People in the 80s were generally more honest, not the kind of people who just stood in line and didn't tell the truth.

To put it simply, if your story is really good, if your song is really good, then you will really recognize you, and you will not open your eyes and say nonsense.

In fact, due to limited time, the revised version of "The Garden of Words and Leaves" that Cao Zhiqiang said only has a story, which is nothing more than a restrained teacher-student love, which only interests Xu Qingdong, but not enough to really impress Xu Qingdong.

What really moved Xu Qingdong was actually the song called "Rain" that Cao Zhiqiang played on the harmonica.

Xu Qingdong also understands that if he wants to engage in music TV, he must have good music.

But nowadays, domestic music producers are really at a very average level, even if there are good composers, it is not something that people of Xu Qingdong's level can invite.

In short, Cao Zhiqiang relied on a suspenseful story of teacher-student love at that time, as well as a song that could definitely calm everyone, and finally made Xu Qingdong bow down.

However, Xu Qingdong did not agree immediately, he wanted Cao Zhiqiang to write the complete script, and wait until he saw the real script.

This can be regarded as his insistence as a choreographer.

Xu Qingdong also said at the time that Cao Zhiqiang's story is very good and interesting, but he only has a general idea, and he still can't make a movie, so he needs a script with detailed content.

If Cao Zhiqiang can't write the script well, I hope that he will write the story of Cao Zhiqiang into a script, and he will direct the movie tentatively titled "Love in the Ancient Pavilion".

Of course, I also hope that Cao Zhiqiang can come up with the funds for filming this movie.

Cao Zhiqiang was happy when he heard it, and said that the good things are all you.

Then Xu Qingdong said that whether he wrote the script or not, the screenwriter's name can be signed by Cao Zhiqiang, after all, the main body of this story was thought up by him, and he would not rob this.

Xu Qingdong is just very interested in this story, and he also likes that song, and really wants to shoot this teacher-student love full of depression and restraint.

Hearing this, Cao Zhiqiang realized that Xu Qingdong was just a pure artist, he just wanted to make a movie about the teacher-student love, he didn't think too much, it was he Cao Zhiqiang who thought too much.

After realizing this, Cao Zhiqiang, who had drunk a lot of wine, was also a little upset, and said on the spot that he would give him a maximum of three days to write the script.

Later, Cao Zhiqiang really began to retreat, and has been hiding in his hotel room to write scripts.

Since the stories of "The Garden of Words" are ready-made, he only needs to remove some Japanese characteristics and replace them with domestic ones, and it is not difficult to pay attention to the characteristics of the times.

After all, the story of "The Garden of Words" itself is very simple, there are not many conflicts, and the reason why it became famous in the previous life is more because of that artistic conception.

So Cao Zhiqiang's first version of the script was quickly written.

In this first version of the script, there are not many revisions, basically according to the original play, and the time and place have been changed a little.

The relationship between the characters has basically not changed.

But after Xu Qingdong saw it, he shook his head, saying that it was not good in terms of details and was not grounded.

Xu Qingdong also thinks that it's just such a story, too simple, too short, and it can't hold up for thirty minutes, so it must be filled in with some details and branches.

For example, it is necessary to describe more of the warmth between Ah Qiu and his younger brothers and sisters, and don't let the male protagonist have older brothers and sisters, let the male protagonist be the eldest brother, and there is a younger brother and a younger sister below.

It is necessary to let the actor bear more responsibilities and suffering, so that he can't elope with someone in the end out of the responsibility of raising his younger brothers and sisters, highlighting that one is responsible!

Another example is that Teacher Wen Xue, who also has to give some lofty backgrounds.

According to Xu Qingdong's addition, that Wen Xue is an educated youth, and her parents used to be university professors, but in the turmoil of that year, both parents were exiled to the countryside and died of illness one after another.

Later, with the help of her fellow villagers, she worked hard to be admitted to university, and after graduation, she was assigned to become a teacher.

