"Soul Replenishment" originates from a dream of the author Xiaobing, and it is a new land of pure fantasy. Pen | fun | pavilion www. ｂｉｑｕｇｅ。 ｉｎｆｏ

I remember that the anime "Tale of the Twelve Kingdoms" was not enjoyable enough, so I wanted to make a plot by myself to talk about comfort.

This is the first time the author has written a long article, drafted an outline, and the logical level has been sorted out as much as possible, and each chapter has been carefully revised before release, and there are relatively few self-confessions of language problems or anything.

But the results are not very good after all, and there are very few people who watch the new works.

Fortunately, when the 100,000-word application for signing was actually passed, I would like to thank the editor for his great recognition and encouragement.

It was also the opportunity to sign a contract that allowed the author to understand more, to calm down from the complacency of writing nearly 200,000 words a month, and to examine his work with a sober vision.

After the first recommendation, the results were not good, and I read a lot of excellent works, so I compared my own articles and found "Soul Replenishment" There are indeed some key problems that cannot be ignored: first, the beginning is too bland, and the first three chapters make the reader unable to see the theme of the story, so they naturally cannot arouse interest; second, the language style is not relaxed and interesting enough, although each chapter is seriously revised repeatedly, but only the language and typos are corrected, and the text is always obscure; third, the characters appear too much in a short period of time, and the author himself has to list the tables to remember the different characteristics of the characters, so it is normal for the reader to forget the characters in front when he sees the back, which will of course affect the reading experience, in short, it is too brain-consuming！

At present, it seems that the outline of the story that has not yet been developed is still very long, but the stay of collecting data also makes the author lonely for a long time.

After much deliberation and discussion with the editor, it was decided to suspend the book first.

Dusty Doudou still doesn't want to give up, if there is time in the future, he will make a big adjustment to this work.

On the basis of learning the lessons of the first work, Chenyuan Doudou conceived a new book "Associate Professor of Robots", and readers are welcome to move to appreciate it and see if there is any new progress in Doudou!