Chapter 55: Skilled Montage [Seeking to Chase and Collect]

"The whole rhythm of your film is not right."

"I've seen half of it, and I don't know what you're going to do with it."

"The plot is not enough ups and downs, it's too peaceful."

"The ending is very tough, don't you feel embarrassed to watch it yourself?"

"If you want to make a commercial film, I have no objection, but you can learn from director Feng Ping's style, his films will be of great help to you."

"Your film is neither a commercial film nor a literary film, and you can't even figure out the positioning, how can you make a good movie?"

"I watched it patiently throughout the whole process, I really can't figure out why you made this kind of film, I feel that I can send it to Didian as a negative teaching material."

"In addition, your works don't have a bit of depth, and the lines are all in the vernacular, which I don't think is as good as "Fish in the Sea"."

Su Yu: ???

Shen Rui does not have a high opinion of him, and he relies on his qualifications and his identity as a fourth-generation director to suppress Su Yu throughout the whole story.

As soon as Shen Rui's words fell, Feng Jiaying immediately rushed up.

"That, I'll add a few points to Director Shen Rui's words......"

"You smashed so many things just to shoot an 8-minute scene?"

"What a waste!"

"And your movie shots are sensitive, mixed with a lot of violent and erotic elements, what if you teach bad children?"

"Finally, the law of Kyushu prohibits citizens from holding weapons, and you can see for yourself how many weapons the male and female protagonists have hidden? Don't you even have a little legal knowledge? ”

After Shen Rui left the game, Feng Jiaying became arrogant, and a big hat was buckled on Su Yu's head.

The four big-name directors occupy the same proportion of scores in the selection.

Su Yu was able to see the current situation clearly through his temporary favorability discernment.

Er Dongsheng, Feng Ping should be able to give a good score.

Shen Rui, Feng Jiaying, he can't get too high a score here.

"Thank you two directors for your advice." Su Yu still responded politely.

This was followed by speeches by professional film critics.

Most of them stood up to comment on Su Yu's film.

There are praises and depreciations, and there are even judges who are afraid of the existence of the judges, thinking that he can also be a judge.

Among them, represented by Zhao Zhongping, took the lead in frantically belittling Su Yu from all aspects.

First, Zhao Zhongping had long seen that Su Yu was not convinced.

Second, Yan Haobo and them, but they are all Zhao Zhongping's protégés, if they don't pull at this time, when will they pull it?

"I won't judge Director Su's character and moral values for the time being, let's just talk about the work, I think this is an extremely failed work......"

Zhao Zhongping criticized Su Yu's works as garbage that was not even as good as garbage in terms of expression techniques, storyboard design, and plot structure.

Pei Xiaohua stood up without showing weakness at this time and praised Su Yu.

"I think Director Su Yu did a good job, especially in terms of editing arrangements......"

"Finally, I would like to praise Director Su Yu for his passionate performance, which brought us a living male agent."

"I don't think it's too much to beat today's first-line male stars with his performance."

"Judging from the fact that I have been in contact with the screen for more than ten years, Director Su's performance is absolutely first-class, and there is no problem in entering the 50 million club."

"I want to ask Director Su, have you studied acting before? Or is it a purely talented actor? ”

In fact, many people present also subconsciously noticed this, but none of the four directors said anything.

Er Dongsheng didn't take it to heart, Feng Jiaying and Shen Rui didn't bother to mention it, only Feng Ping quietly sent a text message and asked the assistant to check Su Yu's bottom.

"Let's study it a little." Su Yu said modestly.

Er Dongsheng drank the water and continued to comment: "I agree with this professional film critic that Director Su is really good. ”

"In addition, I can't agree with Director Feng Jiaying's statement."

"Director Jiaying, please be objective, this is a movie, what do agents do if they don't hold guns? Rolling pin? ”

Er Dongsheng humorously ridiculed Feng Jiaying for being too subjective, causing the audience to laugh.

"Since the professional film critic mentioned the editing technique, then I will add one more point."

"In this regard, "Fish in the Sea" can't be said to be badly handled, it feels pretty good, but if you put the works of Director Song and Director Su together, it is obviously not enough."

"Director Su's film cleverly uses a variety of montage techniques, you may not understand what montage is, let me give you an example."

"For example, the opening paragraph was obviously filmed in one scene, but Director Su cut it into two parts."

"In the first half, it seems that there is a strong estrangement between the husband and wife, and after experiencing various feature films, the second half of the happiness of the two is released."

"That's a kind of montage."

"In addition, Director Song, according to the news given to me by the organizer, you invited Zhang Xiaoliang to hold the camera for this film, and you also did the art director, right?"

"There are no problems with photography, composition, and art, and they are all first-class in the world."

"We are in an official competition this time, and ordinary directors don't have such a big face, so they can invite Oscar photography."

"As a director, you have to have a certain skill in all aspects."

"Can I understand that these three items are actually your shortcomings, which is why you have hired such a strong foreign aid?"

"Although the organizer does not sentence you for cheating or violating the rules, it can only be counted as a deduction for me."

"I'm speaking straighter, I hope it doesn't hurt you."

Montage is a kind of editing technique, a word derived from architecture, which means: composition, assembly.

The ordinary point is the narrative technique, and the advanced point is the segmented configuration.

Which picture is more appropriate to place is able to create a strong sense of suspense, expectation, and highlight the artistic conception and other functions.

Song Qingli's mother is an architect, and under her influence, Song Qingli has a very high ability in reorganization, composition, and assembly since he was a child.

In terms of editing, Song Qingli has his own editing system.

But Yan Haobo's attitude was very tough and his desire to control was very strong, so he had to cut it according to his ideas, so the two confronted each other all morning.

Under the pressure of time and teamwork, Song Qingli was forced to compromise.

So, the idea of the two people directly broke the balance of the whole film, beyond Song Qingli's control of the work,

In the end, I had to continue to refer to Yan Haobo's follow-up ideas and strive for a unified style.

The Oscar photography invited by Yan Haobo has become a deduction item.

Editing could have become her advantage, but with Yan Haobo's intervention, it became a disadvantage.

When Song Qingli heard this, his eyes were already full of red bloodshots.

Originally, he could hold back his tears and not shed tears, but in the end, Director Er also said "I hope it didn't hurt you" very straight, which directly made Song Qingli break the defense and collapse.

Silver beans flowed out of the corners of Song Qingli's eyes.

When the host saw it, he panicked directly.

Erdao, Erdao, why do you have to make up the last sentence!

Would it have been okay if people could have held back their tears?