Illustrate.
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Maybe I didn't feel much when I wrote it myself, but when the friends in the group and the book review area said it, I also found out a little.
The plot arrangement is a bit too deliberate.
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I summarized everyone's suggestions and then summarized them.
First, these supporting characters want to be the protagonists one by one.
Well, I think that's influenced by my Pokémon complex, and I think the trainers who really recognize each other are the ones who fight with all their might.
The second one, the protagonist always divides things, and he doesn't get any benefits.
This is actually mutually beneficial, but some benefits are not so easy to reflect, such as the support of the Du family, the support of the Dawu Devon company, and so on.
Of course, the reason is that the supporting characters are too little described, and what adventures they have experienced are not written.
The third one, which is also the one that everyone talks about the most, is deliberate.
Well, that's my fault.
It's a little taken for granted, and the plot of the special chapter is too deep.
After all, the mythical beasts in the special chapter are flying all over the sky, and everyone has a divine beast.
Then I thought, with the identities of Wataru, Daigo, and Sirona, it's normal to get one.
Of course, I also tried my best to give reasonable explanations and reasons.
It's just that it appears too often, causing some problems that seem deliberate.
After all, it's because there are too few supporting characters and too little experience.
Fourth, I explain how I arranged it.
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Friends with a heart may have found out that they are about to do something big, so pull them to support the scene.
There are too many follow-ups, so I won't say more.
At last.
Deliberately take up everyone's time to explain.
Thank you for your comments and suggestions, and we will try our best to avoid this situation in the future.
I'll read all your suggestions.
If you can't see it in the book, you can add a group chat, there are still a lot of friends to talk about the plot, and I often copy their ideas.
Writing a new book, the idea is easy to fly, and it really needs to be mentioned.
20,000 pigeons, thank you~~