Chapter 20 Article Evaluation
Feng Chan is not a pedantic person, and silently took the silver ticket and put it in his arms. Pen, fun, pavilion www. biquge。 info Zhou Yu was even more pleased when he saw this, he was afraid that Feng Chan would think that money was too vulgar, just like those who were full of vassal elegance.
"Brother Feng's article is worth more than a thousand taels of silver, ten thousand taels is not too much. But it's really vulgar to just talk about money, so 10,000 taels will be exchanged for love, and I will help you once in the future. Zhou Yu saw that Feng Chan was a little embarrassed, after all, it was the first time to do this kind of business.
"Brother Zhou is polite. Feng Chan smiled and arched his hand, but the little fat man could speak.
"It should. Zhou Yu said.
After making a deal with Zhou Yu, the relationship between the two was a little better, and then they returned to the classroom one after another. After some contemplation, Feng Chan wrote another article, which also talked about the way of national fortune.
His inspiration was used in Zhou Yu's article before, so this one is not very brilliant, it can only be regarded as a masterpiece. Feng Chan refined the national fortune to cultural inheritance, that is, to open academies, cultivate talents, and constantly stabilize the foundation and pillars of the country.
"Feng Chan, you help Zhou Yu write one, what should I do?" Rong Xiyan turned around and asked, today she put on light makeup, slightly revealing the sexy beauty of women, but without losing the innocence of a girl.
"I wrote another one, which was enough to pass Mr. Wu's assessment. Feng Chan said.
"I didn't mean that, the gentlemen were too lazy to assign homework, and finally Mr. Wu reviewed the article. It's a shame that you use the essence of your essence on others and miss an opportunity to get noticed. Rong Xiyan said regretfully.
Feng Chan looked at Rong Xiyan, today she wiped her light makeup, a few wisps of green silk lowered her eyebrows, and she had a unique charm. Accustomed to seeing the plain face facing the sky, pure and white Rong Xiyan, suddenly seeing her appearance, Feng Chan was somewhat moved.
It's just that when he thought of Rong Xiyan's ambition, the beating flame in Feng Chan's heart quickly extinguished. He smiled and said, "Mr. Wu doesn't pay attention to anything, as long as I have this ability, I'm afraid I won't have a chance." ”
Rong Xiyan saw that he was confident and detached, and his cheeks were slightly red and said: "I know that you are powerful, but pride makes people fall behind, don't let it be." There are many people who have the ability in this world, but there are few who are famous, so we must seize the opportunity. ”
Feng Chan nodded seriously and said, "I understand this, Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon in the academy should indeed be more active." ”
Rong Xiyan was overjoyed when he heard it, and then showed a trace of shyness: "Then can you teach me to write one, I am not very proficient in Taoist knowledge and national fortune." ”
Feng Chan thought that after opposing her ambition, Rong Xiyan would complain for a while, but now it seems that she has forgotten. Seeing that Rong Xiyan forgot about it, Feng Chan was much more relaxed, but unfortunately he had no inspiration.
It is true that there is still much that can be written about the way of national fortune, but most of them are narrow. For example, the economy, politics and military are all related to national fortunes, but they are far less important than cultural inheritance.
And cultural inheritance is important, but it has not started the dispute between heaven and man, and the meaning of yin and yang creation is far-reaching. Rong Xiyan saw that he was hesitant, and suddenly felt aggrieved in his heart, thinking that Feng Chan was unwilling to teach himself.
"If you don't want to teach, forget it, I won't blame you. Rong Xiyan thought that he was still minding about the things of his will.
"It's not that I don't want to teach you, it's that after I wrote two articles in a row, the ink ran dry. Miss Rong, in fact, you don't have to use Taoist scholarship to write, you can also write about your soldier's academics. Feng Chan suggested.
Since this article was arranged by Mr. Wu, many students subconsciously thought that they should write about family learning. But in fact, Mr. Wu did not make a request, and the cultural inheritance written by Feng Zen is not Taoist learning.
