That's right.

This essay question is as simple as that.

One word [poor], the style is not limited, and the consciousness is to write whatever you want, such as arguments, narratives, operas, interviews, letters, dialogues, novels, poems, etc.

Is it difficult?

Of course, it's not difficult, after all, the title is given, although it is written around the word "poor", and there is no need to worry about deviating from the topic because you can't find the central idea.

From this point of view, the difficulty of the essay questions in this final seems to be far less than that of the preliminary questions.

After all, in the preliminary round, I could find a section of three fishermen and the material of the drifting bottle, which made people scratch their heads.

But if you want to say that this composition is simple, then it is not enough.

It's easy to want to write.

But it's not so easy to get a high score.

In particular, it is even more difficult to excel enough in 1,500 essays so that the marking teacher can shine.

Moreover, this essay contest is an innovative essay contest for middle school students, and its "innovation" should be firmly centered on the second time.

If the writing is not innovative enough, but just decent, not to mention the grand prize and the first prize, there is a high probability that you will not even get a third prize, and you will directly be oblivious to everyone and will not be able to make the slightest wave, which is the difficulty of this essay.

It's easy to write, but it's not easy to write.

The idea is clear, but if you write it according to the superficial meaning of "poor", then nine times out of ten you will not get a high score.

All in all.

At first glance, this essay question seems very simple and unsubtle, but it contains many meanings, and it is not easy to write well.

If you only write according to the appearance of "poverty", such as "poverty" and "poverty", you will get a passing grade.

The focus is also on innovation and differentiation, otherwise it is impossible to stand out from 1,500 people.

Especially if you want to get the 9 grand prizes, if you can't let the marking teacher shine at a glance, or even love it, then don't even think about it.

But this is no pressure for Lin Bei, after all, this question is really easy for him to write!

"In what way is it written?"

"Poetry? Novel? Or argumentative narrative? ”

"Just find a style and write neatly, I guess you can get a full score and win the award, right?"

"After all, this question is really not difficult, it is not enough to drink a pot at all, and I feel that half an hour is enough to solve it."

This is Lin Bei's subconscious thoughts.

Moreover.

There is an element of self-humility.

After all, if he went all out, with the hand speed of the Pulp Qilin Arm, it would not take half an hour at all.

However, this does not need to be compared with speed, he doesn't need to go all out, and he has to save energy for follow-up learning.

So......

After thinking for two minutes, he began to write leisurely, and the speed of writing was neither fast nor slow.

He didn't write argumentative narratives, nor did he write ancient poems, and he didn't pay attention to gimmicks and exaggerations, but wrote a simple story.

The story is as follows......

Title: [Poor].

[There are two scholars in Jiangnan, one surnamed Fan and the other surnamed Xu.

As the saying goes: "Suhu is ripe, the world is full", and the wealth of Jiangnan is enviable. If you have to pick out the "poorest" from the people here, it must be Fan Xu and the others. 】

One to ten, ten to hundred.

Everyone knows that there are two poor scholars, who are not diligent and do not distinguish between grains and grains, and they are not as good as beggars.

Pity that Xu scholar and weak crown! The man was handsome, and his coarse brown clothes had a few holes, and it was difficult to hide his beauty when he wore it, and even the peasant women in the vegetable market were distressed when they saw him, saying that he was a piece of beautiful jade that fell into the mud.

Xu Shusheng always smiled indifferently when he heard those rumors, and said to the east: "The sage teaches that a gentleman is poor. In a word, his head shook exactly three times. The words are sonorous, making people respect the oil and convincing.

Xu Shusheng's Qing Gao Xian name has also been passed on to ten, ten to hundred, and the world knows his virtue.

But Fan Shusheng is in another situation, legend has it that he is fifty poor and hungry, he is so poor that he has yellow and thin muscles at an age, and he can't even afford to marry a daughter-in-law, and even a seven-year-old child will spit on him when he sees him, because his father and mother said that the eldest husband should make meritorious contributions, and this Fan Shusheng has achieved nothing, how sad.

But Fan Shusheng does not fight with others, only saying that he is "not sad and has no food, not sad and unclothed".

The government's conscription order was issued for the second time, and only Xu Shusheng was invited to join the office. The door of Xu Sheng's house has not been repaired for many years, and it is tattered and not tightly closed. But he insisted on closing the door, and closed it to the commanding officer. The official saw that it was useless to invite people, so he had no choice but to do it.

Xu Shusheng had cotton wool stuffed in his ears, although he couldn't stop the loud voice of the little official outside the door, every time a noble person visited, he did it, pretending that he couldn't hear the voices of those ordinary people in the market and those who were filthy into the world, and he memorized his own books, and from time to time lamented the sadness of having no confidant.

But this time it seems that the method is failing.

The man outside the door saw that Xu Sheng's endorsement did not stop, closed the door and disappeared, and actually kicked and smashed Xu Sheng's door.

"I am a person like a prince, which is Xu Sheng, who dares to close the door and not see it." Xu Shusheng was stunned for a moment, and then realized that the person who came was not the little official who had come many times before, but a heroic man wearing a brocade robe and a sword at his waist.

Xu Sheng immediately straightened his waist and thanked him. But the man would not listen any more, and dragged him away.

With a "hiss", Xu Sheng's sleeves were too brittle, and he pulled them off and split them into two sections.

