After the Shenbang volume is written, I will simply write a summary of this volume, the first time I wrote this kind of thing, I forgive me for not writing well.

The Shenbang scroll is divided into bright and dark lines.

The two lines are the demon [Luden] and the cursed [Empress].

From the first day of the Shenbang scroll, the two lines collided, starting from the same starting point, constantly entangled.

In fact, if we think of Luton as a traverser, then we will find that the Empress is more like a traverser than Lutdon.

The essence of crossing is to have the information gap of [history + technology], so as to realize the dimensionality reduction of the individual to the times.

In this copy, there is no [history] information difference on either side, and no one knows what will happen after that.

This is an alternate era modeled after ancient Rome.

The information on [technology] is poor, and the empress and Ludon can be regarded as the same level, and the former even directly owns Qiyun's legacy.

Sort out the bright line, the core characters are the three giants of the Divine State.

The relationship between the three giants can be explained in one sentence: the economy is the foundation of politics, and the military is the continuation of politics.

Ludon - Economics, El - Politics, Ponga - Military.

El, who seems to have the weakest sense of presence among the Big Three, Senator Knight of the Senate, is a very important link.

Everything is in the service of the El, in the service of the patriarchs.

The historical prototype of the character of Pongue is a character that fuses Pompey and Caesar.

Most of what happened to the character of Ponge can be found in history.

This included Pong's initial appeal to the Senate to give his soldiers enough land.

This is the real appeal of Pompey in history, which was also ruthlessly rejected by the Senate.

It's just that in ancient Rome, the Senate was in power, and in the Kingdom of God, the Senate was a meat trumpet.

And in the ethereal state of God, the Senate is stripped of all power, just a ruthless voting machine, which will seem stupid and ridiculous.

The Senate was deprived of its powers and divided among the Seven Deadly Sins Palace.

Here again, there is a misalignment of identity.

The so-called "Chancellor" of the Divine State is the actual "Archon", and the so-called "Scholar" is the actual "Chancellor".

A friend said that he had broken a little in this chapter, and he could only say that he had a perfect score for reading comprehension.

There are high-ranking people in the crowd.

The structure of the separation of powers of the Divine State is completely historical, the only difference is that they do not need to elect a commander.

The Seven Deadly Sins Justices are different incarnations of the Grand Lord.

Strictly speaking, it is a combination of the grand ruler and the initial form of bureaucracy.

The Seven Deadly Sins Palace, when the last event [Lu Deng's exploration of the Qiyun Ruins], had a very ambiguous attitude.

They are the real ones in power, they have vested interests, and they don't want change the most.

Therefore, there was a deal between Justice Gurred and Ludon, wanting to delay Luden's exploration.

The seven justices once resisted more intensely, and were even ready to flip the table and solve the problem in a simpler and more brutal way.

Therefore, Justice Jover's death on the night of the Last Judgment was accompanied by eight scholars.

This is the Empress's warning to the Palace of the Seven Deadly Sins.

Ludon can die, he can hang, but everything must be done according to the rules of the game.

Willing to gamble and lose.

But don't worry.

The essence of the state of God is a toy, this is Luden's evaluation of the state of God.

It is the empress's toy, and it is also Luden's toy.

Compared to the Nebula Empire, the Divine State is more like a utopia.

Ludon's biggest golden finger in the Divine State is not the entry that comes with the simulator, not his advantage as a traverser, nor the Holy Family, the Empress, or the Inquisition...

The biggest golden finger is that the Divine State is a utopia that adheres to the sacred law very much.

Everything that happens under the sun must be based on the Holy Law.

The Holy Code is guarded by a large community of scholars and judges, as well as violent watchdogs such as the Inquisition.

Of course, this is not enough.

It is Her Majesty the Empress who truly makes the Holy Code sacred.

The Empress has the curse of eternal life, the wisdom and legacy of the Qiyun Kingdom, and can touch the laser sword to hit the primitives at any time...

As a 'traverser', the Empress has a greater advantage than Ludon.

With the presence of the Empress, the Holy Code is so sacred.

Because, this is the request of the Empress.

She is the only director, producer, audience, and number one black fan of this farce.

