Say something, complain
Yes... This book... Actually, it's my interest work.,In April.,About four or five.,I can't sleep at night.,There's always some fragmentary pictures flashing in my head.,I'm excited.,Wrote 4,000 words.,Two chapters.,And then I stopped writing and didn't write.。
Later, I went to my sister's house and helped her bring her niece, but at that time I was unemployed again, and I had nothing to do all day long, well, then I picked up the pen again, and then I thought of what to write, so there will be some loopholes in the early plot.
After that, I signed up again, and I thought at the time, maybe the editor took pity on me and asked me to sign it, but it didn't matter, I didn't expect to eat on this, well, then sign it, and continue to write.
I wrote it like this for a few days, and the more I wrote, the more wrong it became, and sometimes it took a whole day to write something that I was slightly satisfied with, and then I thought about making an outline, at least the plot would not be incoherent.
I continued to write the outline, and then I found a job again, and there were a lot of things in the first few days of entry, and I didn't have time to code words, so I sent all the manuscripts to the end, but basically 4000 words a day, and I almost never broke the change.
There are three recommendations in the middle.,It's been tepid.,I know.,There's a high probability that this book is a fight.,But it doesn't matter.,After all, it's a hobby.,It doesn't matter if it's hot or not.。
The book circle is generally a bad review.,To be honest.,This makes me a little confident and collapsed.,I want to delete these bad reviews to be honest.,But in the end I chose to keep it.,I'm still a little bit unable to do this kind of thing.,After all, readers have the right to know...
Then answer some of the questions and comments from the readers.
1. The front is well written, and the back falls into clichés.
I actually think it's all about the same, I don't think the front is very well written, and the back is not too pully, but since some people say, it must be a little bit of a problem, and I will look for problems to improve.
2. The plot is too bland and there are no ups and downs.
Yes... There's not much to be done about this.,The positioning of my book is the kind of plot that is relatively flat.,It may be more difficult to fight throughout the whole process.,Sometimes you may knife it.,But it's not too hard.。
3. Too much emphasis is placed on the identity of the protagonist's doctor, but there is no emphasis on the description.
Several readers have said this question, but I can explain that the identity of the doctor is actually a foreshadowing, and the plot will slowly emerge in the second half, and now the plot is still floating around thirty or forty percent.
4. The problem of the ending of the harem.
Everyone... When you see the protagonist interacting with so many women, don't you think it's a single heroine? The purpose of stock speculation is to add a little suspense to the plot, and the kind of ending that only chooses one in the end seems to me to be a great harm to both the characters and the reader, at least I have a hard time accepting it.
5. The writing is too la.
Yes... I really don't know how to explain this.,My writing is really not good.,Maybe it's also lacking a sense of picture.,But personal ability problems.,There's no way...
6. Plagiarism...
Belch... I want to ask, who did I copy... My plot is 100% come up with my own ideas.,I follow the video of station b and only write the part that says hello at the beginning.,After that, I'll make magic changes.,At least it will make you think.,Eh? That's obviously not the case in the original video.
That's probably it.,Sometimes I think about whether to be a direct eunuch.,Anyway, I look at the general people in the book circle are giving bad reviews.,But after thinking about it, forget it.,The outline is listed.,And it's also spent a lot of energy and time on this.,I have to finish it.,Otherwise, I'm so sorry for the readers who have been supporting me...
It's getting late, and I have to go to work for the capitalists tomorrow, so that's all I have to say, good night, everyone.