I chatted with Glow today, his book is "The Sword Master of Tomorrow's Ark", it's very good, I'm fully booked.

He has 700 per book, and I looked at my 480 per book, which is a bit autistic.

Are all newcomers nowadays monsters?

There's a wind in the front.,There's a glow in the back.,Later, I continued to talk.,I learned that these two are not novices.,Wind has a million-word book before the wind.,Glow is the little god who came over the hedgehog cat.,I'm the novice......

"Return" is written here, and many book friends can see that they are basically filling in the holes, and the book is almost at the end, and there are still two to three volumes on the outline.

The first place to be deeply reviewed is the plot of St. Martin, and it is also the first time that my book has collapsed, although it has since stabilized.

In terms of original characters, Silver Fox is a failure, and the reason is very simple, she is my first alliance leader, and the network water is a bit deep, so I didn't grasp it.

The most intuitive embodiment is the collapse of the follow-up.

I wanted to give up for a while, but I was a little unwilling, so I took the question to Zhihu and asked the toad and the stinky cat, and they gave me confidence, so there is a later plot.

I want to examine myself, and I will examine deeply.

If it weren't for that, it would have been much better than the current results.

But the only thing I can do is learn from my lessons.

In the later plots, the appearance of the silver fox basically promotes the development of the plot, and the participation is very low.

I have been writing this book for a year and a half, and I believe that if I write it again at the current level, the rhythm will be better and the characters will be more distinct.

Thanks again to the readers who have tolerated my mistakes and have followed me all the way to the present.

Thank you.

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Today I have a day off and tomorrow I will resume the update.

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