The Empress possesses the legacy of Qiyun Technology, which is a dimensionality reduction blow to the Divine State, and immortality makes her invulnerable individually, and implements her will in the simplest and most brutal way:

In this arena, everyone must respect the law.

If you look at the history of mankind, you can't find such an era.

The structure of the Kingdom of God is interesting.

Take the Empress and Luden away first, and then roughly divide the classes, in order:

Justice/Scholars/Senators, Saints, Tycoons/Scholars/Judges, Citizens of God, Commoners of God, Poor People of God, Slaves, Gentiles.

This pyramid is layered on top of each other and is very stable.

The saints and the plutocrats, in fact, were the aristocratic class of the Roman era, which controlled the senate.

In the real Roman Republic and the Roman Empire, with the expansion of the Roman territory and the more extravagant life of the aristocracy, the poor and slaves at the bottom and the craftsmen revolted one after another.

Well, these are the historical materials of Baidu Check.

The Divine State was able to maintain stability, in addition to the lack of sharp internal contradictions, there was another important factor - orcs.

Orcs regularly buff the gods and do a population cleanup plan.

The result: God is strong, but only a little stronger.

Therefore, even after 800 years, the pile of dry wood of the Divine State has never ushered in a little spark.

Even if there were, it was extinguished by the empress.

For Qiyun's doomsday despair, human beings should not open the Pandora's box of science and technology, but should be crawling and rolling in the Stone Age, natural and innocent.

Until Ludon reappeared.

For the course of history, the individual does not have much special significance, there is no hero A, there will be hero B, there is no A, there will be B.

Luton has no special significance for history.

He had a special meaning for the Empress.

That's all.

Before Ludon's appearance, the Empress was the de facto dictator of the Divine State, the Shadow Emperor, with unlimited power and freedom.

She also obeys the Holy Law, but is flexible and more presumptuous, acting according to her own likes and abhorres.

Ludon never used morality to bind himself, he only feared the law.

The Empress is not even in awe of the law.

In fact, the two are two sides of the same body to a certain extent, and the bright and dark lines are finally intertwined, and the two sides compromise and make concessions to each other to reach a consensus.

The Empress gave up her control of the Divine State and became a complete outsider, watching the world from the sidelines.

Ludon eliminated the orcs, erased most of the technological points ahead of the times, and calmly faced the assassination of him by the Senate under the framework of the law.

From then on, what is Qiyun will return to Qiyun, and what is divine will return to God.

The fate of the Divine State should be decided by the Divine State itself.

Ironically, when the Shadow Monarch Queen relinquished control of the Divine State, the Divine State, as a toy, was soon on the verge of collapse.

As for the historical direction of the state after Ludon's death, it will become the background of the next dungeon.

Well, there will be the next copy (laughs).

The above is a discussion of the plot.

By the way, I would like to share the creative process, this part of the writing will be more scattered, and I want to write where to write.

The whole book was launched in a hurry.

After chatting with the editor, I had a general idea, made an appointment, and went online in a hurry.

When the book was issued, there were 8,000 words in storage, and it was used up in two days, and from then on, it entered the stage of writing one by one.

Tens of thousands of words on a single machine, the editor helped me find a few bigwigs to ask for chapter push, and then there was a test of the water, all the way to today.

The pace in the early stage has been very slow, and the main line is also scattered, which belongs to where to write.

The editor repeatedly stressed this issue to me.

For this, I can only say: Bear spreads his hands.

What can I do, I'm desperate.

The first time I wrote a work on this theme, I have written more than 500,000 words so far, and we look back and see that the current tone of the whole book, in the division of online articles, should belong to the genre of [historical farming] essays.

If it is written according to the historical text, then more 'Roman' elements should be added, and even Rome should be started at the beginning.

In this way, the reader's sense of substitution can be increased.

If it is written according to the overhead farming text, then Ludon should have a territory at the beginning of the simulation, with a clear trigger event and a clicking countdown.

But I haven't written about it, and I don't even read history and farming.

My editor asked me to take a look at "Let Go of That Witch" and say it's a classic.

After a while, I came back and said to my editor, 'It's all booked, and you'll take it as if you're going to see it.'" ’

I've spent all my money, so why do I need to spend time!