When Rong Xiyan heard his explanation, she felt a little better, and then took a deep breath and said, "Okay, I'll write about the military family and the national fortune." ”
Feng Chan smiled slightly: "Hurry up, it will be Mr. Wu's class later." ”
Rong Xiyan suddenly became nervous, turned around and picked up the pen, fortunately, this section is self-study, and there is still half an hour. Bailu Academy brings together hundreds of schools, but the real classes are usually only a few important academics such as Taoism, Confucianism, soldiers, legalists, and farmers. Like the Yin and Yang family, the miscellaneous family, the novelist, and the vertical and horizontal family are difficult to have one class a year, resulting in a lot of self-study classes.
Self-study classes can be indoors to read, you can also go to the martial arts arena to practice, or even wander outside. So when Feng Chan and the little fat man went out just now, no one cared about them.
Rong Xiyan's calligraphy is more atmospheric than that of ordinary daughters, and the splashes of ink are like dancing guns. Her state of mind is constantly improving, and calligraphy and marksmanship are gradually integrated, which makes Feng Chan's eyes shine.
As the saying goes, the sword and the moon stick are guns for a lifetime, and the gun is the king among the hundred soldiers, and it is the most difficult to practice. Rong Xiyan can practice marksmanship to this level, which shows that she is very talented in this area and has also put in a lot of hard work.
"Mr. Wu is here. When the bell rang, the students were a little more excited than usual. Everyone straightened their postures, put the written articles on the table, and waited for Mr. Wu to review them.
When Mr. Wu entered the door, Rong Xiyan put down the brush and turned around and winked at Feng Chan. Feng Chan smiled and glanced at the little fat man Zhou Yu, only to see that his face was full of confidence and he was most looking forward to it.
After saluting, Mr. Wu asked the students to hand in the essay and then watched it without saying a word. The students were all a little nervous, secretly looking at Mr. Wu's expression, and only a few people calmly read the book and waited.
Mr. Wu sometimes nodded, sometimes shook his head, sometimes showed a hint of appreciation, and sometimes looked at it and threw it aside. Some students remembered their approximate order, and when they saw that Mr. Wu was throwing away most likely his own article, they covered their foreheads and almost lamented.
Mr. Wu's literary and Taoist cultivation is very high, and his reading speed is extremely fast, and he can read more than ten lines at a glance. About an hour after the incense stick, Mr. Wu finished reading all the articles, and then raised his head to scan the crowd.
At this time, Feng Chan also put down the book and waited for Mr. Wu's evaluation, saying that he didn't care at all that it was fake. The most nervous is the little fat man, who is looking forward to Mr. Wu's appreciation on the one hand, and afraid that Mr. Wu will expose him on the other.
"I've read all of your articles, and the level is uneven, there are four or five splendid people, and six or seven ragged people. The rest are all general chapters, so let's talk about these four or five people. Mr. Wu's demeanor was calm and calm.
When the students heard his words, quite a few of them were disappointed, and six or seven of them were ashamed. Rengui is self-aware, they know what their own level is, and after being implicitly brought up by Mr. Wu, they immediately lose their sense of expectation.
Of course, there are still a few people who are not self-aware, so there are more than four or five people who are still expecting it. Among them are Zhou Yu, Jiang Yihong, Rong Xiyan, Guan Linglong, Chen Zifan, Bu Wen... More than a dozen people were looking forward to it.
Mr. Wu picked up an article and began to comment: "The way of national fortune, the supreme law of etiquette, this article is well written." ”
Gong Yangyu smiled slightly, because this article was exactly what he wrote. Since ancient times, it has been difficult to distinguish between rituals and laws, and he described rituals and laws together, combining the scholarship of Confucianism and Legalism into one, and wrote this supreme ritual.
"Etiquette and morality, the rule of law, is for virtue. This sentence is well written, it is the essence of the whole article, bow and feather, you come up and recite it. Mr. Wu looked at Gong Yangyu, and he stood up and saluted, "Thank you, sir." ”
The other students looked at Gong Yangyu and showed envy, and Mr. Wu rarely praised others in public. Gong Yangyu walked to the hall under the gaze of everyone, took the article with both hands, and began to recite.
