The meal time came early, and Zhao Han shouted many times outside the door, but all he got was a reply of "busy", and Zhao Han's face was solemn.

He didn't come out of the room for two hours, and he could only hear the sound of tapping on the keyboard, Zhao Han was worried that Jiang Wen had encountered something?

High school is the era of being handsome in front of girls, and it takes capital to be handsome, if you don't have money...... Mom can give it to you!

This stupid kid doesn't want to get an online loan or anything, the more Zhao Han thinks about it, the more worried he becomes.

In the past, she respected Jiang Wen's privacy very much, and when she went into the house to clean, she would knock on the door in advance and ask the party if it was inconvenient, but today the situation is not right...... She decided to open the door and see what was going on.

And Jiang Qian, who was originally lying on the sofa watching the basketball game, got up to stop it, pushed his glasses against Zhao Han's puzzled gaze, his face was flat, and he said seriously: "Man, there is a man's duel!" ”

"There's a fart duel!" Zhao Han glared at him viciously on the spot.

Jiang Qian: "......"

Zhao Han pressed the doorknob with his hand, and Jiang Qian hurriedly stopped it.

"Old Jiang turned against you!"

"......" Jiang Qian didn't say a word, and dragged Zhao Han out of the house under pressure.

Before leaving, he looked at Jiang Wen's door with a complicated expression...... Son, remember to hide your washboard!

In the next second, the heart was horizontal, the hand was pulled, and the door was closed.

It's hard to be a good person, and it's hard to be a good father.

"Click!" The crisp closing of the door sounded, and the house fell silent in an instant.

……

Jiang Wen didn't know what was going on, he was locked in the bedroom typing on the keyboard, revising the ending written by Shen Yan.

It's been three hours, and he can't figure out why he did such a thing? If you don't write your own novels, what's the deal with helping Shen Yan revise them?

Guilty?

Regret?

…… If you can't figure it out, if you can't figure it out, then you don't want to!

Oh yes!

Do it, you're done!

He renovated the 40,000-word ending written by Shen Yan, and it was not until nine o'clock in the evening that he finally had a chance to catch his breath.

Lying in the computer chair, fingers shaking......

The documentation has been revised, but I don't know what to do with it for a while.

Hair? It is impossible for him to send it, this is written by Shen Yan, he just renovated and optimized the small details on it.

Hair and face? What kind of reason can you send her? said that he fooled her before, and now he is giving advice seriously? Not really.

For this reason, Jiang Wen became annoyed.

Buzz –

When he couldn't make up his mind, his phone vibrated and someone sent a message.

Jiang Wen: "??? ”

【Yan Tilting a City: Documents • DOCX】

[Yan Tilting a City: The First Edition Ending, after I shared it with my book friends, most of them said no. 】

[Yan Tilting a City: So it was rewritten, do you think there is anything that needs to be modified? 】

Jiang Wen: "......"

He guessed that Shen Bingyan sent him a message, and he also guessed that his parents sent him a message, but he didn't expect it to be sent by Shen Yan.

[Yan Tilting a City: This time I want to revise it well, learn your ideas, and then ......]

And then what?

[Yan Tilting a City: Then take all your eunuch books and make up the ending. 】

Burst...! Woman, you're dangerous! Is this looking for abuse?

Jiang Wen knows that some fans are enthusiastic, will be enthusiastic about rewarding, and will be enthusiastic about promoting their works. Dragon Ball reached the third season that year, and after the ending, Dragon Ball fans were unsettled.

So some fans drew a GT fandom ending, giving many Dragon Ball fans an ending - Dragon Ball's power to fulfill all wishes exists in the world, is it good or bad? It was a pretty beautiful and thought-provoking ending.

So Shen Yan? Do you want to emulate Dragon Ball fans? What's the picture? My novels don't have as much influence as Dragon Ball...... Not many people watch the ending well, isn't it a waste of time? And you were scolded so badly, shouldn't normal people just give up?

[Yan Tilting a Chengchi: I read the screenwriting theory and writing skills, and then revised it, it should be better than last time, you ...... Help take a look. 】

Jiang Wensuan found out.

Shen Yan belongs to the kind of people who don't hit the south wall and don't look back, and he decided to make up for the ending, so he should really make up for it, right?

[Steady as an old dog: I'll take a look.] 】

[Yan Tilting a City: Trouble! ] 】

For some reason, he finished reading the second edition.

To be honest, it's even worse than the first version. The first version is Shen Yan's free-to-play version, which is okay. The second edition clearly has a shadow of the screenplay's theoretical format, and the details are as poor as before.

【Steady as an Old Dog: Document•DOCX】

Jiang Wen couldn't stand it anymore.

[Steady as an old dog: Look at this, I changed it for you. 】

Shen Yan wants to make up for the ending, which shows that she has a passion for novels.

He couldn't interfere with her decision, but he couldn't let her go astray.

[Yan Tilting a City: Thank you Gouda! 】

[Steady as an old dog: yes.] 】

Jiang Wen had to admit once again that Shen Yan's emotional intelligence was indeed high.

She didn't break it, why was he able to make a 40,000-word revision in a matter of minutes?

There are things that you just need to know in your heart.

But this kind of understanding will only make him breathless.

[Steady as an old dog: actually ......]

[Yan Tilting a City: What? 】

【……】

【……】

[Steady as an old dog: Actually, I didn't take your first ending seriously, I said it was well written...... It's nonsense. 】

[Yan Tilting a City: I know. 】

[Steady as an old dog: ...... Then you? 】

[Yan Tilting a City: Isn't this a change, I just watched it, it seems to be ...... I kind of understand the plot idea of the dog. 】

[Yan Tilting a City: Thank you. 】

[Yan Tilting a City: And...... This breaks the rules. 】

Jiang Wen wanted to reply, "No, just write it casually", but just after typing these words, he deleted them.

Put down the phone, I don't know what to send......

[Yan Tilting a City: The dog's writing is really good. 】

[Yan Tilting a City: I really want to see the real ending. 】

Shen Yan revealed the topic just now and didn't mention it.

Her real-life character is obviously a science tyrant with few words.

The Internet personality is like a stupid roe deer.

The inner personality of the three-dimensional woman is really incomprehensible.

Like Shen Bingyan? That's a mature woman — as long as she doesn't nibble on a snack.

[Steady as an old dog: Do you want to scold me? 】

Don't be scolded, there is always a feeling of being blocked in my heart.

As soon as the words came out, there was no news on the other side.

[Steady as an old dog: It's okay to scold me for being perverted. 】

[Yan Tilting a City:! ] 】

Jiang Wen: "!! ”

It's coming, it's coming!

I'm going to be scolded!

A little excited...... Grass! This special meow is a bit strange, this line is canceled!

[Yan Tilting a City: Dogs have masochistic attributes?! 】

You've got it!

[Yan Tilting a City: I am also wrong, don't be like this. 】

Shen Yan got serious at this time.

[Yan Tilting a City: Actually, if you don't want to go. 】

And then it started to be confusing again.

[Yan Tilting a City: That's not as good as ......]

[Yan Tilting a City: Teach me to write a novel, right? ] 】

Ha??