This concludes the second volume.

A total of more than 200,000 words, not much, but it's also very happy to think about the plot and foreshadowing every day, but it's a little brain-consuming, and even the time to play games is a lot less, and the time is even less.

Let's summarize it first.

Actually, I wasn't very satisfied with the second volume, the front was fine, but when it came to the back and pushed the end of the volume, I didn't handle it well.

Of course, it was also because I was busy tinkering with the family's New Year's wine in those days, and I couldn't concentrate, and there were also periods to see if I could go to Sanjiang, which also distracted a lot of attention, resulting in a bad rhythm in the middle and late stages, and I also felt it.

But fortunately, it came back before it was put on the shelves.,The end of the volume also roughly made a small series of foreshadowing from the second volume and what was left behind in the first volume.,As for some deeper holes.,Will be left behind to fill in.。

But I thought about it, in fact, I can do better, if I don't pay so much attention to the amount of renewal when making wine, maybe the senses will be a little better, and I will learn a lesson from this later.

Also, many people think that the style of writing has deviated from the part where Natsuhiko meets Daigo and Shirona.

Although I gave what I thought was a reasonable way to meet, there were still many people who thought that Xia Yan should not intersect with them as a person, and then I went to ask the opinions of my friends in the group.

In the end, I found that most people who felt a little uncomfortable thought that they should not intersect, not because the plot was unreasonable, but purely because the two future champions met Xia Yan, which was a bit of a price drop and put Xia Yan in a weak position......

Well, in fact, I just want to say that the champions are them in the future, and now their status is not so exaggerated, and their strength is not much stronger than Xia Yan, and they may not even be as high as Azir.

And in the relationship between Xia Yan and them, I also try to ensure the "equal" position, what I give, and what I get accordingly, give the concept of the shield of retaliation, Casey harvests the Shadow Ball, gives Eevee's theory, Xia Yan gains money and the improvement and attention of the senses of the two, laying the groundwork for some things in the future, and at the same time hitching on the line of Dr. Yamanashi.

As for why I wrote about them, as well as Juzi and Liu Bo, in fact, it is to highlight the main body of this volume that I wrote at the beginning, that is, what Mr. "Feng Jicai" said, this is a cognitive change from paper to butterflies, and they are the catalyst for Xia Yan to bring this cognitive change.

And then mention something you may not have noticed (I dug hard, I've got to let you know!). ）

In the first chapter of the second volume, Xia Yan returns and sees the black shadow flashing in the sewers, the ruby of the bartender being watched, the night watch spirit of the "cultivator", the dragon fire fruit being bought on a large scale, the riot process of the wild elves, and even the explanation of the origin of the "Fu worm fruit" eaten by the unicorn insect in the first volume, and the role of the various factors interspersed with the little monk An Ci, etc......

Of course, there are some pitfalls that are not explained in the second volume, such as the waterhole where the fossilized helmet was seen, the identity of old Bill, another person who Tom Aki remembered that he couldn't see through, Master Suzuki, who appeared many times in the first and second volumes, the purpose of the "breeder", Team Rocket's experiments, and so on......

There are some more details that will not be mentioned (so as not to spoil them).

In short, it's a word.

I had a lot of fun digging. (Dog's Head Saves Life)

In the course of the second volume, I also tried to storyboard, and overall my writing felt good, and I may try a little more in the future.....

And then I've said a few times about the content of the third volume.,It's "travel.,Of course, it will also involve an elf.,The name of the volume is called "The Earth That Pulls".,It seems easy to guess.。

However, this volume is mainly to show the elven world, and there should be a lot less foreshadowing, trying to show the different senses of each region, and painting the elven world in my heart.

Finally, I will make a summary of yesterday's shelves.

It's okay, it's up to my expectations, and then I'll talk about the additions that everyone cares about.

I calculated.,There should be 24 more rewards.,A change of 900 on the monthly pass.,Then there's a change later.,That is, 2 more monthly passes.,There are also 19 more for the first and average orders.。

So a total of ..... is owed.

45 more.

.......

Don't say much.,I'll sort out the third volume of things.,Today's update will be a little late.,It's late but it's coming.,Let me take a look.,This is more......

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