Chapter 91: The Choice (You can just read the first 500 words!)
Chapter Ninety-One: Water, Good Water!
Bai Yi suddenly raised his head, stood up with difficulty, and glanced at Chaoyang. Pen | fun | pavilion www. biquge。 infoAlthough Bai Yi didn't understand why Chaoyang wanted him to die in the floating slaughter, even if he knew, what could he do. Turning his head to look at Dean Rouzhi, a smile suddenly appeared on Bai Yi's face, and Lang Sheng said:
"I can make the dean hesitate for so long, I am lucky to be white!
The smile on Qing Yangtian's face became a little thicker, and he looked at Dean Rou Zhi with a smile:
"Dean, this disciple of yours is really a genius and arrogant, how can you be stingy as a master!
After speaking, Qing Yangtian moved his fingers slightly, and suddenly a row of bright blades was on the necks of Luo Shiwen and the others, and several children were so frightened that they immediately cried even louder.
Dean Rou Zhi's whole person seemed to have been drained of all her strength, her eyebrows and eyes lowered, as if she accepted her fate, and said three words softly:
"I agree!"
"Hahaha!" King Mianyang suddenly laughed unscrupulously, walked up to the white clothes, and said with a somewhat crazy expression:
"Boy, have you seen it, I will kill your family, slaughter your fellow villagers, and level the Minjiang River, so what! I will kill people and be full of evil, and my sins will be monstrous, so what! But if you dare to touch my daughter, I will make you die a good death! Hahaha! You will die with anger in the floating slaughter!"
The fingernails of the white clothes were fiercely buckled into the flesh, and the blood dripped down the deck one by one. The eyes of the white clothes are like black holes, and they are terrifyingly black, but the faces of the white clothes are like a dead ocean, and they can't see the bottom and can't make any waves.
Qing Yangtian took out a black token with some impatience and injected spiritual power into it to activate it. Suddenly, a dark portal like a rotating oval nebula suddenly opened.
The whole person in white seemed to have lost his soul, and walked towards the portal step by step. Suddenly, Bai Yi stopped, turned his head to look at Dean Rou Zhi, whose face was cold and his head was lowered:
"Dean, what do you say it is like to like someone!"
Teasing, it seems to be a little like.
Dean Rou Zhi's eyebrows softened, and she wanted to raise her head, but she stopped again and stood there without saying a word.
"Goodbye then!"
After whispering this, there seemed to be something indescribable in Bai Yi's eyes, and an atmosphere of despair enveloped everyone around him. Bai Yi closed his eyes slightly, his body turned away, and he fell into the portal of the floating slaughter.
"If the white-clothed !! don't take revenge, I swear not to be a man!"
On the ground of the Shexia School Palace, there was a loud roar.
Canglang has since left the Shexia School Palace, and no one knows his whereabouts!
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I'm going to get some water.
This book is almost 200,000 words written here, which is less than a tenth of a novel that is ready to be more than 1000+ lengths.
First of all, let's be clear, the starting point is an entertainment website, not a literary website, so that at the end of the boring work life, a place to find a little fun in your spare time.
So you can see all kinds of interesting brain holes and bad jokes. Some of the works are really high-level, but there's more. How can I say it! I should say that it is not very mature, well, not very mature!
I'm trying to choose a job that I'm happy with in the future, but it seems so difficult right now.
Now let's talk about the book, the name of the book and the editor's bio, which makes many people come in and find themselves fooled. This book is not at all as you imagined in your first impression! And it doesn't have the kind of other books that go all the way to the top of the book for some reason, and all kinds of pretending to slap you in the face. On the contrary, it is a little dull and uncomfortable, simply put, the protagonist is too cowardly, the system is too rubbish, and in the end, what makes people creepy is that the characters in this book are too/vivid. As a God's perspective, we are accustomed to God's thinking, and we are used to looking at various supporting characters, NPCs, and even protagonists like zombies in the novel one after another. And all kinds of fancy flirting girls, all kinds of beauties!
Can I say that I want to write a book that is not a white book!
This is actually not supposed to.,The reader came in just to relax.,Adjust and adjust.,As a result, you release such a thing to scare people.,Seeing that the emperor is getting more and more unhappy.,And adjust your sister!
So I'm trying to find a balance between a reader who is interested in reading and who can have a little bit of insight, and I'm satisfied.
Why can't Xiaobaiwen make people feel it!
Because the NPCs in it are all written by the author with the attitude that they are zombie-faced NPCs, and there is also the fact that many writers do not have enough understanding of their life experiences to write that kind of vivid NPCs and protagonists.
No matter how beautiful it is, it's **** after all!
So I wanted to write a character that was as interesting as any other little white book, but as vivid as a literary novel like the ordinary world.
I myself am also an old bookworm, and I have taken the trouble to summarize and set up a systematic and standardized martial arts system and equipment system. I really wasted a lot of time in order to make these equipment look like they are worth a lot of money in mortals, and to make these martial arts look like they look strong in novels such as the Wild Age. These are actually not important at all in a novel, if a martial artist just tells you its name, and then tells you that it is powerful, pretending to be enough, then what is the point!
Although the effect is much lower than I expected, it is worthy of myself, I don't know how you feel, I hope to leave a book review to give some opinions.
Finally, it's the brain hole part of the book, and now the starting point wants to sign a contract, in addition to cool points and qualified pen power, you also need brain holes.
I'll admit that I don't have enough brains than the strongest readers in history. The system is not interesting enough, flirting with girls is too difficult, and suspense is not attractive enough.
The most critical point is that the main line is not clear enough, and the style changes are too abrupt.
In fact, the main line is not clear because it is misled by the name, and it is very clear to tell you that this is a novel about swords, and the system and formation are only auxiliary.
When the fifth volume is written, the characters may be more realistic, because, the fifth volume is written about the moon in Yunmengze, where huge pits and brain holes are buried.
The ending of the book and the part about the dream earth, you would never guess, is an unconventional novel about fighting monsters and escalating it.
If you don't think I'm strong enough in the suspense part, you can check out one of my street novels, which only has fifty chapters. http://www.qidian.com/Book/1001416270.aspx
Understand that I send red envelopes,
But don't worry, I'll write the suspense part so that you can read it interestingly and not boring.
This book looks like it's going to pounce on it, but I'm sure I'll finish it if I sign a contract.
Finally, and most crucially,
Ask for collection recommendation support!!
(Actually, I can stabilize five updates a day.,But I really can't update it like this.,This book has only now gotten a recommendation.,But I'm about to run three.,I can only reduce the amount of updates in the future.,Maybe one or two chapters a day.,But when it's on the shelves, it's going to explode all the manuscripts.。 This is the first signing book, and as long as the subscription can mix up the level, I will write it with great care. )