PS: I wish you all a happy Lantern Festival, and here I answer five questions from readers

1 Benson

I read what a friend said about Benson, which I just wrote yesterday at the beginning of a chapter about Benson's play, and I promise it wasn't because I read a book review that I suddenly remembered this supporting character.

2 Aubrey and Angelo

Simple version: If necessary, I will continue to add the title after the name of these people, so that readers can distinguish and improve reading fluency.

Verbose version: Regarding the confusion of the names of Aubrey and Angelo, in the front of the book, I tend to add the title of the priest after Angelo's name, usually the five-character 'Angelo priest', and Aubrey will write it as 'Aubrey the political officer', sometimes I want to write too much and the reader may feel bored, and there will be a suspicion of filling water, so I am left with a few words of the title, if there are readers in the future, I can continue to write their titles, so that readers can identify.

In addition, I hope that I can portray the personalities of the two in my later writing, so that it is not easy for readers to confuse the two.

3 The author is unable to distinguish between the problems of Aubrey and Angelo

I apologize first, due to my own negligence and unfamiliarity, there may be such a problem in the book, which affects the enjoyment of readers, I will review and revise, and I will pay more attention to the writing later.

4. The protagonist is too cowardly

I may not be able to solve this problem for the time being, because after all, there is only one reader reaction now, and this problem is too far ahead, and it is too troublesome to change, and the rhythm of my writing is that each story is pushed out by the previous one or the previous one, so many times if you want to change it, the back side needs to be modified more or less. I'm still a little lazy myself, so I'm sorry to you.

5. The progress is too fast

I attributed it to the fact that my ability to make up stories was too poor and unfamiliar, and in some places I felt that my skills were too insufficient to write, but I was writing hard for the sake of plot development, so the endings and transitions in some places were too rough. I think it may not be changed for a while, but it will become sleek and mellow as I write more.