Testimonials

Before you know it, it's over.

Let's talk about the results first.

The book was first ordered 47, which was miserable, and as of the time I finished writing this testimonial, the average order was 1724, although it did not reach the small goal of 2000, but compared to the beginning, it was a great improvement.

I would like to thank all the genuine readers for their support, without your support, this book may not be able to go to this day when it is finished normally; I also want to thank my editor-in-charge Huya, such a miserable first order, and I still gave a lot of recommendations in the follow-up, thank you!

Let's talk about the book.

Writing this book was purely impulsive, because I watched "Heartbeat 3", which made me depressed, so I wanted to write a better story than the original show, and then I conceived "An Yi CP".

I also wrote in my testimonial in the third volume that the core of this book is "28 days of heartbeat", which is all foreshadowing before and all about continuation after that.

According to my outline, I was supposed to write about 1.5 million words, but I ended up writing only 1.3 million words.

Some of the 200,000 words cut are in "28 Days of Heartbeat", which reduces the roles of Feng Le and Yan Zhixi, and some of them are Mr. Shen's career line.

There are many book friends who have pointed out that the career line is not well written, and indeed, I admit that when it was first conceived, it was not serious enough, which led to a lot of problems in the process of writing, and the writing was very tangled, and finally had to cut this part.

The biggest problem lies in the character of the male protagonist.

With Mr. Shen's personality, he is really not suitable to be a cool male protagonist, or rather, he is not a "qualified" copyist, he has baggage, will blame himself, the attention and success obtained through handling, he has never really been proud, let readers substitute such a protagonist, how can it be cool?

But I can't change his personality, because this is related to An Yi's love line, if Mr. Shen is an immodest, pretending and insincere person, then I can't find any reason to make An An like him.

Unless An An's character is also changed, it is changed to a love brain, the kind that can give up all the bottom line for the other party, but that is not the An An I like, and it is also contrary to my original intention of writing this book.

So this is incomprehensible, I have tried my best, but in the existing character design, I really can't write the career line better, so I simply cut it.

Except for the deleted 200,000 words of content, the rest are advanced step by step according to my original idea, overall, I am satisfied, not to mention whether it is well written, at least I present the story in my heart relatively completely, there are no eunuchs.

As a budding author, being able to finish the first book normally is already a good start, and it's worth encouraging, isn't it?

In addition, there are some other problems in this book, the rhythm, the plot setting, I won't repeat them here, after all, you can see that all you have here is true love, and you must not mind these "poisonous points".

An Yi's married life, I will put it in the free fan, updated from time to time, if you are interested, you can take a look.

As for the next book,,I already have a general idea.,Of course, it's still a single heroine.,Different recipes.,Familiar taste.,Good this bite can pay attention to the author's bacteria.,If nothing else,,It should be a new book in November.,Stay tuned.。

Okay, that's all, the mountains are high and the waters are long, we'll see you in the next book!

Good night, Ann~

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