258 Brainstorming
(Don't point it first, the difference is 3,000 words, and it will be made up in the early morning.) If you have clicked on, remember to refresh it and see it again when the time comes)
"Hmm-hmm...... Mr. Wise ......"
After crying a little sadly for a while, the garden lying on Xiaolan's body was looking at Gao Yuan with an aggrieved face, and there were not really many tears on his face, but he seemed to be hit by Gao Yuan's straightforward statement-
"At least...... But can you tell me what's boring and let me use it as a reference? ”
"Hmmm......"
Looking at the garden that is so persistent, it seems that the persistence of the script of this drama is serious, Gao Yuan organized the language a little, and roughly said:
"To put it simply, it's ordinary. At the beginning of the incident, the police arrive at the scene to investigate, and then find clues left at the scene and find evidence to name the murderer...... Such a narrative is too ordinary for a short story......"
Saying this, Gao Yuan's words paused slightly, and said a little helplessly:
Of course, the story is short and the plot is ordinary, which is not the main problem for reasoning, because the fun of reasoning lies in the final puzzle, as long as the final puzzle is interesting and exciting enough, then this is an excellent work. However, as a drama ......"
Speaking of this, Gao Yuan couldn't help but look at Xiao Ai on his side, and agreed with Xiao Ai's statement just now, and continued:
"Xiao Ai is right just now, the beginning is directly a lengthy investigation and questioning plot, if it is performed like this, it will be too torturous for audiences who don't usually watch similar works. It's not like reasoning that there is a special audience, after all, charity dramas are aimed at the various groups who come to watch them......"
"Hmm, hmm...... That, that ......"
Hearing Gao Yuan say this, Yuanzi's shoulders kept shaking, as if he had the courage to refute, but he didn't know what to say when the words came to his lips-
"So, instead of writing a script for this kind of mystery story, I think it's better to write some stories that are suitable for all ages! Like fairy tales, comedies or whatever, they are all good choices! ”
Eventually, Takato suggested.
As for such a suggestion, Xiao Ai and Conan both nodded silently, feeling very reasonable.
"Yes...... But ......"
But the garden, who still didn't seem to give up, said with some grievances:
"That's what I want to do! It's like a fairy tale or something, it's too ordinary! ”
Some were unreasonable, leaning on Xiaolan's garden, they sat up, and they seemed to complain, and Gao Yuan, Xiao Ai, Conan and others on the side looked helpless-
"Yes, yes!"
However, for Yuanzi's statement, Mitsuhiko spoke out in support:
"That kind of fairy tale that is not real at all, it is not interesting to act at all! Moreover, I think the script written by Sister Yuanzi is really quite real! ”
"Right, right!"
Hearing that someone supported her idea, the garden suddenly came to her senses, and the sadness just now was suddenly thrown back by her, and she said seriously:
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