The text has been changed, and the first chapter has been changed again, in order to make everyone watch more smoothly, more comfortable, and more refreshing, of course, there will be no lack of reasonable aspects.

Changing the text is like a father who sees his child grow crooked, and then beats his child a few times in front of all readers.

So the joy of the first time is that everyone is watching a child who has not yet formed a naughty child, and I feel that this father taught such a child!

I hope that when the article is finished, everyone will comment in the comment area: There is a lot of progress, there is a desire to read it, and of course there may be bad voices, but I can definitely bear it.

In addition, the author has a dual personality, so sometimes I don't know how I really changed.

The previous outline and the plot of the characters may be too depressing, heavy, so slightly from the characters' language dialogue, as well as the things they bring, it was changed to a more interesting novel. Let's collect it first, especially young friends.

Of course, I recommend that you read what I wrote before, after all, it was the first happiness!

It's even more difficult to change a chapter and be written a chapter, but it's like this, because the new author is stuck in the middle of the article, and after meditating hard, he changes the text for four days, and each chapter is so difficult, and it will consume more time.

The code of the newcomer author is also relatively slow, and it is only a few hundred an hour. It may take longer to revise the text, and I will scrutinize some things more.

I don't know what everyone thinks of me, a new person who describes too many characters, and I don't know if it's correct to use so many words to describe the characters in my heart, but it's really not a water word count.

Of course, it is very important that there will be no interruptions, but now there will only be one change every day, I hope you will be patient, if you really feel that I should not use so much ink to portray those characters, tell me this novice, let me weigh it well.

Changing the text is like a father who sees his child grow crooked, and then beats his child a few times in front of all readers.

So the joy of the first time is that everyone is watching a child who has not yet formed a naughty child, and I feel that this father taught such a child!

I hope that when the article is finished, everyone will comment in the comment area: There is a lot of progress, there is a desire to read it, and of course there may be bad voices, but I can definitely bear it.

As for why everyone said that I want to start with the Yuding Cave Heaven, or spend a lot of words to write about many people's (water), I can only say that absolutely not.

Everyone knows why I wrote it after reading the text I changed and didn't change, and the book friends who also learned to cultivate immortals have guessed what I want to write about the protagonist's cultivation, so I still hope you can like the stories I wrote, because I only shi8 one can tell stories, and I don't know how to write novels.