Therefore, this Wen Xue must be a well-educated person with a family background, and he is gentle and helpful to people, and he is very popular with students.

Only by plumping out the characters can the later conflicts be more intense and better-looking.

So Cao Zhiqiang began to invite Xu Qingdong to stay in a hotel with him and improve the script together.

In the end, after many days of running-in discussions, they finally conceived the second version, which is the final version.

This script is much more down-to-earth and fuller.

In the second version, the actor's name is Xia Qiu, he is sixteen years old, and he is a high school student who is still in his first year of high school.

He is the eldest boy in the family, and he has a younger brother and a younger sister below.

After Xia Qiu's mother died of illness, his father left the child and ran away with a little widow to never come back, and Ah Qiu had to shoulder the heavy responsibility of supporting his family and raising himself and his younger siblings early.

In order to support his family, he went to school and worked part-time.

He was still in school, and he couldn't go to a regular factory, so he repaired and polished shoes on the side of the road, supporting himself and his younger siblings with his skills.

But he didn't want to repair shoes for the rest of his life, and his dream was to become a shoemaker.

Because the income of a shoemaker is much higher than that of a shoemaker.

The time soon came to the rainy season, and usually at this time, Ah Qiu would take a break for a while, not to go out of the stall, but to look at the calligraphy and painting drawings and figure out how to make shoes.

One day, Ah Qiu skipped class and came to the park, wanting to paint his shoes quietly, but it rained heavily, and he had to go to a nearby gazebo to take shelter from the rain.

There, he met a beautiful woman who was older than himself.

The woman sat quietly watching the rain, eating amber peanuts and drinking old wine from a kettle, without saying a word.

As for why he knew that the kettle was old wine, of course, it was because Ah Qiu smelled the smell of old wine.

The first time they met in the gazebo, neither of them spoke, but they each did their own things, and then after the rain was a little lighter, the woman got up and picked up her umbrella and left.

The second time they met, Ah Qiu still skipped class halfway, or because it was raining, went to the gazebo, and met the woman there.

This time, the woman who drank and ate peanuts seemed to be in a good mood and took the initiative to talk to the boy.

After talking to each other, they began to get acquainted with each other.

After that, the two became more and more familiar with each other, but there was still a gap between them.

Because that woman never said anything about herself, not even her name, but kept inquiring about Ah Qiu.

Ah Qiu told all his stories, even his dream of becoming a shoemaker.

Although Ah Qiu didn't know the other party's name and situation, the other party was very gentle, kept encouraging Ah Qiu, and gave him a lot of advice and help.

For example, the other party gave him a picture album, which was full of photos of famous shoes that were very popular in Europe, America and Japan, which made Ah Qiu elated.

The other party is also very literate, likes to chant poetry, and understands Japanese.

Ah Qiu always thought that she was an employee of a certain company who skipped work halfway, and wanted her to make a foot model for herself and a pair of leather shoes for her.

Ah Xue generously agreed, decisively took off her shoes, and asked Ah Qiu to measure the size of her feet.

Ah Xue loves to cook very much, and often brings lunch boxes to Ah Qiu, so that he can taste his skills, but unfortunately he loves to cook but his cooking skills are not high, which always makes Ah Qiu miserable.

There is more and more communication between the two, and Ah Qiu finds that he gradually likes Ah Xue, who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside.

Ah Qiu looks forward to rain every day, because when it rains, he will see Ah Xue there.

Later, the rainy season passed.

When it wasn't raining, Ah Qiu went to the pavilion again, but he couldn't see Ah Xue anymore.

Later, when Ah Qiu was going to school, he happened to see Ah Xue from the window.

He asked his classmates who it was, and the classmates told him that it was Teacher Wen Xue, who was a Chinese teacher in the third grade of high school before, and now he was transferred to logistics.

Xia Qiu realized that it was precisely because she was a logistics teacher that she had the strength to drink and eat peanuts during class.

