"Are you ready?"

Yu Shi nodded.

Since the first evening self-study, I have been looking forward to individual guidance after school.

It's been a long time coming, and now it's finally officially launched.

To say that it is not agitated is to be false.

"Are we in the living room, or are we ......?"

Xia Moyi asked tentatively.

I have the impression that there is something special hidden in the boys' bedroom, so it's best to ask before you go in.

"It's okay, just go to my room, all my thoughts are basically on the side of the desk, and you can discuss them directly when you go in."

Hey?

He wasn't afraid, what strange things would be discovered?

This can be regarded as breaking his perception of boys.

Follow behind the time.

Judging from his expression alone, he can know how much Xia Moyi is looking forward to.

Before the door opened, his eyes stayed on the door, for fear of missing something.

Fortunately, when she was in front of her, she didn't see Xia Moyi's appearance.

"Huh? How is your room ...... So neat! ”

When the lights were turned on, Xia Moyi simply watched, as if he had discovered a new continent.

This is completely inwardly uncomfortable with the sloppiness of boys.

Is there really a boy who pays so much attention to neatness?

Looking at the neatly arranged quilts on the bed and the neatly laid sheets, Xia Moyi felt ashamed.

I can't help but have questions.

Is he really a boy?

"Get used to it, don't see it."

Yu Shi did not greet Xia Moyi, but moved to the desk, and took out the recent tidying up ideas from the gaps in the neatly placed books.

"You're a little special."

"What do you mean?"

"No, it's nothing, let me see what you think, and if you can, I'll be able to sort it out tomorrow."

Hearing this, Yu's eyes lit up.

"Really? Don't have to do anything else? ”

"Aren't you all set?"

"Oh yes, I'll show you."

Xia Moyi found that as long as he mentioned things about love design, he would be emotionally high.

I don't usually communicate with myself much, but now I'm talking a lot.

"Just tell me about it."

Seeing that the other party was ready, Xia Moyi motioned for him to take out the scratch paper and explain.

"Can you really say that?"

I couldn't believe it at the time, but now I can find someone to share my imagination, and I won't be disliked.

As a handsome guy of 1.8 meters.

It's a bit embarrassing to tell people that you like these articles.

"It's okay, I'll keep it a secret."

"Okay, then I'...... Say? ”

After all, it was the first time, and I was a little nervous, even a little expectant.

After you are familiar with it, you can get used to it.

"Hurry up!"

What's the matter with this man?

The grinding has not started for a long time!

Yu Shi rummaged through the scratch paper in his hand and took out a piece of creativity that he thought he was proud of.

"I've been thinking about this for a long time before, and the beginning is that the heroine is dead......"

“？？？”

What the heck?!

Perhaps he expected Xia Moyi to have this reaction, so he didn't stop and continued to tell.

But the female protagonist has been with the male protagonist in a spirit way, until one day, the male protagonist can see the female protagonist, and with her help, he successfully walked out of the haze and became sunny. At the beginning, the male protagonist was positioned as a melancholy person who didn't like to talk.,The main thing is to heal the love line.。 ”

After roughly finishing his thoughts, he waited for the other party's praise with confidence.

When I looked down, I saw Xia Moyi's speechless expression.

I don't know if it's an illusion, but after he noticed Yu Shi's gaze, it instantly changed into a smiling face.

"That's good, that's a good idea......"

"Isn't it? At the time, I said, this idea is a must! ”

"A modern-day version of an unheard of flower name, right?"

"Yes, yes, yes! It turns out that you have also seen it! ”

Yu Shi seemed to have been opened to talk, and was just about to continue to speak, but was stopped by Xia Moyi in time.

"No problem, it's just ...... Do you have any other ideas? ”

If you're so tactful, you should understand the meaning.

But in Yu Shi's opinion, I thought that Xia Moyi was extremely recognized, and I wanted to refer to other ideas so that I could make a comparison and selection.

"This, this, the male protagonist travels back from the future, because he is going to die in the future, and he can't be by her side, so he organizes the two to meet, and lied to the female protagonist that it is her future son, and matches her with another boy, so that they can successfully fall in love, so that when they die in the future, they can leave with peace of mind, and the female protagonist will not bear the pain."

Speaking of which.

I felt a little tear-jerking at the time, so I was a little substituted.

On the side, Xia Moyi shook his head.

even began to wonder if the other party had watched a lot of idol dramas from a certain country during this time?

"Which of these two do you think is better? Isn't it a good idea? ”

Behaviors that feel good are common among new writers.

Xia Moyi expressed understanding.

Instead of directly rejecting Yu Shi's ideas, he explained it sideways again.

"Your idea is good, but can we think about it from a different perspective?"

Although I really want to say that the idea is good, I won't allow this next time. But when the words came to his lips, he changed the language slightly.

The meaning is not much different, it depends on whether the other party can pay attention to it.

"Is there a doorway in between?"

"Yes, you have to think about why readers will like your novel, and besides, novels are different from anime, anime can express the jerky interaction between men and women, as well as healing, and most importantly, through picture scenes, vivid inner monologues, etc. Novels are used to relax, one of your male and female protagonists is gone, and the ghost is gone? ”

As she spoke, Xia Moyi really couldn't hold back.

expressed the sincerity of his heart, and because he was afraid of hitting his enthusiasm, he raised his head slightly and observed the other party's emotions.

I saw him nod thoughtfully.

Then make a realizable expression.

"That's right! That is to say, to be relaxed, let the male and female protagonists get along easily, then I let one of them lie happily in each other's arms and leave, wouldn't it be better? ”

Why do you want to die?

Xia Moyi didn't quite understand, and was even a little unsure that the other party wanted to write the content of the chapter.

Inquiries are unavoidable.

"Do you want to write a dog food love essay?"

"yes, that's it."

"Then your male and female protagonists are gone, how can you fall in love and sprinkle dog food?"

"It's not after it's sprinkled."

“……”

If he writes about love with this kind of thinking, he will either pounce or be scolded.

At first, I thought it would be a simple guide, but now I find out.

This person obviously wants to end with a big knife!

As an admirer of a perfect ending, how could this kind of behavior happen!

Therefore, it is necessary to let the other party completely cut off this idea before it has fully implemented.

"Let's think about it, if you like a girl, and one day, she suddenly disappears, will you be happy?"

"It seems like a little uncomfortable......"

"That's right, why do you want to end with a knife? Readers will also feel uncomfortable, and they may not read new books in the future. ”

It's okay, the thinking is not so extreme.

At least saved.

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