Summary at the end of the chapter in Volume II
That's probably the end of the second volume.,It seems a little weird to put the next chapter in this volume.。 So let's write a little more summary at the end of the chapter today, and then reflect on what new feelings you have before changing it.
To be honest, this volume is really a ...... Ill-fated, from September 15, 2021 to March 19, 2022, a total of 289051 words, a little more than the first volume.
During this period, I actually encountered Kavin several times, which is the kind of sitting in front of the computer, opening the codeword software, even if you know what to write in your mind, but you can't write it at all, and then sit there and think about life.
To be honest, I feel that this volume is slightly better written than the previous one, probably because this volume is mainly at sea, and Agnes is not as restricted as she is in Fenerport.
However, there are still many problems, such as the Bodivia incident. I didn't feel it when I wrote it at the time, but when I re-read it later, I found that the rhythm seemed a little sluggish, and I hadn't fully explained the whole thing.
In addition, there are many people who are too slow to escalate...... In fact, from the full text to the present, Agnes became an extraordinary person at the beginning of the year, and it is only late December now. It's just that because I write too much, it seems a little slow. Maybe some side lines should be chopped?
Truth be told, if you really want to level up quickly, it'φ s perfectly fine to eat Agnes raw (>ω<*).
In fact, according to the original outline, Agnes was not in such a good state here, and should even be considered a little half-insane, and Mr. Chester was supposed to be dead. But......
It's a bit hard to get started! (Well, my mother doesn't want to knife her daughter, and the original book is enough for a knife)
But in this way, Agnes is a little too comfortable with her anomaly? It looks like it's being subtly replaced by pollution.
From the previous theories of "Dao Heart" and "Human Heart", Agnes can't actually be regarded as "Huizhen", or only part of it is "Huizhen" for the time being.
The memories she has are "Hye-jin" (the situation of "Hye-jin" will be mentioned in the next volume), and her desires are different from "Hye-jin".
In fact, Agnes only has the same desire to "remember" as "Huizhen" for the time being, so guess this is the "human heart" or "Dao heart" of "Huizhen"? (^_−)☆
Okay, that's all for now.