Write before update (delete after a day)
Ahem~ (cough from the Prince)
As mentioned earlier, after being a eunuch for so long, it is still time to give an explanation to the previous readers, and at the same time to give the new readers a reassurance.
Why did you break the update before?
After thinking about it, tossing and turning, and reflecting deeply, it should actually be two reasons.
First, there is not much time (I really don't blame me~)
Second, it's a bit of a write-up, which is the biggest problem.
Why did it collapse, I have to mention the two poisonous points of this book, which are greatly fed back by readers.
In the early stage, the protagonist's brothers Wu Yong and Yang Zhi were driven away, and then Wang Xifeng followed by the demolition of Jia Zhishen's study, and Jia's mother scolded her head and face.
In this way, anyone who is a fierce star of the Water Margin can't bear it, if Jia Lian blows Jia Mu with a fist and makes a big fuss in Rongguofu, this book will immediately ascend to heaven on the spot.
So because of Tongling Baoyu, Jia Zhishen endured it, and I also arranged for King Beijing to rescue the scene, so that Jia Zhishen stepped down with dignity.
But despite this, many readers still talk about abuse, abuse, abuse...... He also scolded me, which made my father-in-law tremble.
To be honest, I didn't think I was writing very abusively before, until I opened several books during the break, and finally suddenly found that it seemed that the protagonist was really not doing well.
Okay, I reflected, so as soon as I resumed the update, I let Jia Lian come to a big one and earn a monthly pass for the book friend 'No. 14 Chef'. (So much so that some people think I can't make it round.) )
As for the other big poison point, I really think it's so difficult.
That was when the protagonist Jia Lian went down to Jiangnan.
Originally, according to my idea, it was to let Jia Lian lead out Liu Tang, Liu Tang lead out Xue Pan, and Xue Pan led out Song Jiang, and finally Song Jiang and Jia Lian had a big battle, and Jia Lian killed Song Jiang's heart of recruiting peace with one arrow.
The result...... The comment area quarreled, saying that he would give up if he couldn't see the protagonist appear. (Anyway, there are a total of 1,000 collections, and there can be so many comments)
Facts have proved that writing group portraits in this era is a dead end, so I can only let Xue Pan quit halfway, Song Jiang arranged to go overseas, and then the trip to Jiangnan ended hastily.
As soon as the outline was changed, most of the readers who had chased it all the way before knew it, and my update suddenly dropped a notch - I don't know how to write it.
Recently, I had some free time, and I reorganized the context of the book, and finally found a place to write.
I didn't write about the portraits of the Water Margin, and then focused on the Red Mansion.
I re-read the book before I started writing. To be honest, the other authors don't know what to think, anyway, I changed it when I updated it, and I really didn't want to read it again at that time.
It's just that I opened the book again after so long and read it all at once. Let me boast about it - it's a really good novel, and I almost feel the urge to put it down.
Every part of the book is good, and what I am most satisfied with is that Jia Lian saw that Zhen Shiyin got 'Zhishen', and Jia Lian went down to Jiangnan to see Lin Daiyu.
Ahem~ (Cough reminder from His Royal Highness the Prince)
Well, all in all, now that the update is resumed, the book has been unlocked and the hidden state has been unlocked, and there is a small recommendation, and today I will wait for the direct explosion - two chapters~
The last of the last.
Thank you to the book friends who voted as soon as I sent out the notice that I was ready to update, such as "Chef No. 14" and "I really don't want to hit the street", are all book friends with old faces, which makes me feel like I have traveled through time, thank you very much.
There are also new entrants to the pit, and the book friends who chose to vote for me on the street, thank you very much.
There are also the twenty-eight book friends on the book friend list, no matter whether you still remember this novel or not, how much can you come back, thank you very much.
And during the break period, under my new novel, I always chased and reminded me to come back to Jia Zhishen's book friend 'Star Picking Monster', I really thank you......
ps:Some readers think that the current introduction I gave this book is too literary.,Uh~ After changing it.,It's just that the website will have to give permission after a while.。