"In addition, you can simply get out of here and look up to the world from the height of the other side."

"Should I go and save? Should you choose silence? ”

"In the modern world, God is dead, faith is scarce, the world is peaceful, people believe in the supernatural to entertain boring time, and they are powerless to save themselves. If an individual is not yet enlightened and saved, how can he beg others? Hold a small boat, find an isolated island, and bring back a heart that may have long been withered and hopeless? Everything is gone on this shore, and there is a vast expanse on the other side......"

"In order to realize the value of life, I ask questions about life, from whom I save to who retreats to who saves me, and then to save myself and others."

"After repeated retreats, there is still no correct solution."

"In order to find the meaning of life, in order to understand the immutable truth of the universe, I entered the text."

"From words to philosophy, from the cultivation of people to the view of history, I feel that there is no way to hide, there is no escape, I am painful and tormented, but I still have not received the answer......"

Above.

It is the upper part of Lin Bei's composition.

The so-called layman looks at the lively, and the insider looks at the doorway.

If you don't know much about composition, you must feel that this composition looks like that, and there is nothing surprising about it.

Compared with those Chinese writing and oracle bone writing on the Internet, it is really much worse.

In contrast, those classical Chinese and oracle bone writing are the real earth-shattering ghosts and gods.

However, that's purely for the layman.

A real insider, when he looks at this article, must be the kind that his eyes light up and he can't take his eyes off it.

After all, Lin Bei was able to start from a simple and difficult material fable to arouse endless thoughts about the unknown fate of human beings, so he boldly diverged his thinking.

I think of the emptiness of human intellect, the emptiness of religion/religion, and the catastrophe at the end of life, and then experience the emptiness of existence and value on the other side of fiction.

There is no doubt that Lin Bei writes very well.

The logic is clear, the thinking is thorough, and the most important thing is that the vision is broad enough, the pattern view is big enough, and the thinking is deep enough.

One question, two questions, three questions.

The questions are all about the truth of the universe, which corresponds to the first four words of the essay question, namely: "The Great Question of the Universe".

All in all.

The first part of Lin Bei's essay is good enough, and anyone who sees a high score can't run.

If the score of the competition is also calculated according to 60 points, then it is at least 50 points at the beginning.

As long as it's not too anticlimactic, it's very easy to score more than 55 points.

However, if you want to score 58 points, 59 points, or even full scores, it depends on the skill of the lower part.

It's obvious.

The first part focuses on the "Great Question of the Universe", and the next part should start writing the four words "Solve in the World".

And that's exactly what happened.

I saw Lin Beida's pen wave, and the second half of the content quickly jumped on the exam paper.

"Fortunately, because of a certain human and spiritual character, we will eventually be reconciled to the world."

Like a child born from the warmth of the soil, at a certain moment he will surely yearn for the vastness and lightness of the sky. ”

"Using death to correct life and using the universe to gain insight into life is a catastrophe that thinkers cannot escape."

However, if in order to meet the final nothingness, in order to satisfy the essentially selfish desire for knowledge, we are indifferent to the world, abandon the family responsibilities of our children and husbands, and ignore the social responsibilities of our sorrows and responsibilities, this is not worthy of being called reverence for life, but only an escape from the objective reality of life.

"Therefore, the lost fishermen will surely let the waves carry them back to the hut on the shore in silence, and the fragrance of the lettuce in the house will come to their faces, dissolving the heaviness and toiling of today, and the warm eyes of their wives will bring them back to the truth, to the world."

"My own meaning, my own value, and my own perseverance should be in this house, this ship, and this house. Even when they go astray, they recognize themselves and see life clearly. ”

So far.

The article is almost over.

After all, [solution in the world] is already clear and clear.

After asking all the big questions in front of him, Lin Bei finally gave an explanation, that is, [solution in the world].

That is, "people-oriented" is a serious attitude towards life, and it is the supreme magic method to transform the body and mind towards infinite freedom.

Instead of thinking about the meaning of life, it is better to stick to the value of life conscientiously.

No doubt.

This central idea is absolutely positive, and people can't help but want to applaud it.

Tsk, what a beautiful composition!

In just over 1,000 words, it vividly shows the in-depth thinking of science and religion, as well as the pursuit and solution of the meaning of life, which is really wonderful.

It is estimated that no matter which grading teacher sees it, he will give a high score of 58 or even 59.

In addition, Lin Bei's hand is either leaning or upright, heavy or light, and there is a good word with the beauty of "coming like thunder to collect anger, and it is like a river and sea condensing clear light", it is not too much to add 60 points, right?

Well, a perfect score is 60 points.

If nothing else.

This essay will definitely allow Lin Bei to win the first prize of the school and the first prize in the preliminary round of the innovative essay competition.

After all, none of the people present except Zhao Qinghan should be able to write such a charming article.

Even looking at the entire Lincheng, and even the huge Yinyue Province, there are few people who can write at the same level.

But.

Lin Bei did not stop writing.

Instead, he just stared at him and wrote the last paragraph on the answer sheet meaningfully.

After all, the number of words is not enough, and at the end of this, Lin Bei always feels that there is still a lack of fire.

It is necessary to summarize it again, and sublimate the main idea of the composition, so as to eliminate the unexpected.

It's not that there is a high probability of getting a perfect score if nothing else, but that you must get a full score and win a prize.

After all, he also took on a task with the system.

Only by winning the first prize will you be rewarded with ten vials of vitality potions and a mystery pack.

So he doesn't refer to it.

Since it is referenced, it is natural to do the best.

I saw only the last paragraph...... No, no, no, to be precise, one of his improvised poems is as follows.

"Then the poet was no longer silent, and the low groans became high-pitched songs, and I stepped out of the mire of thought and recited the poems that I had written with love after enlightenment......"

"The end of the law hesitated for no reason, and asked diligently and sadly."

"The heart and blood are dry and the sky is silent, and the west wind is scattered with a thousand sorrows."

"Throw away the poetry and clear clouds, and lament the old scholars."

"What's the end of the embarrassment? Sex can't bear to be perfect. ”

"What's the regret of not saying goodbye? I only hate to be ambitious in my life. ”

"The pen is heavy, the article is thin, and the stroll is self-defeating for a long time."

"It should be a four-fold volume of Kyushu, and look up to the freedom of the world."

"The five aggregates are empty, I don't turn, I move mountains with one force to save the last customs!"

That's right, Lin Bei continued to write such a small poem on the basis of the original ending.

Suddenly, this is forced, ahhh

With the last word falling.

Lin Bei finally put down the pen in his hand and exhaled a long breath, "Huo, it's finally done, although this essay is not difficult to write, it at least cost me nearly seventy percent of my strength." ”

"After all, it's just a preliminary round of school competitions and innovative essays, so you should be able to get a full score for the first prize!"

"Even if there are too many masters participating in the competition, it doesn't matter if you can't get the first prize in the preliminary round of the innovative essay competition, you only need to get the first prize from the school, and the system reward will be in hand."

“～(￣▽￣～)(～￣▽￣)～！”