700,000 words, 200 chapters, the content of the first volume is finished!

Because it's the first time I've been original, I've stepped on a lot of pitfalls, but I've finally smoothed down the content of this volume according to the outline. (′???) σ

Beichuan has also reflected on many problems, so I would like to talk to the readers about their journey.

Some readers should be able to see that the first volume was written entirely in the form of a 'comic'.

For example, pay attention to the sense of the camera and the picture...... In fact, it's similar to the 'storyboard' of the comics.

But there is a limit to this kind of writing, and the expressive power of the text is far inferior to that of the picture.

Moreover, the reader is also required to make up the picture by himself, and if he can't match the brain waves, it will be very boring.

So, in the next volume, I'm going to try to condense the text and focus on the characters and the story.

Looking back on this volume myself, I actually feel that there are a lot of things that are too depressing, and there is a lack of coolness.

This is because I was experimenting with new ways of writing, which led to a decrease in the reader's reading experience. This is my personal incompetence, apologies!

I would like to thank you all for your patience in reading this volume! ヾ(??? ゞ)

The next volume is a familiar Middle-earth background, and the tone will become bright and cheerful.

Then, I want to talk about the protagonist Lin Xiao.

In fact, the beginning of the book is not ideally written, because the image of the protagonist is not clear, as if some elements are pieced together.

But after writing about it, I gradually discovered Lin Xiao's character.

Lin Xiao is calm and calm, and the male protagonist of the previous book is actually two completely different people.

Creating a male protagonist with a different personality is a very novel experience.

But sometimes I will suddenly turn back to the familiar character of writing millions of words, cough... That's because the author has to take the blame.

The structure of the next volume is: World Series plus the crusade against Chiyou.

This structure, I wrote better than the unit drama structure of the first volume of the Seven Deadly Sins.

The experience of this volume will be used in the next volume. (???)?

Ask for subscriptions, ask for tickets, autumn pear cream!!

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Finally, I would like to thank my editor, Starry Night, for giving me the opportunity to win a big seal push.

Special thanks to the silver Meng 'Vera 0205' in this book, and thanks to the rich woman Vera for her bold reward of millions of coins - Vera Superman!! (Broken sound)

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