(I beg you a little bit first, everyone has their own aesthetics, please don't quarrel in this chapter)

In the past few days, many friends have reacted to the plot, style and rhythm problems, and I have seen them all.

When writing a book, one thing is clear - as long as it makes a certain number of readers unhappy to read, it must be the author's problem.

This is an unusually solid cause and effect, and no amount of explanation is meaningless, and it can only be changed.

In the past two days, I've been frantically revising, deleting unnecessary dialogues back and forth in the previous article, weakening the jokes that only I find interesting, which is meaningless, but I can't control my emotions, and I will be anxious when I stop.

I always wish this book would be more acceptable.

As for the rhythm, it can only be changed little by little.

My brain is really slow, I can't think of a high-frequency big plot, and I have to think about each paragraph for a long time to build, which is far longer than writing.

So I cherish every big plot, like a baby, I want to write it thoroughly, so that every character shines.

It's just that the pen is limited.,It's inevitable that the final presentation will be delayed.,I don't know how to solve this problem.,I can only try to think hard.,As long as there's enough interesting big plot.,You can speed it up.。

As for the pen and ink occupied by the interaction of the characters, it is a habit that I have been writing about the city for many years, maybe it doesn't match the fantasy side, or maybe I play really badly, and I am trying my best to correct it anyway.

But what has been written has already been written, and it is useless to change it thousands of times, and I can only talk about apologies today, and if I do more, I will only collapse myself.

The new book period is a tragic one, if you still like this book, you are tired of reading and voting.

I'm not sure if I'll be able to change it to make it more comfortable for more people in the future, but I'm sure I'll try to improve it myself.

In the end, if you feel bad, just say I'm fine, don't attack each other, don't say "mushroom books are what they are", and don't be soft because you think I'm pitiful, they are all kind, they are all straightforward, criticism will make me improve, praise will make me happy, I understand and thank everyone who can read this.

The last of the last.

See you tomorrow in the old time!

(This chapter will be deleted tomorrow in order not to affect future readers' reading)