On the other side of the screen, my editor must have been desperate too.

He cried warmly.

In fact, in the early stage of creation, the results were still good, and the editor and I once looked forward to Sanjiang, bigger and stronger, and create brilliance again.

It turns out: Dabaa.

Damn, at this level, is it still not good, is this the world of the strong? How can it be repaired!

In the plot of [Short Grain], the overall handling is very good.

Wait for [short grain] to be converted into futures trading, and then further extend ABS.

There is a problem with the content and rhythm control of this piece.

Judging from the feedback from various angles, this part of the plot is relatively unsuccessful, and my editor also made a warning in advance, and I personally insisted on finishing this plot.

After this part of the plot is over, then quickly enter the protector, the first beast tide war, the second beast tide war, Qiyun ruins exploration...

After that, the plot was much smoother, and the follow-up during this period of time also increased.

Originally, there would be a role in the book, but considering some factors, the main reason is that I don't have a deep enough understanding of the operation of the banking and financial system to support the creation, so I cut this part.

There is a very awkward question about the Roman element, which has also been raised by readers before.

The idea of the whole book is good, the framework is okay, and the writing is rough but it is still in the past.

My writing habits are probably the worst of the full-time writers, and typos are the norm.

What is more embarrassing is that when I write a chapter, I don't write it from beginning to end in one breath, but jump and write in different places according to the fragmentary picture sense and events, and finally connect them together.

All of the above is okay.

It's the details that are really deadly.

Because there are no details at all.

As a science student, my education level in history and humanities is nine years of compulsory education.

How to develop science and technology step by step?

I don't know, I don't have a clue.

Food, clothing, housing and transportation for the Romans?

I don't know.

The Roman senate, the aristocracy, the knightly class, the priests...

The eyes are black.

Before checking the information, I didn't know that the Romans drank wine, didn't know that the Romans ate lead sugar, didn't know about the lead pipes in Rome....

I really didn't teach this in the nine years of compulsory education.

My most intuitive impression of Rome is that this power is quite strong in the civilization game, and it has its own trade routes.

The creation of the first copy belongs to writing and checking the information at the same time.

The first information to be checked is the political structure of the whole Rome, class contradictions, historical events, heroes....

After completing these materials, I went to have a deeper understanding of food, clothing, housing and transportation, and to understand the real Rome.

The chapter "Lead, Sugar" is the creation after supplementing the information, and the details of life rarely appear, and I found a little feeling of writing historical farming essays.

Judging from the feedback from the background subscription, the plot before and after the chapter "Lead, Sugar" is the most stable and the most convenient when creating.

It's just that at this time, the whole plot has reached the end stage, and there is no way to continue to unfold.

The entire Shenbang volume is close to 500,000 words, all of which pave the way for the death of the protagonist, and in terms of the main line of creation, it is also an interesting attempt and experience.

The writing of the first volume is more of an attempt and an exploration, and many problems have been discovered, which will be improved in the second volume.

Well, again, there will be a second volume (laughs).

I told you in my testimonial before that this book will definitely be written to 1 million words, and now it has more than 500,000 words.

The thief can deal with it, and he says that he is the real code.

The entire book is designed to have four to five copies, and there will be more than three long copies, each with a length of no less than 300,000 words.

In terms of results, steady to well, the editor helped to get a recommendation, and I wrote that I have ordered 1200 here, which is gratifying.

Set a small goal: strive to reach 3,000 high-quality products before one million words!

If you like it, you can give a full order, thank you, thief!

Please! This boutique is really important to me!

It's cool to have a starting point book, okay?

It's time to hit the street, everyone understands, full-time authors, there must be pressure, and the daily expenses of the manuscript fee for this book are a bit difficult.

It's hard to make money.

Fortunately, there is still some savings in writing books over the years, so there is no need to panic for the time being.

At last.

After writing so much, the thief thinks it's not too much to rest for half a day!

Take half a day to sort out the outline of the articulation section and the second copy in your mind.

The first dungeon [Great Belongs to God] has come to an end.

The second quest is called [Human Stars Shine], so stay tuned.