"That's right!" Li Chen, who was next to Shen Yize, immediately agreed, "It is very perfunctory to reduce everything to a dream, and the audience will not accept it." ”

Gu Shu said: "Perfunctory is secondary, mainly because this ending can't stand scrutiny, and there are too many contradictions, so it must be changed." ”

The question raised by Gu Shu is also the most criticized point of this drama: it is unfinished. When the last four episodes were broadcast, almost the whole network had bad reviews, and the Douban score dropped directly from 8.6 to 8.2.

Shen Yize also hesitated for a while before finally choosing it among the three alternative options, the other two dramas are "The Best of Us" and "Little Huanxi".

The reason why he made such a decision is because he just finished watching "I Don't Want to Be Friends with You", and he was more impressed by the details and passages in it; second, because it is more in line with the requirements of this project, which is both funny and warm, and has various elements; The last and most important reason is because it takes place in the Northeast, and Gu Shu, who writes the pen, happens to be from the Northeast.

With Gu Shu's business ability, she can definitely write this drama brilliantly, even surpassing the original version.

As for the ending -

"I thought about another possibility in the ending, and I can barely justify myself, but this will increase the complexity of the plot, and I don't know if it's appropriate to put it in a youth campus drama."

"You say, we can discuss whether it's appropriate or not."

Shen Yize told the screenwriters present about his original ending.

In his conception, the mysterious uncle is not the product of Li Jinjin's fantasy, but Wu Zhixun, who went abroad to further his studies and eventually invented the time machine. Based on this setting, many of the plots in the original play, especially the ending, had to be modified to make it conform to the basic logic.

He hasn't thought through many details, but the eleven screenwriters present, including many senior editors and middle editors, can always discuss a logical self-consistent and time-space closed plan as long as they follow this line of thought and work together.

The actual situation is just as Shen Yize expected, as soon as he proposed this idea, the screenwriters of the urban group patched him one after another. Fortunately, he was prepared, turned on the computer early, and everyone had a heated discussion, and he listened and revised at the same time.

After going through the plot from beginning to end and confirming that there were no obvious contradictions, Shen Yize posted "I Don't Want to Be Friends with You 2.0" to the group.

Even Wang Fan, who has always been harsh, couldn't help but admire: "This story integrates the bridging of parent-child relationship into the fantasy element of crossing, which is both novel and empathetic, and what is even more commendable is that we have achieved self-justification." ”

Before Shen Yize had time to be happy, he listened to Gu Shu say in a thoughtful tone: "After the change, it is indeed more reasonable, and there are no obvious loopholes, but let Duan Xiao take the time machine to the modern era, I think this arrangement is a bit forceful." ”

"Let's put ourselves in Duan Xiao's position and think about it, do you really think that if Duan Xiao travels to twenty years later, he will be happy if he revolves around Li Jinjin every day? This is a drama that focuses on the parent-child relationship, and I don't think we can destroy Duan Xiao's family for the sake of Li Jinjin's consummation. ”

Shen Yize calmed down and thought about it carefully, knowing that Gu Shu was right.

The ending arranged for Duan Xiao to follow Li Jinjing to cross together, which seemed to be HE, but in fact only took care of the love line. Duan Xiao left his relatives and friends and came to a strange city twenty years later, and he didn't know anyone except Li Jinjin. He may be happy for a while in this kind of life, but he will never be happy for a long time.

Shen Yize thought for a while and said: "Bian Gu is right, but this problem is unsolvable, he will always lose one of his family and love." In contrast, embracing love is a more market-oriented choice, after all, the whole drama ended the moment they crossed, and the audience never knew the story behind. ”

Gu Shu said: "From the perspective of the market, this is the case, but if you really want to follow the market, then you should choose my script." This drama emphasizes truth and empathy, we shouldn't HE for HE's sake, let their youth have regrets, it may not be a good ending. In this way, we still have a majority decision, and those who support Shen Bian please raise your hand to show it. ”

Only Xu Fengyang is alone.

Then the ending will be changed to BE, Duan Xiao will stay twenty years ago, and everything else will remain the same. Still have questions? ”

No one was silent.

Gu Shu said: "If there is no problem, Shen Editor, you will be the main author of the episode outline, and after writing it, we can discuss it in the group from time to time." ”

Li Chen, the chief number one fan brother, asked with an expectant face: "Then during this time, will Editor Gu come to our city group to take a shift?" I mean, that's how we can talk about it from time to time, right? ”

Gu Shu smiled and said, "I won't go to the city group to sit on duty, but you can keep a computer for me, and I may occasionally go to your place to code words." Just vacate desk 7 for me, which I used to sit in when I was in the urban group. ”

Wang Fan said: "After you left the city group, the No. 7 seat has been vacant for you!" ”

"Wang Bian has a heart. Editor Shen, write out the outline of the first two episodes today, no problem, right? ”

Shen Yize did not hesitate: "No problem!" ”

Not to mention the first two episodes, the first six episodes are fine.

After the meeting ended, Shen Yize went home to write.

According to the discussion at the meeting, the original twenty-four episodes will be expanded to twenty-six episodes, and due to the addition of more content, the plot is actually more compact.

Shen Yize thought that he could do it quickly, but when he really wrote it, he found that it was not as smooth as he thought.

In the previous scripts, he was brainless, but this time "I Don't Want to Be Friends with You 2.0" has added a lot of original plots on the basis of the original version. If you want to write these original plots, you have to use your brain, and as soon as you use your brain, your hand speed will naturally slow down.

At the same time, he can usually write a six-episode outline plus a character biography, but today he only wrote two episodes of the outline, and he was too tired to finish writing. No way, most of the original plots focus on the beginning and end, which are destined to be the most difficult to write.

After writing it and sending it to the group.

Last time, the synopsis was sent to the group for a long time without a sound, but this time it was different, not long after it was transmitted, the screenwriters in the group jumped out one after another and gave a thumbs up.

Shen Yize was very skeptical that they had clicked on it.

At this point in time, with the routine of this group of lazy people, most of them will not watch it.

Only Gu Shu sent a text: "This episode outline, love love." ”

After a while, Wang Fan jumped out: "This is almost a rough script, expand the lines again, and you can use it directly as a script." ”

Gu Shu made a snickering expression: "Shen Bian is reliable in doing things, with your outline, no, the detailed outline, my workload is at least half less." ”