Testimonials at the end of the first volume
Hello everyone, I am a beer dolphin, first of all, I wish you all a happy Lantern Festival.
It's a bit exciting and embarrassing to call yourself by a temporary pen name, but it's even more exciting—it's time to jump out and talk to you for a while.
This book has been serialized so far, 144 chapters, 330,000 words, and the first volume has been written, which is honestly longer than I thought.
In the beginning of these 300,000 words, I myself am constantly learning, constantly figuring out, and I want to polish this story more than I imagined.
And in this process, I intuitively felt the pressure brought by the results and popularity at the starting point - as an author, I naturally hope that the stories I create will be read by more people, which will inevitably be linked to the grades.
Therefore, you must be able to read that I have made a lot of subtle attempts, my initial description is to create some sense of the lens, but because the pen power and rhythm grasp of the work is not yet hot, it seems very slow, very long, after the shelves can be intuitively seen results, I spurred myself to make some more changes, in the back, I can even see that I want to mix some upgrade elements.
These attempts may not have been successful, and I must apologize to everyone for the parts that I didn't feel good about after trying them, and I must thank everyone for their willingness to continue reading.
The puppet added a little bit of what I didn't understand.,Skill mechanics,Equipment and game content are mixed to look strange and boring.,This has to be said to be too normal and too sorry - I haven't thought about these contents very clearly.,I don't really want to spend energy and pen and ink to describe these contents.,Because since the beginning of writing.,I don't think this should be a book that lists calculated values and brushes equipment to loot drive.。
So, what kind of book should this be?
It's on the game channel.,Readers who don't have a lot of game frequencies have swept the LOL fandom.,After sweeping the cool brush equipment system and adding some text.,Click into the book and turn it off-the content they want to see.,There's no here.,Even if there are some sporadic attempts.,It's very shoddy.,Live up to expectations.。
It's not so straightforward, close to the hot mainstream, a lot of pen and ink is not on the protagonist, and there is no happy and happy element like a systematic release task, the camera changes very frequently, and the need to read is correspondingly much more detailed.
Is it a fictional historical deduction? No, at least the layout design is very simple, because I know that I have a few pounds and a few taels, and I will not be able to write well if I am not good at what I don't like, so I don't have that kind of taste.
In this way, although I avoided some of the strange pits of the online text, I inevitably walked into many other forks in the road, and after screening layer by layer, it is really gratifying and ashamed that there are living people to watch and interact.
If my interest is maintained, it will be of great help to me as a result of what this book means to me and to what I want to write in the future.
There are still 9981 difficulties in learning scriptures from the West, and Han Dongwen is the whetstone I can't ask for the most, and I want to learn more from this book while retaining my own characteristics, so that I can produce better stories in the future - and it may not be Han Dongwen's story.
Then, what gives me this opportunity to learn and improve is the readers who have been reading and subscribing (bow)
After a roll, in addition to finding problems, I often wonder what I can attract people.
Is the narrative still smooth (self-righteous)?
The character creation is still three-dimensional, and it is still likable (self-righteous)?
The plot is not silly bubbling (self-righteous)?
Then I'll open a royal beast article in the next book.,The golden finger is to cook to let the pet beast evolve.,Eat hot pot to evolve in the direction of the flame or something.,And I can write a food link.,Think about how happy it is.,Hahaha.。
Okay, the above is nonsense, this book has just started, here is a guarantee, everyone obviously thinks the general, boring links I will adjust, towards the comfort of what I write, everyone looks comfortable in the direction of hard work.
After all, when I was upgrading my skills here, I directly wrote a pain mask for myself, and I had to rely on all kinds of work like tearing winter boxing to adjust myself back and lose it, which was really undeserved.
Thank you for your support.,Originally, I could have taken a holiday after the end of a volume.,But I'm a newcomer.,I want to try what it's like to be a full-time attendance.,That's going to continue to update from Thursday.。
Please look forward to the next content of "Broken, I'm a Faint King", there are more recommended monthly passes or something, and you can feel more encouragement from everyone!
[Volume 2: The Scourge of Kings]