naked eye sink into the man's wound, and then there was a crisp sensation from the man's wound, and the pain disappeared suddenly......"

"Here, I think according to the way the movie is filmed, we can change it to lightning to save people, and tear off the clothes from the man's body with his own intelligence, and then make a slipknot with the dog's mouth to entangle the wound. Then the lightning rushed to the nearest hospital at great speed, bringing medical staff to the rescue. ”

"Personally, I feel that this kind of plot is relatively good. Because it's both reasonable and unexpected. ”

Zhou Yu didn't expect Guo Ming to look at this issue this way.

Where is this changed a little, it is simply changing his story beyond recognition.

But he is a director, Zhou Yu can only hold back the unhappiness in his heart and force himself to smile.

"Hmm." Zhou Yu said.

Guo Ming thought that Zhou Yu agreed with his opinion, so he put forward the second point.

"On the other hand, Lightning's personality needs to be changed." Guo Ming said: "What the movie pays attention to is the link of the plot, in your story, Lightning is brave, kind, resolute, and not afraid of death, daring to sacrifice everything for the master." ”

"However, in the narrative of the movie, no one is perfect, and there is no dog without a dog, and I think lightning should have a little flaw to make the characters plump."

"For example, why lightning has such a personality, in fact, it was a little traumatized when it was young."

Zhou Yu gradually frowned.

What is this, what is it, this director is not sick.

Of course, the other party is a director, the other party is big, and the other party can't help it if he wants to say it.

"You said yes." Seeing that Zhou Yu's eyes were gradually a little blurred, Guo Ming reminded him in a whisper.

"Hmm." Zhou Yu nodded regretfully again.

"One last point." Guo Ming said again: "As I said before, if you remove the urban ability, then the final gaochao plot of outwitting murderers must also be changed." ”

"In your story, Lightning is so brave because the master is kidnapped by a murderer, and Lightning rushes over like Superman to save the master. He even did not hesitate to expose his superpowers in front of his master, and used the strength of a bear, the speed of a leopard, and the agility of a monkey to kill five criminals. I can't agree with that! ”

Zhou Yu chuckled in his heart, ready for Guo Ming to ridicule his story.

"Well, you say." Zhou Yudao.

"That's it, in fact, movies are not quite the same as novels, novels have always been about coolness, after all, it's coolness. But the movie must not only have a cool point, but also a tear point, which is a touching point. In other words, we can change the ending......"

"Wait!" Zhou Yu, who had not spoken, finally couldn't help it, and said with some anger: "Director Guo, do you want to change comedy into tragedy?" ”

"Nope." Guo Ming flatly denied, "What I want is comedy." ”

"Then how do you say there are tears?"

"What about tears, for example, we can let Lightning get seriously injured when saving people, and resist everything for the master."

"Isn't that what a tragedy is, and then you're ready to let the lightning die, for the audience to remember?"

"No, no." Guo Ming hurriedly denied it, although he thought so, "We can let Lightning get seriously injured, then lie in the hospital for several months, and then die." ”

"You still say no, you just want Lightning to die!" Zhou Yu was furious.

"No, no, no, in fact, I can not let him die, just get seriously injured, and then slowly raise him back to live happily with his master."

"No, lightning doesn't hurt, you don't understand anything at all!" Zhou Yu suddenly found that the director opposite didn't understand the protagonist of his story at all.

The so-called words are not speculative for more than half a sentence, and there is no way to talk about it today!

"No, classmate Zhou Yu, don't worry." Guo Ming said, "Many of them are my unilateral opinions, and the final draft can be discussed." ”

"There's no need to negotiate, I don't want to post, and I won't allow you to shoot! Lightning is a dog with superpowers, and he deserves to be in the streets with a messy adaptation like yours! I don't want to talk about it, and I don't lack your manuscript fees! ”

Zhou Yu exploded!

Because he found that the more he talked, the more he couldn't make sense, the director and his ideas were two parallel lines that did not intersect, and it was fruitless for the two sides to continue.

So it's better to quit as soon as possible, so as not to let this stupid director spoil his story.

Guo Ming was stunned, he didn't know that this would be the result.

Just as he was about to stand up and say a few more words, a shout suddenly came from the side of the teahouse.

"Help, help! Someone overboard! ”

"Come and help!"

Next to the teahouse is a river, this river is very deep, I don't know how many meters there are, anyway, boats come and go, the river can't see the bottom.

I don't know what happened just now, a thirteen or fourteen-year-old junior high school girl was walking on the edge of the railing, because she accidentally slipped her hand and let her phone fall into the river.

Looking at the sinking mobile phone, the female student jumped out of the railing and stretched out her hand to fish, but the body slipped and the person threw herself directly into the river.

After a few flutters, I realized that I couldn't swim, and then I just drank water and screamed for help.

Zhou Yu and Guo Ming saw this situation and immediately got up and rushed to the river.

But they can't swim, and most of the onlookers on the riverside can't swim, Guo Ming shouted: "Find the bamboo pole, find the lifebuoy!" ”

Drowning doesn't take that long, and junior high school students in the middle of the river are drifting farther and farther away.

Just when everyone was helpless, a yellow figure was in the distance, and then plunged into the water without hesitation.

……