I've been reading comments about the book circle.

I also know exactly where my problems are, and I am a self-critical author.

I hope you keep a sane mind and analyze the shortcomings of this book.

I will list a few points below, which can be regarded as a unified reply:

First, I am a part-time author, not a full-time author, and I hope you understand that asking me to update the word count is not very useful, but will lose quality.

Second: Regarding the theme of this book, dressed in the skin of a short story, it is written in the style of historical overhead and martial arts, and the battle scenes will be smaller, but there will also be.

Third: In terms of writing style, the use of poems is my own knowledge, I just borrow classics, and some poems are created by myself, I said in the previous articles, the sound is not very aligned, I don't have that strength, I just think it is easy to read, and I wrote it.

Fourth: Regarding the handling of characters, I admit that this point is very inadequate, the number of words is small, I can only focus on describing the two protagonists, and the style of writing is a double-main line of writing, which means that after I finish writing Li Bai, I have to write Yu Cheng.

Fifth: Regarding the direction of the plot, I don't want to explain too much, after all, there is no need to take out my own outline, because it is not interesting to say it, I almost always write three or four thousand words in one sentence.

Sixth: There are a lot of questions in the early stage, after all, it is a work that I wrote when I was just an adult, I hope you understand, what were you doing when you were 18 years old? Are you in high school? What about me? I'm very strict with myself, and I can say that this book is very poorly written.

Seventh: This is my first signing book, in general, it gives me hope, but also gives me despair, I have put in a lot of effort, not a sentence or two can deny all my existence.

Eighth: It's okay to spray this book, don't bring the author, because the styles of the books I write are different, I am not a very limited author, I will write many kinds of books, many classifications, many styles.

Ninth: Maintain a humble mindset to learn to get more, also known as an empty cup mentality. Put your heart in the corner, I'm not a writer, I'm a signed author at most.

Tenth: This book is not a historical character plot, if it is too heavy on the historical plot, it is recommended not to read it.

I have emphasized more than once, twice, three times that this is not a history book, and some people prefer to combine historical figures, saying that I have a bad history, and I smiled, you will write it.

I said that this is a historical fiction, that is to say, all the characters are virtual, and I just created this virtual environment to alternate the background, plus the style of martial arts to fight, and then with poetry and ancient texts, and the writing of clichéd dialogues.

Do you know myself better than I do?

Historical overhead + traditional martial arts + ancient poetry + vernacular text.

You can ask a platinum god to write it, and you can give him my subject matter.

Li Bai was born in Jiangyou, Mianyang, Sichuan, which does not mean that he is from Sichuan.

His hometown is Tianshui, Gansu, nominally speaking, the place of birth, does not mean that he is from Sichuan, he is a Tianshui person.

Could it be that I was born in Guangdong, and I am a Cantonese?

But my ancestral hometown is Hunan, and simply put, where your household registration book is, you are the person from there.

Those so-called historical figures can be written by changing their names, so what?

It's just a form of title, and I can respect history as well as I can respect it.

It is completely taken from my own imagination and pen power, because it is a fictional story, where there is any truth.

Eleventh: I use the modern vernacular for the whole article, which is a personal way of writing, because you can't understand the ancient sayings I write, and I will read them very awkwardly.

However, as long as there is a shortcoming, it will be infinitely magnified.

So it's necessary to be rigorous with your own articles, like I have a hole in my clothes, and some people will say, you see, that guy can't even afford new clothes.

Am I not clear myself? If I have money, I won't wear bad clothes, so either I'll sew and mend or I'll buy a new one.

Even if I am self-aware, others don't think like this, and it is a good habit to find fault as much as possible.

To put it simply, this quality is called rigor and seriousness.

Twelfth: It's true that the poems are very beautiful, I wrote them, Li Bai wrote them, and Du Fu wrote them.

Some readers say that the poems I write are very beautiful, but the content is very pale and weak, so the content of the plot will seem a little vulgar, because there is beauty, so it will be vulgar.

I can't help it, after all, I don't live in the Tang Dynasty, so I can't write that feeling.

As for the Tang Dynasty, historians have not studied it thoroughly, so how can we and other juniors criticize ourselves.

Let's learn slowly, I really didn't write history again, repeat it.

I originally wrote in a martial arts style, but to have a background, I chose the Tang Dynasty.

The main thing I set before was that there were two protagonists, Yu Cheng and Li Bai, from the teenagers who were studying, to the success of the imperial examinations in the future, and then to the farewell in the future, and finally fought side by side together, socialist brotherhood.

I haven't read the online article, and I don't know much about the routine.

I read physical literature, and I have always been, and even when I write stories, I am not too limited to my own way of writing.

It doesn't matter if my book is an online article or a physical literature.

At the very least, it's a genre, and it's a story.

Book Hai Mangmang, if you need me to recommend you a few good books of martial arts, the sword line and sword in the snow are good.