As a result, that time, she met Ah Qiu, who also skipped class.

is also a first-year high school classmate like Xia Qiu, and the reason why I know Teacher Wen Xue in the third year of high school is because this Teacher Wen Xue is very famous now, and it can be said that the whole school is famous, and I wonder why Xia Qiu doesn't know.

Of course, Xia Qiu didn't know, because he hadn't paid attention to school before, and he ran outside to draw shoes quietly after class, and never asked about school gossip.

So, Xia Qiu began to ask her classmates about Ah Xue.

Only then did I know that it was because this teacher Wen Xue seduced the male student in his class, and was discovered by the male student's mother and came to make a big fuss, so the teacher Wen Xue was transferred from the front-line post and went to the logistics warehouse.

It's just that this female teacher seduced a male student and made a lot of noise, so everyone knew about it.

And the classmate also said that she heard that the school had made a decision to dismiss Teacher Wen Xue, and she had not been staying for a long time and was about to leave the school.

Of course Xia Qiu didn't believe it, because he had been with Ah Xue for a while, and he definitely didn't believe that such a gentle and kind woman would do such a thing.

Xia Qiu's classmate also said that he didn't believe it either, so it was said that there was another version of the matter.

It is said that it was the classmate named He Damao who had a crush on Teacher Wen Xue for a long time, so after school at noon one day, he sneaked to Teacher Wen Xue's dormitory and stole her pantyhose.

As a result, after returning home, He Damao's classmate was found by his mother and asked whose pantyhose he hid.

He Damao lied, saying that Teacher Wen Xue seduced him and personally gave him socks.

When He Damao's mother heard this, she immediately became angry, and came to school with her socks early the next morning, and made a lot of noise to ask the school for an explanation.

The school leaders called Teacher Wen Xue, but Teacher Wen Xue did not argue or refute, but just stood there silently.

In the end, in order to calm down the incident, the school leaders asked Teacher Wen Xue to temporarily transfer from the front-line post and go to logistics.

As for the specific disposal, it will be decided after discussion.

In fact, there was a young teacher who saw He Damao stealing socks, and he once stood up to shout injustice to Teacher Wen Xue.

But He Damao's mother has the physical evidence of pantyhose, and it involves the teacher-student relationship, and it is difficult to convince the public with a single witness.

The school leaders originally wanted to press it down, but who knew that the matter would spread more and more.

After Xia Qiu heard this, she was absent-minded all the time, but she was called up by the teacher to go to the punishment station during class.

Suddenly, it rained, and Xia Qiu hurriedly ignored the punishment station and ran directly to the gazebo.

Sure enough, Ah Xue was still there.

At this time, Xia Qiu already knew Ah Xue's true identity, and broke Wenxue's name and identity.

After being stunned for a moment, Ah Xue just smiled lightly and didn't say much.

Qiu began to question the incident of seducing the male student, wanting to learn the truth from her.

Ah Xue asked, do you believe me?

Ah Qiu said, as long as you say it yourself, I will believe it!

Then, Ah Xue told another story.

Ah Xue said that that day, the weather was a little hot, she went back to the dormitory at noon, took off her stockings, went to the bathhouse to take a bath, and when she returned to the dormitory, she found that her pantyhose were gone.

She didn't say anything, thinking that her colleague had taken it.

After all, the pantyhose in this period were very expensive, they were all imported, or from the south, usually more than ten yuan a piece, far from those ordinary socks for a dollar can be compared, and it is normal to be remembered.

As a result, the next day, the parents of a male student took her pantyhose and came to the door to ask for an explanation, saying that she had seduced her son and was shameless and obscene.

At that time, she learned that her stockings had been stolen by the male classmate.

And after the male classmate stole her stockings, he should have been discovered by his mother when he went back, and asked where he came from, so he lied and said that the teacher seduced him and took the initiative to give him socks.

It was precisely because of this that the classmate's mother was furious and took pantyhose to school to discuss the law.

