Three volumes of summary with some things to say
I've written forty chapters, and the results are actually quite unsatisfactory.
Collections, recommendation votes, and reviews have dropped sharply, and the editor actually wants me to cut it and write it again, after all, this book is pretty good in the early stage, but it's only in the early stage......
Harm, it's all tears when you talk too much.
From hatching and birth, understanding the world, stealing bird eggs from the coastline, and subduing the fish-people, I changed and changed all the first ten chapters, from the details to the language disease, the use of punctuation, etc., which almost emptied my language skills.
Long Wen, I don't really know much about this field, but after all, I have had the experience of finishing this fantasy book, and finally found out that ...... Actually, I didn't hold it much, and it was still a little broken.
Some readers say, why do you have so many mental activities for your dependents? Goblins and fish-people have a lot of mental activity, and they seem to be very smart! If you are so smart, how can you get mixed into the bottom race?
Well, I don't really want to write about creatures that are too stupid, because that would make me look hydrographic.
I wanted to write more vividly, maybe I didn't grasp those mental activities, and then I overwrote, so some readers felt that these dependents were too smart and so on.
The demonized goblins, jackals, kobolds, etc., in the back, originally only wanted to write a small transition, but I really didn't expect that I would ...... as soon as I wrote it. I've written so many chapters, I'm so ashamed.
This also slowed down the progress and popularity of this book, and it became a slow-heat article, which indirectly persuaded a large number of readers, my pot, my pot!
didn't grasp the plot and plot, which made this volume a little red tape heavy, and slowed down the overall plot, and this poison point can't be changed.
It's time to stack a little more poisonous magic resistance for all old Shennong readers.
In addition to my own mistakes in grasping the plot, the editor actually silently gave a lot of recommendations, and the book didn't get up, I'm sorry for the editor! Crying T_T
In the spirit of not rotting the tail and the pigeon, I will finish it in tears, but maybe let myself go later?
Readers, please spray lightly!
It is recommended that the magic resistance of the poison class should be stacked!
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