My long march was very bad, at the beginning of the short story pigeons.

Thirteenth: Thank you for meeting and living up to your encounter.

Fourteenth: According to incomplete statistics, I have revised more than 1000 times before and after, including the point of chewing the words has made me jaw-dropping, I am a person who is very strict with myself, whether it is the description of environmental characters, or landscapes, or poems, I can only try to be perfect, and can not do the effect you want in your heart, there will be mistakes in keyboard typing, please don't investigate, I will immediately revise after I see it, including some historical plot problems.

Fifteenth: I can only say that I respect the characters in history, I will not change them, and the basic control is still in my own writing hands, I can only say to understand, not to deeply understand this character.

Sixteenth: Regarding the Yueyang Lou banquet of the four heroes of the early Tang Dynasty, I don't know if I said it before, it is a historical overhead, I am using the four heroes of the early Tang Dynasty to set off the identity of Li Baijiu Zhongxian, and Wang Bo said such a sentence, when I arrive at Tengwang Pavilion, I will definitely surpass you.

That's right, Wang Bo's preface to King Teng's Pavilion in history is a well-known article.

This is kind of a foreshadowing that I have planted.

Seventeenth: I'm almost 20 years old this year, I'm in December 99, I don't shy away from my age, nominally I'm a post-00s author, may I ask if such a talent is low? But I've created more than 500,000 words.

Coupled with the fact that I still have a job, including all kinds of pressures in life, am I very simple?

Interesting, so, I'm a very rational and analytical author.

Whether you like this book or not, it's just a simple story, I'm writing stories, you're here to listen to stories.

As long as we can appreciate each other.

Writing this book without making money is purely out of a hobby, and I am also a person with a little dream.

The ancient Buddhas of Tusha have compassion, not to mention our bottomless heart.

I also hope to write better stories to bring to everyone in the future, rather than getting to know me as a person through a leaf.

As I said before, I don't have enough energy to write what kind of words at any age, and I can't achieve what you want.

For each article, you will only be charged about a dime.

I take 5 cents, half and half.

Don't think that writing is very profitable, people at the top of the pyramid make money, but I am at the bottom.

Everyone has their own little dream, I still have that original intention, I just want to bring this story to everyone, it was originally a very short story, I expanded the outline of the plot direction.

Eighteenth: Finally, I would like to thank everyone who supports me, stay a side in life and work, and I have to take care of you on the road in the future.

Nineteenth: Regarding copyright issues, the starting point Chinese network is exclusive, Genesis, Yunqi, and Red Sleeves are all synchronous updates under Yuewen, and the content of Baidu Viewer's website does not match the latest version, which is piracy and will not generate any income to the author.

Twentieth: Writing a historical overhead martial arts text is a challenge, there is no way to learn history, fortunately, I mean historical overhead, if it is really Sui and Tang, it is estimated that it will be sprayed to death.

Twenty-one: Reluctantly look at it as a martial arts, the historical background is actually a fiction of my own, and I choose martial arts style in terms of listening to the content of the book.

Twenty-two:Welcome to the short story,This is more alternative,At first, I also participated in the 2018 Glory of Kings series of essays.,Led to being identified as a fan.,Should I write a Glory of Kings? It is the real sense of breaking this principle.

Twenty-three: I still like those witty readers, who know that I don't say anything I write, so save me some face, right? Haha, it doesn't matter, the front is really poorly written, and the more you write it later, the better.

Aside from other requirements, the theme of the story is very innovative, the encounter between Li Bai and Du Fu has not been recorded in history, I actually wrote it out by my brain, including Li Bai reading and drinking and being exempted from the exam to become a bachelor of Hanlin, which is completely consistent with history, and the line of Yucheng, reading and drinking and going to Beijing to make an appointment to catch the exam, this is not something that can be clearly expressed in a few articles.

In addition, now I am writing Li Bai's Chengdu chapter and Yu Cheng's Biansai chapter, and I also deliberately go to learn about Biansai and the local culture of Chengdu, which can be said to be extremely attentive, and they are all in line with Li Bai's historical restoration image as much as possible, but there are always people who say that I have problems with supporting roles.

There are indeed too few scenes in the supporting roles, just simple dialogues, it doesn't make sense to say that I write strongly, I write scenes and people are two aspects.

Focus on the main character's role, not the supporting role.

Besides, the length of the short story is originally required to be short, so if I continue to write it, can it be called a novella?

With the background of the Tang Dynasty, two teenagers who describe the style of martial arts, I think that in terms of the subject matter, there is no second book written like this on the whole network, and the route is also very clear.

The writing collapsed, it was sprayed, it was written, it was just an affirmation of me.

I'm generating electricity with love and writing stories with my heart.

Progress is always a process, and it's not like I can write particularly well in a day or two.

Jianghu, wonderful with you.

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