Although the results are not good, no one looks at it, but still make a summary.

After the creation of the last book, I thought that the book had a poor grade, but as a result, the book was on the shelves, and it was even more disappointing, and even, there were no readers, a few friends subscribed, and some free websites, there were only about a dozen......

Originally, I started thinking about writing Oriental fantasy.,Later, I saw that the recommendation of this Western fantasy was more sufficient.,I wrote the Western Fantasy.,Hurriedly prepared.,Hurriedly uploaded.,Of course, the result is unsatisfactory.,More than 200,000 words before the shelves.,The collection didn't break a thousand.,When I put it on the shelves, I thought that if there were a hundred subscriptions.,It's absolutely safe to write it down.,There are forty or fifty subscriptions.,At least one can write him a million hundreds of thousands of words.,As a result,Very disappointed.,Ten didn't exceed.,In fact, it can be seen from the recommended votes before the shelves.,There aren't many recommendations.,This result is not expected.,It's just confirmed that my heart can't help but be a little gloomy. 。

Before the shelves,Because of the impact of the results,The update speed is getting slower and slower.,On the shelves.,This result,It's a mess in the head.,The outline that I didn't grasp well.,It's starting to be a little messy.,The feeling of no one applauding is not good.,So,After supporting a little time.,I thought about finishing the book.,Give an ending.,The ending has long been thought about.,It's just that it suddenly came out.,There's a lot less in the middle.,It's abrupt.,So I've been thinking about trying to improve it as much as possible.,Finally, it's finished.。

This ending, similar to that of the previous book, is only greatly modified, and it is also a fantasy of the game, but the foreshadowing of the intermediate process has not been completed, so it is a bit abrupt.

Bad grades.,Can't blame others.,Recommend a lot.,Can't blame the category sub-category.,The same Western Fantasy also has a book with good results.,Maybe it's because of persistence.,Or maybe because of the speed of the update.,The most important thing is the problem of its own writing.,So the grades are poor.,Probably because the writing is not good enough.,My words are too verbose.,The narrative is vague.,This is about the biggest shortcoming.,Write a datong but haven't touched on the theme.,So a lot of people can't bear to continue after a few glances.,The story conceived in my heart is good.,But there's a problem with the expression.,Didn't express the meaning.,That's probably because of the writing.,So,The next book must be strengthened. 。

At the same time, in the past two months, most of the time in writing a new book, the new book has learned a lesson, do not write a good beginning, do not send out, maybe think so much time, must have a lot of manuscripts, at the beginning, do write a lot, there are 100,000 words, but I am not satisfied, revised once, only 60,000 words, after a period of time to read again, and dissatisfied, changed again, only 40,000 words left, every time I change it, I send it to the mobile phone to read, see the inappropriate words or expressions, mark it down, modify it on the computer...... This came and went, and by the time it was sent to the editor to read, it had been changed about four or five times, but the editor was not satisfied, and after waiting for a while to read it for himself, it was indeed unsatisfactory, and it was revised again, and now it is only 20,000 words......

The process of revision is painful, and it is easy to wear out people's interest and patience, I used to revise to the point where I didn't want to revise, and it was going to be done, but now I ignore it, and wait until I have a little interest before continuing, so the speed is not fast, if I always write unpopular works, it is better not to write, so I used my thoughts.

Well,A little disheartened.,A few words of nonsense.,That's it.,I hope you see it seriously.,Wait for the new book to come out.,To support the collection recommendation.,If it's still okay.,Please support it.。 (To be continued.) )