Based on a review by a book friend, I also found some big problems with the book.

First: that is, the plot is too thin, the connection between different forces is very stiff, and the supporting characters are too marginalized, as if there is no sense of existence.

is typical of these and Caitou Xiaoxiao, and even characters like Huo Yuhao have no sense of existence.

And when the fairy grass was distributed at the beginning, it didn't seem to have any friendship with the vegetable head Xiaoxiao and the hero, and the fairy grass was given very casually, which was a poisonous point.

This is a serious problem.

Second: The Holy Spirit Sect was destroyed too casually, the establishment of the Sea Soul Empire was very abrupt, the Ontology Sect did not have too many descriptions, the description of the Seagod Family was very vague, the Nine Treasure Liuli Sect wrote it at the beginning, and the plots and wars of several major empires only said that the war had started, and it was not too much to write. It gives the impression that this war is weird. It's like a narrator telling a story, and it's over after a few sentences.

Third: The level jumps very quickly in the late stage (I actually ridiculed this in the text.) ）

Fourth: The description of Goldfinger is too unsuccessful, and it even has a fight with the blade of light and darkness in the previous book.

Summary: I wrote too poorly about the idea of the plot and the connections between the characters.

To sum up, if I say that the full score is 10, I can only give this book 1.5 to 2 points, this score is still compared with the previous book, I can only say that there are too many shortcomings, I want to apologize to those book friends who are disappointed by the plot and character description. It's really not well written.

What to say.,Actually, the first order of my book is really bad.,In the same humanities.,It's basically the poor ranks.,To be able to book an average of three hundred to today's average order of two thousand.,It's completely everyone's support.,I'm very grateful.。

When I saw the first set of results, I had actually given up on this book, and I was going to go to Guangdong to find a factory to work, but I was delayed by the epidemic and didn't make it, but I didn't expect the grades to improve later, and I persevered after making some money, and the outline and outline of my book are very thin, which is why the plot description is not in place.

There are outlines and outlines.,I'm not lying to anyone.,But it's really thin.,The two add up to just over 10,000 words.,Even some plots were later seen and the results were temporarily read by the original.,And then added.。

I can't make any promises, I can only say that before writing a book in the future, I will try my best to make up for these problems, whether it is an outline or a detailed outline, whether it is the plot idea in the text, the relationship between the characters, I can only say that I will do my best to get it right.

I hope that the books I write in the future can reach a score of three or even four points. I can't guarantee that future books won't have these problems, but I'll try to make them a little less viral.

Book friends who can see here, thank you for stopping and watching!