The people next door came to watch when they heard the noise, and saw Xu Shusheng shaking half of his sleeves, his eyes were scarlet, and no matter how rich and noble the person looked at, he scolded with a tongue.

"You have wronged me! Our Royal Highness the Crown Prince sincerely wants to invite Mr. Xu as a guest. The man hastened to explain.

But the masses are not relenting, who calls the reputation of the prince is not good, the old gentleman in the teahouse said that the prince will be abolished within three years today, Xu Sheng is gone, and the reputation and future are not completely ruined?

"The teachings of the sage, the gentleman is poor."

Xu Shusheng bowed his hand to the east and said: "I, Xu, don't seek wealth and nobility, don't serve the prince, please be smart!" ”

This was said in a good way, and the man was also much more respectful: "I can't hide it, the north is in a fierce year, and he is hungry for thousands of miles." His Royal Highness the Crown Prince went to help the people, and he urgently needed his help! ”

He bowed down and finished speaking, but he didn't expect Xu Sheng to be unmoved, "Uncle Boyi also starved to death in the mountains, how fortunate it is to seek benevolence." ”

Everyone around you look at me, I look at you, blinking, as if I don't understand.

"Let me go." A middle-aged man with a yellow face and thin muscles squeezed in front of him from the crowd, and he looked even poorer than Xu Sheng, like a real beggar.

"Who are you?" The prince's attendant looked at him several times to make sure that he was not a man of repute.

"I'm his senior brother, surnamed Fan." Fan Shusheng pointed to the scholar surnamed Xu and said without changing his face.

Xu Shusheng was stunned by his finger, and it took a long time to turn the corner: "Brother Fan, you are worthy of this important task." ”

The prince's attendant nodded with satisfaction and took Fan Sheng away.

Since then, there is no Fan scholar in Jiangnan, but there is more Fan in Beijing, I heard that the prince knows how to make good use of people, and Mr. Fan who invited him to make a life for the people, and his merits are immeasurable. The people in the small town in Jiangnan didn't dare to scold Master Fan for a long time, but they only said in their hearts that he was greedy for wealth and fame, and he was as good as Xu Shusheng.

On the other hand, since the prince's attendant left, Xu Shengxian's name has risen to a higher level, he doesn't want to be burdened by the world's fame, and he doesn't want to be tarnished by the words of the laity, so as soon as the attendant left, he immediately called the well water to wash his ears to protect his innocence.

The two poor scholars in Jiangnan are famous, and everyone sighs.

Ten years later.

The new emperor ascended the throne and granted amnesty to the world.

The town in the south of the Yangtze River is still peaceful and prosperous, Xu Sheng's clothes are even more torn, he is kneeling on the riverside and wants to catch a fish to fill his stomach, but he sees that where the sky and water meet, a small boat carrying Qinghui is floating in the distance.

Half a river fishing fire, a pillow of frost. For some reason, he wanted to wait for the boat to slowly come to him.

Fan ...... Brother Fan? "

The people in the boat didn't seem to be getting old, they were still the same as they were back then, but they didn't expect that what they were waiting for would be people they didn't want to see, Xu Shusheng sneered: "Why did Brother Fan claim to be my senior brother back then?" ＂

"They are all sons of saints, so they are naturally brothers. ＂

"The sage teaches the sea, and the gentleman is poor. ＂

Xu Sheng's words were unforgiving.

“……”

Fan Sheng was speechless for a long time.

Do you know what ramming is?

Not afraid of poverty, but cares endlessly.

I also want a thousand mansions to support the people of the world.

Fan Sheng didn't say these words, he just looked at the young man in front of him silently, his eyes were compassionate. At that moment, Xu Sheng seemed to see a pool of clear water, which could accommodate thousands of stars.

For a long time.

Fan Sheng whispered in a deep voice: "May Qing ...... Seek kindness and get kindness. ”】

The above is the essay written by Lin Bei.

It takes 30 minutes, which is really not fast or slow, with a total of 1700 words, which perfectly meets the word count requirements.

At first glance, it looks very simple, this is really just a simple story, the writing is not too complicated, and there are no profound allusions, just about two poor scholars.

But is it really easy?

The layman looks at the bustle, and the insider looks at the doorway.

If you are a real insider, when you see this composition, your eyes will definitely light up, and you can't even move your eyes.

And after chewing repeatedly, the more you chew, the more you chew, the more flavorful it becomes, and then exclaims: "Wonderful!" ”

Although this article seems simple, it is not simple at all, and its idea is really superior.

After all, when general compositions say "poor", they can only stay at the level of intuitive interpretation such as "poverty, poverty, and exhaustion", and it is difficult to penetrate into the cultural texture, which is mediocre.

But Lin Bei's composition made a profound comparison of the life ideals of the two scholars, one is "solid and poor", although he is high, but he focuses on the ego; A "not sad to eat in the mouth, not sad to the top", but it is clearly upholding the love of the great self of the poet Du Fu of "people and things".

This essay not only has a concern for the Confucian idea of pushing oneself and others, but also cleverly and naturally deducts the topic in the lofty and far-reaching place.

And reading this article, I believe that many people will think of Fan Zhongyan, the other party also happens to be from Jiangnan, and he happens to be poor when he was young, and he also happens to be happy in the world......

Gee!

Is there a relationship between the two?

It doesn't seem to be, but it seems to have it again.

It is natural to make people reminiscent, which shows that Lin Bei's composition skills are deep, and they have tended to a kind of situation.

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