outline
That's probably four big wars.
One is: the Revolutionary Army, the Salvation Army and the Navy Headquarters, the all-out war of the world government.
The Valley of the Gods' encounter with Miller and the various processes have already doomed him, as well as the historical text and some other foreshadowing.
The second is: the destruction of the Pirate Alliance
This battle is very tragic, and it will write the faith and pride of the major pirates of the Pirate Alliance, they are like the Rocks Pirates in the Valley of the Gods, but the situation is even more desperate than that.
Death!
The third is: in a larger-scale battle than the top, many high-level combat forces of the Navy Headquarters will die.
Fourth: Armageddon.
The chapter where the protagonist ascends to the throne will be more shocking.
Recently, the plot was affected by trolls and changed to this thing, and I was going to knife Lena (this is not my original outline, the original ending was a bit sad, but the three siblings are here.) )
Because a large number of trolls who opened trumpets inexplicably sprayed Lena, sprayed Katakuri (I really don't understand this, what is there to spray in the original characters?) )。
It almost hurt them and gradually disappeared.
Sure enough, when writing a book, you shouldn't listen to others.
But some time ago, the trolls made me miserable.
Inexperienced.
Your own book must not be changed, even if it is a genuine reader, you can't change the plot casually, let alone a troll (this is the experience of major old authors.) )
The mentality is gone.
I really wanted to stick to it.
Gritted his teeth and planned to write it down without full attendance.
But I really can't hold on.
The previous leave slip was going to be cut.
Less than ten minutes.
I didn't even grab the top 100.
There are only a few dozen of them in a day, but you can imagine how many trolls there are.
Trolls say that what you write is not cool at all, and then there are all kinds of swearing.
The key is that many trolls are all saying that the protagonist was too smooth at the beginning, and the five old stars had no brains, and even said that Katakuri was not born as a fan of the sea of clouds.
They made me change the plot, and I didn't even change the name, thinking I didn't remember them.
Disgusted.
Originally, I was going to cut it after that leave slip.
It lasted for another three days.
There's really no way to hold on.
A group of trainees heard that genuine readers also published that the plot was unhappy, and they were energetic.
The point is that most of their comments are swearing.
I have nothing to do every day.
Last month.
My dearest suddenly had an accident.
I'm in good enough frame of mind.
But it is often the straw that breaks the camel's back.
At that time, the anger and helplessness had made me lose my mind, and I haven't returned until now.
The last few days of last month were spent on manuscript storage.
I've thought about it many times and stopped writing at the end of last month.
Reluctantly adjusted his mentality.
This month was updated for three days.
And then crashed.
It's over.
I can't listen to the opinions of genuine readers.
What can I do?
Shall I change the plot again?
Write the protagonist as a double standard while saying that he wants to change the world, while not taking the lives of ordinary people as his life, pushing sideways without brains, killing all the way to the finale?
Last time, the plot was changed because of the trolls.
Although it's not cool all the way, the character design hasn't changed.
They can work in one direction under the banner of changing the world.
But it changed.
That's really disgusting.
Let the plot stay here.
The basic outline is the four major battles above.
I'll probably take a while to calm myself down.
I don't have many relatives.
Lose one less one.
The book is over!