After writing for more than a month, I deeply realized my own shortcomings and the flaws of my work, and felt that the plot was mediocre and tasteless, the plot had no passion and vitality, and there was not much suspense and expectation.

During this time, I read the works of many well-known writers, and I also learned a lot, and after making comparisons, I realized how ridiculous what I wrote.

Not much to say, I'm going to go back to the furnace to rebuild, according to the original setting, some changes, the main thing is that the plot will be all changed, okay, everyone look forward to it.

Expected, uploaded in mid-September!