The first volume of "Enthronement and Emperor, Sweeping the Troubles" has finally been written here, and the next volume is about to enter the next volume "The Wind Rises and the Waves Rise and Isolate the Thousand".

Looking at the title of the volume, I also know that it is necessary to expand the map to the entire Canglan Realm, and then vigorously develop the human race, and there will even be some plot lines in the world as foreshadowing.

The previous chapter of "The Great Wilderness" has actually been foreshadowed.

emmm, speaking of which, the limerick at the beginning of the first volume has basically been written.

The fire and rain soldiers rose in the sky, and the blood was not dried up against their fate. It is written to fight against meteorites, activate the Qi Luck Gold List, and get the Reverse Fate Gu.

The mountains and rivers are covered with wind and rain, and the sun and moon set on the Ning River. Speaking of Li Fu's edict, encircling and suppressing the protagonist, the two sides fought with the Weining River as the hub.

The end of the dynasty is built on a high platform, and the end of the world is on a list. After ascending the throne, he built the Shenglong platform, sealed the Zen ceremony, and announced the three lists of heaven, earth and man.

The new policy has been established, who said that Daxia is in its last years. With the stability of the court, various policies have gradually been rolled out, and the luck has been continuously enhanced, and the interior of Great Xia has been completely stabilized by this point.

As for whether or not to write a poem at the beginning of the next volume.,To be honest, I haven't thought about it.,I don't know what the effect of this thing is.。。

The preview is done here, briefly talk about the reflections in the writing process of the first volume, and if you are not interested in reading it, you can click ×~(Ψ( ̄∀ ̄)Ψ)

As the collection continues to increase, the number of people who spray me also increases, of course, there are many people who help me speak, thank you readers here!!

To be honest, some of the comments are really mindset-up.

At first, I would argue a thing or two, and then I became more and more lazy to say it.

Of course, I will basically reply to those comments that are well-founded and objective.

In fact, I know that many readers who really read this book do not comment much. So I also tried to keep myself from the comments, at least not because of those comments that would cause the main line to deviate.

That's the real collapse.

When it hits the shelves, I'll consider building a readership where real book friends can communicate.

I'll leave it at that.

It's normal to find a novel, I don't like to read it, there are so many books at the starting point, it's good to go out ×, there's really no need to find fault here.

Especially some of the comments, there is really no logic.

For example, some people say that they are disgusted when they see a female general.

If you are disgusted, you will be disgusted, so don't look at it. I like female generals, if you have a female general PTSD, I recommend not reading it.

For example, someone asked: "I learned to make paper in high school, why can't I get to the protagonist?" ”

Wouldn't anyone really think that they could make paper after reading a textbook?? Then all I can say is that you're awesome, and I won't anyway.

Another example is that someone commented that after the protagonist crossed over, he didn't find out that he had become Fusu, did he have a brain in water.

It's strange that there are inhuman alien races with three heads in this world, a military spirit that can turn into a red phoenix, a Great Xia Dynasty, and a chaotic war between the five kingdoms (note that it is not the Seven Kingdoms).

I'll just ask, why do you think you've become Fusu? Even the name is different.

And so on and so forth...... There are many more similar comments.

Some plots aren't very well written, I think.

But some plots just have their own ideas, and those who are not used to watching can not watch them.

Of course, I have to admit that many frameworks are based on Daqin.

Because I like this dynasty, I also regret that II died. (There are both chance and inevitability in this, so I won't talk much about that.) ）

However, what I want to write is a Xianxia text, not a historical text, so I use an overhead setting.

Because the Great Xia Terran is not a planet that can be confined to it, if it is written as Great Qin, there will be many logical inconsistencies, and it is estimated that the controversy will be even greater.

Readers should be able to see this.

That's all for the complaint, let's formally reflect on the shortcomings of the first volume.

Regarding the problem that Qin Zhao did not cultivate, this is indeed related to the setting and cannot be changed.

Because the cultivation of the Canglan Realm is useless, not to mention the military spirit, it can't prolong its life. Everyone is so busy, the prince has more things to learn, how can he have time to cultivate?

But I should have simply mentioned it at the beginning, rather than just ignoring the past, which is my pot.

At first, my idea was to talk about the setting as the plot progressed, without interspersing useless things, and increasing the sense of substitution.

However, it seems to have the opposite effect, so I will pay attention to it later.

Then the following focus is here, the most crotch-pulling plot.

The Three Heads invaded that section.

Speaking of which, I'm not afraid of everyone's jokes, I was a little proud at first, and I thought it was quite touching to foreshadow.

But as it turned out, it was stupid to write like that.

Because the novel is serialized, it is suitable for independent foreshadowing for too long and the protagonist does not come out, which will make the reader very uncomfortable, and it is very similar to the number of words in the water.

After all, readers don't know the follow-up plot development, and the long-term perspective is not very bad for the protagonist, at least there should be more interspersed interactions.

So when I wrote it later, I had to compress the plot.

In short, I will pay attention to both of these issues in the future. And most importantly, I pay more attention to the rhythm.

The next volume should be a lot more exciting.

More luck collections, more characters, will appear one after another.

The secrets of the Canglan Realm, the confrontation pattern of the Upper Realm, and the cause of the death of the former emperor may also show some of it.

Within the human race, the results of the reform in all aspects of Shinong's industry and commerce will also be shown little by little.

Of course, it also includes the Alien Fire Ji, the National Fortune Sword, the Sun God Son, the White Yujing of Tongtian, etc., and the secrets in this will be revealed~

If you have any good suggestions or objective criticisms, you are welcome to let me know.

Finally, I would like to ask readers for their continued support and thank you!!