In this way, her reputation was ruined, and everyone was talking about her seducing students in her class, giving them pantyhose, saying that she was shameless and so on.

Ah Qiu asked Ah Xue, why didn't he refute, didn't argue, why he was willing to be transferred to logistics, isn't this a tacit acquiescence?

Ah Xue said, is it useful to distinguish?

There is no empirical evidence for this kind of rumor, and it is extremely difficult for both sides to distinguish between right and wrong.

The school doesn't care about the truth, they just want to make the big thing a small thing.

Everyone just listens to what they want to hear, and takes pleasure in spreading falsehoods, and the truth doesn't really matter.

No matter how she explains, no matter how she justifies, it will only get worse, and those who believe in her will still believe her, and those who don't believe in her will still not believe her.

Moreover, she didn't want to ruin the male student's future because of this incident, after all, he was just impulsive.

So, let time settle everything.

Rumors will always subside after a while.

Although Ah Xue didn't care, Ah Qiu was not happy to let Ah Xue continue to suffer injustice.

So the next day, he went to the class of the male classmate who stole the stockings, came out of him, and asked him to tell the truth.

As a result, of course, that classmate was not happy, and together with his classmates, he beat Ah Qiu.

Ah Qiu is just a freshman in high school, and in the face of a group of junior high school students, of course he can't beat him.

Shortly after the beating, it began to rain again.

Ah Qiu hurriedly ran to the park pavilion and ran into Ah Xue again.

This time, Ah Xue saw that Ah Qiu was injured, and took the initiative to take him to his house and bandage his wounds.

At Ah Xue's home, Ah Qiu confessed to Ah Xue, but Ah Xue was silent.

Then Ah Qiu ran away angrily, and after Ah Xue stayed for a while, she also ran out.

The two sides started the climax of mutual complaint between the corridors.

At first, Ah Qiu broke out, angrily accusing Ah Xue of being a liar and deceiving him all the time, and he didn't like Ah Xue at all

Ah Xue suddenly collapsed, ran over and hugged Ah Qiu, hugged Ah Qiu and cried loudly.

In the hug, Ah Xue told Ah Qiu that she was not as free and easy as others said, nor was she so strong.

She was also very devastated at the time, and she also struggled, but the school leaders kept telling her to keep a low profile, telling her not to continue to fight, not to make trouble, otherwise it would be bad for everyone.

She's been tormented by rumors, and she's really about to lose it.

During these days, thanks to the appearance of Ah Qiu, it gave her the courage to continue to hold on.

Also, she likes him too, but she doesn't dare to say it, she can't say it.

Then, they hugged each other tightly in the rain.

The rain stopped, a rainbow appeared, and both sides looked at the rainbow with a smile.

In the end, Ah Xue left and went to another city.

Ah Qiu didn't follow, he stayed, still often skipping classes, still failing exams, and often mingling with his younger siblings.

The two sides did not cross the line and did not elope.

They all have their own problems.

Forced together, there will only be bigger problems, which they can't solve and can't bear.

However, Ah Qiu received a letter from Ah Xue and learned about Ah Xue's new job and new address.

This is the end of the film, showing the lives of the two of them, and the rest is blank.

Perhaps, when Ah Qiu really grows up and really takes care of his younger brothers and sisters, he can go to Ah Xue.

Or, after all, this is a short-lived memory, and the two sides will never see each other again, and they will not continue their relationship.

In short, this version is the second version made by Cao Zhiqiang and Xu Qingdong.

"It's so touching! It's really touching! ”

After reading this script, Hao Shuwen's eyes were red and she burst into tears.

"Zhiqiang, you are really talented, you can actually write such a good script, this, this story is so good."

Immediately afterwards, Hao Shuwen wiped her tears, raised her head and looked at Cao Zhiqiang, who was munching on watermelon: "Zhiqiang, this movie must be made, it must be filmed, it would be a pity not to shoot it!" ”

(End of chapter)