Since 9.24 to 10.4, "I Want to Ask the Sky" has been continuously updated for a week.

In this week, Xiao has been working hard to update, just to make everyone more enjoyable.

Xiao Bubai first put two boutique comments here:

From Flowing Clouds:

I think the story of the introduction needs to be improved, the specific problem is still a logical flaw, and the order of the narrative, I won't criticize it here, and directly list the settings I think for you, first of all, a dark organization shrouds the world, and the power of the government and the opposition covers the sky with one hand, and there are countless masters in it, and how powerful the leader is - the three hidden powers saw the grief all over the wilderness, and couldn't help but move their hearts of compassion, and they joined forces, intending to fight with one of them - but the leader of the dark organization has the means to reach the sky, The three great powers fought desperately to beat him to a serious injury - of course, the three great powers who were on the verge of death were full of merit and were extradited by the Heavenly Dao as immortals - but the three great powers couldn't let go of the remnants of the dark organization, so they used becoming immortals as a bargaining chip and exchanged for the opportunity to reincarnate again.

Finally, greeting the elders' illness requires a sincere tone and a natural attitude, and the elders must have a heart to share their children's worries, "Dad, your body is not well, you need to rest more." The protagonist hurriedly put down the secretary in his hand, took three steps and made two steps to the father, and was about to go to the house with the father.

Daddy's supported hand held the protagonist's hand, and the free hand shook tremblingly, "It's okay, it's okay!" Your dad and I have something to tell you......"

This review has really benefited me a lot.

It can also be seen from this that the literary literacy of the clouds is also very good.

Comment from Dayfish Abyss:

After reading the first three chapters, I found several problems 1. Segmentation problem, a paragraph is too long, and a paragraph is almost three or four lines if you write an online article, preferably no more than five lines. It's too long, and it's easy to cause visual fatigue to readers. 2. The pace is a little slow, and the highlights of the first three chapters are not very prominent, the golden three chapters, the golden three chapters!! So hopefully a little bit of attention in that regard. 3. More than 1,000 words in a chapter is indeed a bit less, and a chapter of male frequency novels is at least 2,000 words or more. The above is purely a personal opinion, don't spray if you don't like it

In fact, the daytime fish abyss can completely remove the dislike do not spray.

Every comment you have on my work is very important to me.

If you're someone who really likes to read my books, I'm going to spray you.

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Book friends often interact with me in the face of the wind, which also adds interest to my codewords.

The heroine of this book may have come out a little late, but because of the previous plot, it was really difficult for her to appear.

Here the author also apologizes to everyone.

This is the first week of the novel, and it is also the starting point for Xiao Tianxuan and Tang Su Xue'er to begin their adventure.

The follow-up of the novel will be even more exciting.

"I Want to Ask the Sky" is looking forward to your collection!!