On this trip home from school, Jiang Wen felt guilty, is this punishment? There is a faint premonition that one day, he will be beaten to death by Shen Bingyan!

As soon as I entered the house, I was faced with the cold air-conditioning wind, my parents were eating melon seeds and cantaloupe in the living room, and the LCD TV was also on.

In fact, there was no air conditioning in the living room.

My mother, Zhao Han, is the deputy chief physician, and it is normal for the hospital to go out early and return late. Dad Jiang Qian works in a state-owned enterprise, and on the surface he has two days off, but in fact, he works overtime from time to time. Jiang Wen is also busy, going to school early in the morning, returning home at six o'clock in the evening, doing homework after eating, and then washing and sleeping.

Such a home is not so much a home as a hotel, a family of three people comes home, each stays in their own bedroom to play, and the living room where no one moves around is equivalent to a storage room, buy an air conditioner? That's not necessary.

Later, Jiang Wen went to high school, and his mother Zhao Han thought that he would go to college later, and the family would spend less and less time together.

Mother Zhao Han felt that the home was not warm at all, so she discussed with her father to clean the living room, install an LCD TV, buy a central air conditioner, and spend five or six thousand. In this way, this home has a bit of a homely taste.

"Son, come and eat cantaloupe!"

Jiang Wen changed his slippers, and his father Jiang Qian removed the pillow on the sofa, and after vacating the position next to him, he peeled a large petal of cantaloupe.

A family of three just watched TV and chatted about some things.

The good thing is that when my parents chat, they don't mention their grades and don't give him some inexplicable pressure.

The bad thing is that his parents are worried that he will not be able to get married, and they ask him if he has a favorite girl, and other parents are worried that their children fall in love too early and affect their studies. Mom and Dad instilled his concept, but instead he started first, and then suffered, and the good melons were selected in the future, so it was miserable~

In this regard, Jiang Wen has one head and two big!

It's impossible to fall in love, three-dimensional women are terrifying!!

After solving the cantaloupe, Jiang Wen planned to sneak back to the kennel, but his mother Zhao Han asked him to eat first, and Jiang Wen went to get the dishes and chopsticks and wipe the table.

After finishing the meal, go back to the room.

Today, Jiang Wen is no longer busy, he didn't fight the king, and he didn't write novels. His self-control has always been very good, but he has been slacking off for a while, so tonight he decided to review and make up for the basics.

The review of the language is just a matter of repeated recitation.

The recitation task arranged by Shen Bingyan is the classical Chinese and ancient poems in the textbook.

In fact, how to say it, a large part of the classical Chinese and ancient poems in the textbooks are not in the ancient poems of the college entrance examination. There are only 70 classical Chinese and ancient poems in the scope of the college entrance examination.

Therefore, Jiang Wen memorized one of these seventy articles, and he would not waste time memorizing the college entrance examination.

And the review of English is also memorization, the amount of English words is king, there is no word volume to make a foundation, grammar is very familiar, and I can't understand what the four readings of the paper ABCD are talking about.

That night, I memorized a classical Chinese text, an ancient poem, and read fifty English words, and the memorization task reached its limit.

Jiang Wen planned to wash and sleep.

The time to play shower gel is very leisurely, and somehow, I thought of the character of the heroine of the new book of love literature.

No matter what angle you think about it, Shen Yan's method is not feasible, and you still have to find another way.

Why don't you ask the master?

Jiang Wen: "......"

But if you can't do it, you have to be scolded for good food, and you will also be scolded for being a eunuch.

It's just that there's no other way around it right now.

I turned on the water in the bathroom, and after washing, I used a hair dryer to dry my hair, and when I returned to the bedroom, I turned on the computer.

Crackling into the account password, after logging in, he quickly found his master, who loves snacks.

[Stable key immortal: Brother, I have a question for you]

Jiang Wen did not board the tuba of "stable as an old dog".

When Jiang Wen met his master, he used the trumpet of "Stable Key Changsheng".

When he wrote his first novel "Love Comedy", after he released the beginning of the novel, someone left an author group number in the comment area, which is actually - the starting point is not signed with the author group.

At that time, he didn't know about the signing, submission, and process, so he added it with curiosity and took a look.

Inside are some authors who push each other's books, and when they join the group, they first push their own books into the group.

Jiang Wen pushed his "Love Comedy", and many people think that he writes well, but he "loves snacks the most"...... Evaluation - the creativity is very good, very aura, some LV4, LV5 old authors are not comparable, but the basic skills are far behind, it can be seen that they are novices.

is young and frivolous, it is normal, Jiang Wen was not convinced at that time, and added a friend who "loves snacks the most", and refuted it all the time, asking what is the basic skills are far behind?

"My favorite snack", pointing out that his sentences are mixed, and the rhythm of the narrative is not very good, giving people the feeling of fragmentation.

Jiang Wen was not convinced. "Favorite snack", just demonstratively, revised the first 500 words of the first chapter of his "Love Comedy" and sent it to him.

Jiang Wen only knew after reading it that different people wrote the same story, and the effect was ...... It turned out to be very different.

But "I love snacks the most", I like his "Romantic Comedy" very much, and I have been chasing more, and from time to time I point out writing problems in addition to the plot. For example, scene description, use of first person and third person.

Under the guidance of "Favorite Snack", "Love Comedy" quickly reached the height of 10,000 yuan per month, and the author number of Steady Immortal also rose to LV4.

The rank corresponds to the starting author number:

Annual income of 10,000, LV2.

Annual income of 20,000, LV3

Annual income of 50,000: LV4

Annual income of 150,000, LV5

Jiang Wen is a self-aware person, and he knows very well that without the help of "favorite snacks", it is impossible to write the first book to that extent.

He felt that "Favorite Snacks" would not be the same as him, and then he learned that "Favorite Snacks" was an LV5 author, a mixed new group, and an old author who guided immature and promising authors.

"I love snacks", I liked his funny stories and his enthusiasm.

So, this is the beginning of their story of being a teacher and a friend.

It's just that "Favorite Snack" doesn't like Jiang Wen to call him master, and only asks him to call him brother.

……

Not long after the message was sent, "Favorite Snack" replied.

[Favorite snack: Brother, are you having a problem again? 】

Jiang Wenzheng wanted to ask questions about the character design, but several messages were sent on the other side.

[Favorite snack: angry! 】

[Favorite snack: another eunuch! ] I have been raising "Treading the Starry Sky", but it turns out to be a eunuch? 】

[Favorite snack: You're a little short! 】

【Steady Longevity:...... Still, okay. 】

Jiang Wen had already expected that he would be scolded as a eunuch dog.

After scolding.

His master sighed.

[Favorite snack: I don't know if I asked you not to continue writing "Romantic Comedy", whether it was a right or wrong suggestion. 】

At that time, Jiang Wen couldn't think of a follow-up story.

The advice given by "Favorite Snack" is that if you don't write it, you can write it forcibly, just like drinking milk tea and eating ice cream at the same time.

Jiang Wen actually doesn't understand what kind of metaphor this special meow is, which probably means that it will be very bad if it is forcibly written??

[Steady Immortal: It should be correct. 】

[Steady Changsheng: Actually, this time I want to write another love essay, but I have encountered problems with the character design. 】

[Favorite snack: Say I'll listen to it.] 】