Lin Bei's essay was written more.

I saw that Zhao Qinghan's composition was condensed as follows......

[May you have peace of mind, and your white head will never leave].

"Mr. Brain."

"I'm the most loyal to your heart, do you know what happened to those three fishermen?"

"Because there were no clues, the first fishermen gave up looking, and they kept telling themselves every day: 'It's too late, it's too late.'" But it didn't work. ”

"From the day they picked up the bottle, they began to have the same dream every night: 'A man who cannot see clearly sits alone on an island, everything is dim, and only a pair of black eyes are staring straight at them.'" ”

"They're woken up every day. ”

"Later, because of mental weakness."

"The first fisherman was drowsy every time he went out to sea, and a small storm cost his life."

The second fisherman reassured himself that someone must have come to him, but he still had nightmares, and on the last night of his life he finally saw the man's face—and it was himself.

"Only the third fisherman, convinced that 'it is neither too late nor too far,' embarked on a journey to find the man. Every corner of the world was not spared, but until he was gray-haired and old, he found nothing. ”

But the strange thing is that he is lying on the hospital bed, but there is a faint smile on his face. Looking at his relatives around him, he muttered to himself, 'Then now I can say that I am at ease, that person has probably been rescued a long time ago.' Then he breathed. ”

"Of course, I believe that Mr. Brain, you must have seen that the above is purely my fiction, but I have no intention of teasing you, just to say to you something that I have been thinking about for a long time: 'Whether you do it or not, I just want to have peace of mind.'" ”

“……”

"Of course, I said so much, I just want to tell you: you are still young, you will do it when you think of it, and now you are so uneasy, do you want to spend your life in regret if you can't reach it in the future?"

"Which fisherman would you like to be?"

"Do you want to trap yourself on a desert island in your heart, or can you smile and say "it's worth it" even if your efforts are in vain? ”

"Also, my heart is going to be with you for the rest of your life, and every time you regret it, I tremble and beat violently."

"You don't care if you think too much and take up too much brain capacity, I'm going to have a heart attack."

"I am willing to accompany you for the rest of your life."

The above is Zhao Qinghan's composition.

Is it difficult?

It seems to be very simple.

Is it easy?

It's also very interesting, and if you don't have a certain ability to think and innovate, you really can't write such an essay.

Lin Bei said it before.

Zhao Qinghan's style is a little demonic, and this is true.

If you want to talk about the difficulty and depth of the composition, Zhao Qinghan's composition is really not as good as Lin Bei's.

can be on a par with innovation.

The most important point is that Zhao Qinghan probably didn't put much effort into writing this essay.

Lin Bei used seven successes to write that essay, but Zhao Qinghan used three points of her strength to support this essay.

But the effect is almost the same.

All the grading teachers present, one of them counted one, and they were all shocked after reading it.

"These two essays are excellent!"

"A [cosmic question, solved in the world], and a [wish to have peace of mind, never leave]."

"Let's not talk about anything else, just these two titles, which are very innovative and refreshing, and very much in line with the theme of this innovative essay contest for middle school students."

"Of course, the most important thing is this content, both of them ask first and then answer, although the style is similar."

"But Lin Bei went from big to small, from the emptiness of human intelligence, the emptiness of religion/religious belief and the catastrophe of the end of life, and then experienced the emptiness of existence and value on the other side of fiction, and finally came to the answer, everything should be 'people-oriented'."

"Not only is the central idea positive and perfectly in line with the topic, but also the logic is clear to the extreme, the thinking is meticulous to the extreme, the vision is broad and infinite, and the pattern is grand and lofty."

"And Zhao Qinghan is a fictional heart to ask the brain, anthropomorphize the two organs of the human body, from small to large, and perfectly combine the materials, through the continuation of the ending of the Three Fishermen, in an allegorical way to launch the theme of 'willing to have peace of mind, white head will never leave'."

"Although Zhao Qinghan's composition is not as big as Lin Bei's in terms of pattern, it is the simplest way to write the most interesting composition, which can be described as a peerless."

"Needless to say, both of these essays are given a full score of 60, which shouldn't be excessive, right?"

"That's only 60 out of 60, otherwise, I would like to add a few more points to them."

"After all, I can write such a perfect composition in two hours, not to mention, and there is not a single typo, the volume is extremely neat, and the handwriting is extremely perfect."

"At first glance, it's pleasing to the eye."

"If you take a closer look, it's like tasting a cup of tea, the more you taste it, the more mellow it becomes, and people can't extricate themselves from it."

"This article is really good!"

"Even if all of us here give us more than half a day's work, it is difficult to write such a masterpiece."

"This Lin Bei and Zhao Qinghan are worthy of being the top talents in our school, and they are the top ...... in learning."

"Oh no, the words genius and scholar are no longer enough to describe them."

"It's a genius above a genius, a monster, a ghost and a demon, a super god above a scholar."

"If you get these two people, you can win the world's ......"

"Ahem, it's the two of them, it's definitely the best of our three, this innovative essay contest, not to mention the first prize in the preliminary round, is not a big problem in the semi-finals."

"( ̄y▽ ̄)~*Cover your mouth and snicker......"

At this moment, the dozens of teachers present couldn't sit still, and they were all happy.

The previous solemn mood was also swept away.

Even if the vast majority of people are only thirty or forty, forty or fifty points, what are you afraid of when you write?

Now that Lin Bei and Zhao Qinghan are here, they even hope to win the two grand prizes in the Innovation Essay Competition.

This is absolutely beautiful for the third middle school.

After all, that's a grand prize!

There are not many senior high school students across the country who participate in the preliminary competition, and there will be ten provincial first prizes in the end.

Then 340 people from 34 provinces will participate in the national finals, and there will be ten grand prizes in the end.

It is no exaggeration to say.

These ten special prizes, together with innovative composition, are the ten strongest among nearly 10 million senior high school students in the country.

And these ten strongest people, now the little three in the small city have the hope of occupying two of them.

Naturally, everyone present was extremely happy.

Although Lin Bei and Zhao Qinghan were not taught by them, they are also honored to be in the same school!

Not to mention, in addition to Lin Bei and Zhao Qinghan, there is also Zeng Xi, who can win the first prize in the province.

Gee!

This time, the third middle school is really going to be released.

If Zeng Xi can perform well in the finals, and win the first prize with extraordinary performance.

The people present are estimated to have fun for three days and three nights.

Of course, the happiest person has to be Mo Mo, the head teacher of the fourth class, but she doesn't know it for the time being.

And the most unhappy, there is no doubt that it must be someone who thinks he is unique.

～(￣▽￣～)(～￣▽￣)～。