Gentlemen, ladies and gentlemen, ladies who have become gentlemen, gentlemen who have become ladies and gentlemen, ladies and gentlemen who are both ladies and gentlemen, gentlemen and ladies who are both gentlemen and ladies who are not gentlemen.

The following may be a bit long, and let me tell you why there is such a long stretch of the crotch like a eunuch's declaration.

Let me analyze my feelings about writing books in these more than 1,000 words.

It's not just an eye, and I feel that the plot I wrote recently is insufficient.

All the progress in the world of Isher is too rushed.

I overestimated myself, thinking that I could achieve daily changes under the siege of life and writing, and when I forced the code word, the plot was not deep enough to think deeply, and many times I filled in a lot of dry settings written on the outline.

In fact, this problem has been known for a long time.

My first volume of the martial arts world, and the second volume of the Isher world, both have serious problems with insufficient development, and the world view has expanded, but before the characters have begun to stand up and deepen, they are being blown away by the protagonist every second.

Coupled with the preaching plot that has been said to be forced in the early stage.、The situation that I didn't go deep into the martial arts world.,The whole first volume is full of abrupt stops.。

And the character of the protagonist is not very good, and it needs to be adjusted slightly, so that the arrogant heavenly soldier has a good reason and a good sense of substitution.

Speaking of which, there are many people who criticize the protagonist for being too forced to save everything, and I think this may be my personal reason.

When I was writing this book, I happened to use my grandfather's leisure time to code words, and readers who were chasing it could find that some leave notes were issued in the hospital, and even on the day of his death, a single chapter was sent because of mood fluctuations.

Because I have recently experienced the death and illness of my relatives and friends, my resistance to birth, old age, sickness and death has reached the extreme.

When the seriously ill grandfather was dying, even if he already knew that it was a doomed thing, he would still think that a miracle would happen, and that there would be a god, a saint, a party, and something that could save him by incredible means.

It's common knowledge that people die eventually, but maybe I'm not mature enough, and these things are reflected in the book.

I may be angry in the face of death.

Watching the flames light up, people turned into ashes, and only a small altar remained, thinking that people should not be the only ones like this.

How can the excitement of life be limited to this, then let's live forever.

No, come back alive even if you die!

So the article has been blowing about the fairy road and blowing the victory over death, but obviously I am too piggy and dog, and I am blowing crookedly.

In the story of Platinum, I originally wanted to describe a hero story that can save everyone, and there were normal ups and downs when the hero stepped in to stop the crisis-crisis occurred.

But after being affected by life, I unconsciously wanted to solve it before it happened, resulting in the story not unfolding, and the reader was not invested in the incident, so he "snapped!" The sound of the solution was solved.

Maybe it's because Yuwei is too versatile as the protagonist and has destroyed the story structure, or maybe it's because I really have a paternal mind, hoping to have such a super heavenly soldier to eliminate all difficulties in the event of a big crisis.

But the book can't be written like this, it's just that the heavenly soldiers have no brains to bombard all the world crises.

The main idea is true, but the process must be unfolded and the reader can empathize with it.

The images that keep flashing in my head are things that excite me and make me write with interest, and it shouldn't be just that.

No, it should be said that it must not be only to this extent.

If you want to make people immersed, you must not stop at this stage.

Of course, this is also a lack of skill and experience, otherwise it should have been revised a long time ago.

At this point, I can't comfort myself anymore, and if I want better, I can only make changes, and I think the story should not be just like that.

Coupled with the fact that my best friend, mentor, and teacher of life are talking about my life, I feel that I can't be satisfied with this stage.

I took a look at the recent subscriptions, and the drop was obvious, which is the feedback from readers, and of course, the instability and decline of updates are also a problem.

Next, I'm going to take some time to fix and make typos throughout the book, and sort out the plot and development of the rest of the book by the way.

The kind of grades of the dog slaughtering teacher next door are willing to change the text in pursuit of a better self, I'm just a little novice, and there's nothing to lose, why not improve the article!

I am deeply sorry for the more than 200 friends who chase the first time every day, and I can only work hard to quickly improve the quality of the article.

Don't worry about pits, because after sending out this chapter, I'm already in a ruin, and I'm burning with anger towards myself, and I'm determined to make changes!

This chapter is sent out.,Subscribe to it and hang it.,Everything is up again.,But it's just the first book.,It's not the last book in life.。

But I don't want this book to be half-dead after a year's end, at least let me be silent for a month or two to take it to a new level.

Anyway, I don't rely on this book for a living, and I am responsible for my own story when I write this book.

With only one eye, I went out to refine myself, and I will return soon.

Friends, family members, friends of hearts, will be back soon to see you.