Conclusion
Wonderland is finished, and the results are very bad, so self-review first.
The first book "Mechanic" did okay, at that time I was 2k a day, and I often broke off, and then I thought that "Wonderland" was 5K a day, and if I persevered, the results would be better.
In fact, I was wrong, and I couldn't be more wrong!
I really worked hard to write "Wonderland", looked up a lot of materials, learned all kinds of gems, and wanted to create that kind of dreamy scene!
As a result, after persisting in hundreds of thousands of words, the results are still miserable, no recommendation, and after no improvement, I also wrote without passion, and it became commonplace.
The reason, I think, is that the foreshadowing in front is too long, which causes the story to heat up slowly and looks unpleasant.
Of course, there are other mistakes that I will not repeat one by one, and I will try my best to avoid these shortcomings and improve them all in the new book.
The new book "The Emperor of Soldiers" will be officially released tomorrow!
Thank you all here, especially thank you for the Xuan contrarian MM who has been cheering, I hope you can continue to support me!