Summary at the end of the volume and a day off
The fourth volume, which began on October 10, has lasted 70 days and has a total of 410,000 words of blood diamonds.
On average, 5,800 words are updated every day, well...... It's a little regressive, but it's still qualified overall, don't make my rumors anymore, so how can I lychee?
Having said that, I wrote the first half of the Blood Diamond chapter smoothly and satisfied, but it was a little hurried from the middle of the chapter, on the one hand, I felt that the pace was too slow, and on the other hand, I felt bored and dozed off when I wrote it...... But overall, I feel better than the obsidian article.
Out of 10, I think I can give it a seven.
However, when I looked through the previous article, I did find a lot of problems, including too few player appearances, Rafa's death was too hasty, and some plots were too dry......
More than one beautiful woman has reported that the plot written by Radish is too tight and urgent, and it looks tired...... It may be that my subjective thinking is too strong, after all, when I read books before, I would be very disgusted when I encountered long sections of hydrology, and when I wrote the plot, I always thought that I couldn't hydrology, I couldn't hydrology, and I tried to make sure that there was something to read in every chapter.
But now it seems that many things are like [jugglers], too much, and we should learn to make trade-offs and master the balance...... to become a qualified home.
If you have any suggestions and opinions, you can also leave a message to tell me, and the interaction of readers is also the fuel for my progress, thank you.
Back to the story.
The most satisfying thing about this volume is actually the death of Biles Wolfe.
Because this is already written in the original outline...... Even the Black Knight was supposed to fall in the last volume, but ended up surviving to this volume.
For this role, Radish even wrote a biography for him, but maybe he couldn't write touching stories and lines because of his pen skills......
The 1.0 release is over, and the next step may be the version transition period, or the 2.0 version, which has not been thought out here yet, and will be well conceived tomorrow.
The state of the past two months has been good and bad, and I apologize to all the beauties who are chasing more.
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Finally, Radish asked you for a day off to prepare the outline of the fifth volume.
I won't make too many notices here, because the plot hasn't been sorted out yet, but the general direction should be that a high-ranking member joins the team, and Jack begins to prepare for the promotion of the Sage, and gradually expands more world views and maps.
Finally, thank you for your support, it is you who let the radish eat this mouthful.
Now the score of this book is 4500 orders, which is more than double from the 1830 first orders when it was first put on the shelves, thank you very much.
There are also two new alliance leaders in these two months, which add a lot of impetus to the radish.
But I'm sorry that I can't pay it back in a short period of time.
Let's continue to work the next volume!
Radish pill December 19, 2022 22:13