The last time I posted a single chapter, it was the last time.

More than five months, 697,200 words have been completed, and the update is not diligent, but at least on the baseline.

Let's talk about the book.

The original idea did come from the book of Daochang Li, but it was written later that it still became his own idea to hit the street.

I heard that Daoist Xiao Li is the first book of others, and sometimes I really have to believe in the gap in talent.

I'm really mediocre when it comes to writing online articles. If there is a genre of writing online articles, there is no doubt that I am the beginning of mortal flow, and I can't see any hope for a long time.

There are indeed traces of imitation at the beginning, but the foundation of the whole thing, that is, the world plot actually existed a long time ago, but it was not until this book that I had a chance to write it, which can be regarded as an explanation of the ideas of a few years ago.

Let's summarize some of the shortcomings I felt during the writing of this book:

1, the status is not well written, although Jiang Chou's status has finally become the first person on the new planet, but from an unknown little Taoist priest to the first in the world, the status improvement in the middle does not seem to be obvious, resulting in many cool points have been weakened or even disappeared;

2, the beginning is not very good, the sense of expectation is not enough, when I wrote this book, the sentence "the beginning to show the selling point" is still in a completely forced state, I don't understand what is the "selling point", so even if I felt so-so when I wrote it, the beginning was so-so, and now I look back and look back, it seems a little time. The simplest example, the stinginess of Jiang Chou at the beginning, in fact, there is no feeling at all in the follow-up, and deleting it will not affect the reading at all. At that time, the reason why I wrote that was because I wanted to write about Jiang Chou's character, but it turned out that I couldn't grasp it at all, which is the third point to say;

3, there is a lack of characters, in fact, it is not only Jiang Chou, Chonglou, Tang Qigongzi, Qiu Xu and other characters also gave some more recognizable characters when they first appeared, but it was written that these three people were collectively invisible, and there were hardly too many scenes, and the only one who appeared from the beginning to the end was Jun Jue. In the end, he also fulfilled Jun Jue's dream, which can be regarded as a remedy. Others, Xiang Xiujie's brothers, Xiang Rui, and Jiang Xingming feel that they are all more complete than the three of them, and the stories of these three people have not been developed at all, oh, and Chu Yingying, who originally arranged the Shengong to her because she wanted her to shine after entering Qinghexuan, and bring Jiang Chou a cool point in "cultivating others", but the plot went too fast, and her realm couldn't keep up at all, and it was useless;

4, and then the protagonist harvests, in fact, in this book, Jiang Chou's strength is invincible, and the harvest is more reflected in the status, which returns to the first point, and there is no pleasure of upgrading.

The last point, which I feel is the most important, is that some plots that are easy for other authors to come by, but I often have to grind for a long time, and it doesn't feel right to write them in the end. When conceiving the follow-up plot outline, I often have to sit in front of the computer for two or three hours, and I can only make a little progress after experiencing infinite downtime and blankness of my mind, and if this is really about talent, then I should be the worst batch.

And until now, I haven't thought of any good solutions, shouldn't I look at them more? But I'm so slow to read books, whether it's my object or other people around me, they can read three or four hundred chapters and one million words a day when they read online texts, but I can only see seventy or eighty chapters, which is too inefficient. Maybe it has something to do with the fact that I like to read silently when I read words, and I shouldn't read them silently, but I should read ten lines at a glance.

Speaking of this book, in fact, compared to the second volume, the structure of the first volume is clearer, from the first time the door of the middle door to the death, it is a small closed loop, and it also leads to the shadow of the bow and the back, which I think is the right attempt.

Of course, there are also reasons for the poor grades in the second volume and the lack of motivation to conceive, which we also have to admit (but I still like Xiang Xiujie's overall plot very much).

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That's all I can think of for a while, and it seems that this book is useless.

But after all, it can be regarded as a good ending (although the full attendance in November is gone, which is equivalent to writing in vain).

Now that the new book has been opened, I personally feel that the writing skills seem to be more understood, but the skills do not represent the grades, nor do they represent the feelings, the road is long and difficult, and I hope to improve in the above aspects.

The beginning of the second new book has also been sent to the editor's mailbox, and if it can be approved, it should be available to you in two days, if not...... I'll have to rewrite it, and I hope it's over.

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Anyway, Jiang Chou's story has come to an end, and the next is the story of Lin Rui and Fang Bai.

Thank you to the readers who have always supported Jiang Chou to come here.

I didn't make much money from this book, so it's really because of your existence that I can keep writing until the end, and when a familiar face disappears, I will be sad for a long time, and I will be happy to see you come back.

Thank you, really thank you.

I'm going to update both books in December, and I've uninstalled the game, so I'll keep writing as long as it's a little better.

Thank you again.

I hope to see you in the new book.

Respectfully.