Selected Questions in the Starting Point Book Review Area (1)
Due to some technical reasons, I can't manage the book reviews in the starting point area, and I can't reply to everyone in the book review area, after thinking about it and thinking about it, I still regularly answer some questions in the starting point book review area in the work-related area, and today is the first issue. Pen × fun × Pavilion www. biquge。 info
Let's talk about it from near to far.
1. First of all, it's not my fault that the book friend house 0 is that I don't want to move: "There are some problems that junior high school students can't understand the content of the book. ”
I didn't think of a better way to do this.,Although I've tried to write it as easy to understand as possible.,But how to say it.,Maybe the writing is still a little lacking.,So that this book friend can't read too clearly.,I'm really sorry.。
2. Next, Taishang Qingyu said: "If it is true, then there will probably be fewer people on the earth, right? This is not bad, people with genetic defects should not pass on their genes." ”
This should be referring to what Lu Liu did, this more radical idea, the author himself is actually not very supportive, so in the end in the book also let Lu Liu fail, how to say, from a scientific point of view, it is better to maintain diversity in genes, good or bad can not be judged purely by our values, after all, we are not gods, and we are just simple people, and we are not qualified to judge the life and death of others.
3. Next, the same Taishang Qingyu book friend asked: "How did you read this?" Original: ∫. ”
This is actually a symbol for calculus, which is an elongation of the initial letter of the Latin summa, pronounced as: "sum", which may be a bit similar to the pronunciation of "oh" in Chinese.
4. The following is what the book friend Longkinus said: "Honestly, it's okay, you can see it." But the second character, the plot drags on, and the strong Japanese animation style is not suitable for the Chinese online literature industry..."
Maybe it's more popular.,Actually, I wanted to participate in this year's starting point light novel essay competition.,It's a pity that the article was posted three days early.,I missed it like this.,It's not suitable for the Chinese online literature industry to say that it may also be the truth.,After all, this book is not very popular.,But that's how my style is.,I should continue to write like this in the future.。
5. The following is a bug raised by a lonely book friend: "Chapter 2 is wrong to say that gravity is centripetal force, gravity is a component of gravity, and the combined force of centripetal force and gravity is gravity." ”
Well, this book friend is indeed right, the combined force of centripetal force and gravity is the gravitational pull of the earth on humans, but for some considerations, there is no intention to introduce gravity at the same time in the second chapter.
6. Mihoyo book friends say like a literary wild dog.
I also wrote about this in the first volume of my testimonials, although I haven't seen the Writer's Wild Dog, but the original intention of writing the book has something to do with the advertisement I saw on the subway when I saw the Writer's Wild Dog, so it's fate.
7. Next is the complaint of the cat nine dead book friends: "1. (This is what I want to complain about the most...) Sentence end modal words. Too much.. Ahhh Those who don't mix that dimension don't necessarily understand what these modal words mean...
2. Personally, I think the plump portrayal of the supporting characters is too much, and each one of them is the protagonist.
Tsk, I'll just complain, the author doesn't have to care too much. ”
First of all, I want to say, don't worry, I'm very welcome to complain, don't mind my mood. The problem of mood words in the first question,I think it's really going to be improved.,I'll try to pay attention to it in the future.,The second problem of supporting character portrayal.,How to say it.,As long as it's a character with a name in this book.,I want to show their characteristics as much as possible.,Although because of the needs of the plot.,There will always be a difference between the number of roles and roles.,But if I can,I want to try to give them more opportunities to play.,So I'm not very willful (*^__^*).
8. The last Uzumaki book friend asked: "This cover is not a Vedigna dancer! How do you look at the comments and not look like K's fandom?"
The cover is Vedeulo, this is a cover that an author friend made for me for free, when he asked me what kind of cover I wanted, I said can I get some two-dimensional breath, and in the end it became like this, I am still very grateful to him for making this cover for me, and there is also a separate book review in the book review area of my creation to thank him. The content is really not K's fanjin.,It's my original story.。
9. Chengbei Zhulin Book Friend asked: "I want to know why the government, the state, and the army did not react, only the police reacted to Lu Liu's actions. ”
There's really a foreshadowing here.,Originally, I wanted the protagonist to reason for himself.,Later, I felt a little troublesome.,It may seem more profound.,Let the protagonist reason out in a simpler way.,I won't spoil the specific thing in the work.。
10. The Red Lotus Alliance's main book friend said: "This book is suitable for publication. ”
I'm really flattered by this, but a little guy like me probably won't have a chance to get published, but I'll write it anyway.
Let's get here today.,Next, I'm going to code the content of the second volume.,The next other book reviews.,I'm free to reply.,I can't reply to you at the first time in the starting point book review area.,I'm really sorry.。