Concluding remarks on Volume I
The preliminary foreshadowing is basically completed, and I dare not say how good I have done, but I can say that I have done my best, so on the basis of doing my best, as a newcomer who has just tried to weave his own story, I hope you can understand it with the most tolerant attitude, and I will not say anything more than that, with a clear conscience. Pen % fun % Pavilion www.biquge.info
This volume mainly tells the story of the protagonist from danger to predicament and then to vitality, which happens to form the situation of Alfred's rise, which is in line with the title of my first volume, which is my original idea, as for the process, maybe I didn't do it very well, which is unavoidable, one is the problem of penmanship, and then the problem of confidence - As for the confidence mentioned here, I suddenly realized why other authors can write so well: it is probably because they have a certain readership base and are not worried that no one will read it, so they can unscrupulously outline the world they want, and they naturally and perfectly express what they want to express.
For a newcomer like me, who has no readership at all, I have too many concerns, I am worried that the story will be written slowly, and the reader will not have confidence, I am worried that the story will be written obscurely, and the reader will be impatient, and I am more worried that the story is not well written, and the reader will feel bored, so many worries, coupled with the trouble of data, lead to me may have made some mistakes of one kind or another, just like the story is too fast-paced, like some bridges that should actually be fully portrayed, but I have been carried over by a few strokes, and so on.
I can only apologize, I can only promise that I will not repeat these problems in the next volume, and I will try my best to show you this colorful fantasy world gradually according to the story I want.
Next Volume:
Augustus will go to the Imperial Capital, and he will also appear in the Lich Court, which will be the story I am most eager to write, and it must be a very wonderful story.
Title: The King from the Wasteland.
Volume summary: Write love as a legend of soldiers coming to the city, then, will you come for me without hesitation.
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Finally, thank you to all of you who have accompanied me along the way, and I look forward to you being able to walk with me all the way into this wonderful and interesting world.
PS: Because I complained about a one-star ticket before, several book friends have helped me swipe a few votes in the past few days, I have kept it in my heart, I dare not forget, sincere thanks.