His article is longer, full of 3,800 words, and everyone listens carefully, but they understand a lot of things. It's just that after listening to it, I forgot a lot of things, and it was vague and difficult to describe.
"Sir, the disciple has finished reading. Gong Yangyu put the article back.
"Let's go back. Mr. Wu asked him to sit back in his position, and then said: "Cheng Ye Xiao He defeated Xiao He, this article is good in detail, and bad in detail." After listening to it, did you write it all down, and were you impressed?"
Everyone was stunned for a moment when they heard this, and then shook their heads in twos and threes, indicating that they didn't remember everything and were not profound. The smile on Gong Yangyu's face gradually disappeared, and only then did he realize that he was too eager to perform.
In order to show his knowledge, he searched his intestines and scraped his stomach, and wrote a long volume with pen and ink. I thought that Mr. Wu would praise him for his knowledge, but unexpectedly, he lost in this long volume.
The article is not about the length, but about the essence, more than 3,800 words, covering many studies of Confucianism and law. Even if I read it, I also feel a headache, if ordinary people read it, how can they remember it within a hundred times? Mr. Wu said lightly, listening to Gong Yangyu's ears, it was like a thunderbolt from the sky.
Fortunately, Mr. Wu woke up today, otherwise even if Gong Yangyu is outstanding, I am afraid that he will miss out on lifting people. Thinking of this, Gong Yangyu bowed and saluted: "Thank you for your guidance, and the students will remember it." ”
Mr. Wu nodded, picked up another article and said: "The way of national fortune is also inheritance! This article is also well written, the reason why the human race has come to this point today is that it has been passed down from generation to generation. ”
Feng Chan lifted his spirit, but he didn't expect it to be his turn so soon. This article on the way of inheritance is the second article written by Feng Chan, which is not a certain academic work, but expounds the importance of cultural inheritance.
Rong Xi's face lit up, she had seen Feng Chan's article before and knew that this article was written by him. Unexpectedly, Feng Chan wrote the second article, and he could still be appreciated by Mr. Wu, which made Rong Xiyan feel proud.
"The body decays, the spirit is immortal, the heavens and the earth collapse, and the will endures. This sentence is the essence of the whole article, Feng Zen, you come up and recite it. Mr. Wu looked at him, his eyes still indifferent.
"Thank you, sir. Feng Chan stepped forward under the gaze of everyone, took the article and began to recite.
His essay was relatively short, with only more than 500 words, and it was recited in a short time. After everyone listened, they really woke up, and many people showed admiration and sudden enlightenment.
Even Jiang Yihong, who hated Feng Chan to the core, had to write a word of obedience, and didn't turn his head away angrily. And Rong Xiyan congratulated him, smiling brighter than Feng Chan himself.
Guan Linglong showed a hint of loneliness, and the words of Feng Zen that day really made her sad. Chen Zifan's face was expressionless, he knew that Feng Chan was talented, but he just didn't want to face it.
"I didn't expect Brother Feng to have so much ink in his stomach, and after writing one for me, I wrote another masterpiece. Zhou Yu was completely convinced, and even had some worship, fearing Feng Zen, and hating to burn yellow paper with him.
"Sir, the student is done. Feng Chan put the article back on Mr. Wu's desk, and then returned to his position and sat down.
"Feng Zen this article, the concise meaning of the text is far-reaching, not confined to an academic, it is really valuable. Mr. Wu said a word of praise, and then there was no follow-up.
Feng Chan was still waiting to accept criticism, and he was slightly stunned when he saw this, and that article was not without flaws. There is no perfection in the world, and it stands to reason that Mr. Wu should point out the shortcomings to him.
But soon, Feng Chan suddenly realized that Mr. Wu had pointed out his shortcomings. And that deficiency is hidden in the sentence that praised him, and I am afraid that another person will not be able to figure it out for the rest of his life.
"It's not confined to one academic, I see. Feng Chan sighed in his heart.