What happened to "Bu Xianzun"? Criticism and correction are implied.

Thank you for silently supporting the thirty clicks of "Bu Xianzun", it has always been more than thirty with the growth of "Bu Xianzun", Youlan almost never goes to advertise in other people's works, nor does she go to the forum to post, silently update 2,500 words a day, more than 100 days have never been interrupted, however, more than 100 days of persistence have never been able to exchange for the explosion of popularity of the work, here, Youlan implores everyone who has been paying attention to "Bu Xianzun" to tell the truth, no matter what you say "Bu Xianzun" is worthless, Youlan wants to hear the truthWhat's wrong with this book?

Is it really rotten to the level of only elementary and middle school students' essays? Or is it the foreshadowing buried by the blue that everyone doesn't want to know the result at all?

I implore you to hold or fall, give some advice, Youlan is very confused and confused now, what is wrong with this novel, the article of the great gods Youlan has to go to read, there will be a gap, but the number of hits is miserable to more than 30 a day, such a gap is inevitably too big, what is going on?

Push the seal for two weeks in a row, break 1,000 clicks a day, after the end of the push, it will immediately fall back to more than 30, if there are no 30 clicks, you blue don't know what motivation to persevere, although these 30 may only be a dozen people repeatedly refreshed.

Give some advice.,I beg you again.,No matter what you scold a couple of sentences.,This novel is a downright rotten street in your eyes.,You say it.,At least Youlan still has a chance to correct.,Youlan has now gone into a misunderstanding.,I can't see where the deviation is.,I can't find the reason why I can't keep readers.,I can't find the reason for the failure of more than a hundred days of clicks that are still maintained in more than 30.。

There are a lot of radical words said in the post bar.,People will always make mistakes when they're about to collapse.,Youlan is no exception.,Readers have something to say that what is written in it may hurt the readers who have been silently supporting "Bu Xianzun",Here,Youlan sincerely said,I'm sorry,I'm sorry for everyone.。

A lot of people persuade me, saying that writing things needs to endure loneliness, in fact, Youlan is not lonely, but the time for playing games and watching movies is allocated to writing novels, so Youlan's life has become very boring, and it's just boring, sometimes Youlan will think, be lazy, go play online games, watch variety shows, anyway, it doesn't have much impact on a few days, more than 30 clicks, you can afford to lose, but every day after work, you will turn on the computer, and force yourself to catch up until you go to bed, this kind of life is very tiring, I felt that I was working overtime, and I hadn't been able to get the boss's affirmation after working overtime, so I started to feel depressed.

A few months after writing "Bu Xianzun", Youlan is very idle at work, and there will soon be new jobs and cases handed over to Youlan, and there is less and less time to be given to "Bu Xianzun", I'm afraid that I will give up, after all, under the double pressure of work and writing, Youlan will choose to give up one of them, in the face of real life, the preference for writing will become very pale, and more interaction will be given to Youlan, take up a little bit of your time, reply to a post, talk about your thoughts, give some corrections, I really don't have to talk about it, guess the plot that will happen in the next chapterLet's make the book review area lively, please.

Downtown blue respectfully