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"Slay the Wolf 2"!

After Wu Jing returned to the mainland to develop, he saved the first book!

Because the plot takes place in Thailand, it needs to be filmed across borders, and it has not started filming for a long time.

Previous life.

This movie was only released in 15 years, relying on the excellent performance of the previous "Wolf Warrior 1", Wu Jing's popularity soared, and in one fell swoop drove "Kill the Wolf 2" to a box office of more than 500 million.

But that's it, the plot of "Kill the Wolf 2" is too thin, and now that it was born in advance, it is impossible to get a box office of 500 million.

The reason why Wu Jing took out this book in advance was because he saw that "Tang Detective" was filmed in Thailand, and the results exploded.

He was itching in his heart, thinking about finding an opportunity to get "Kill the Wolf 2" out as soon as possible.

Taking the opportunity to participate in "The Four Famous Catches", he took out the script last night and asked Fang Ziheng to help take a look.

To be honest, Fang Ziheng is very interested in "Slaying the Wolf 2".

Really interested!

The core of the movie tells the story of a policeman who endures humiliation and cruelty for the sake of his mission, and finally persists in eliminating the criminal organization in one fell swoop.

The idea of the story is very good, and after understanding the synopsis of the story, people have the desire to read it.

But.. How so?

Wu Jing is estimated to have been influenced by Hong Kong Island police films, and the script has no beginning or end, and the plot twist is too hard.

The original good story was turned into an action movie, which is exactly the same as the disadvantages of Hong Kong Island police movies!

After Fang Ziheng read the script, his first thought was to revise it.

The script needs to be overhauled!

"Brother Jing, it's not good at the beginning of the script."

He flipped through the script, pointed to the first paragraph and said: "The protagonist appears in the prison cell, and only briefly recalls that he is a police officer, which is very problematic."

At the very least, you have to make the protagonist's task clear through memory, or explain the protagonist's task at the beginning, I'm talking about a clear task! ”

"Clear mission!"

Wu Jing was stunned for a moment, frowned and said, "Bringing out the villain in the later stage and explaining the matter of organ trading, can't it be a task?" ”

"That's too shallow, the later criminal group trafficked organs, which belongs to the category of plot stories!"

Fang Ziheng smiled and nodded: "For example, when the protagonist was in a coma, he recalled the picture of accepting the mission, and the organization explained that it was dangerous for him to go, not only to protect his own safety, but also to fight crime and bring the criminals of organ trade to justice!" ”

"This is called straight to the point, setting up a character for the protagonist in the maze lake, and making the audience more immersed."

"You must know that the identity of the protagonist Chen Zhijie is not an undercover agent, but a policeman who was discovered by a crime, he does not need to keep his identity secret, and after he wakes up in prison, he even has to take the initiative to investigate the situation and wait for the opportunity."

"And at this time, he found the prison guard Achai!"

"In this way, the plot logic of the first half of the movie will be more reasonable, and it will also lay the groundwork for the protagonist to rise up and resist later!"

After Fang Ziheng finished speaking, he stopped speaking and gave Wu Jing space to think.

Active!

Wait for your time!

Wu Jing took a light breath and muttered to himself.

In the original plot, the protagonist Chen Zhijie has been passive in the early stage, and in the end, he was able to resist because there was a problem within the criminal group, which gave him and Ah Chai an opportunity.

If you follow the director's modification, it will become the protagonist who is shrewd and capable, cannibalizing and disintegrating the criminal group little by little, and finally facing Gao Jin, the villain, hard steel!

Such a change is tantamount to completely overturning his previous setting.

Is it really good?

For a while, Wu Jing was puzzled!

Fang Ziheng sighed: "Brother Jing, I know what you think, you want to create a more powerful villain group, and deliberately suppressed the protagonist and Ah Chai in the early stage."

It is not easy to highlight the protagonist's resistance in the later stage, so as to show the blood of the last high dynasty! ”

"Yes, director, that's what I thought."

Wu Jing slapped his thigh and grinned embarrassedly.

"No need!"

Fang Ziheng shook his head and pointed to the role of Gao Jin: "The force value of this character is to beat Chen Zhijie and Achai two, if the two of them are suppressed too hard, in the end, the decent will win the villain, it will be a plot kill!" ”

Plot kill!

Wu Jing exclaimed, staring at his incredible eyes!

He is not a rookie, so he naturally knows the meaning of 'plot killing'.

Many movies on Hong Kong Island do not have perfect scripts before the start of filming, and the director plays arbitrarily during the filming process, often making the villain too strong, and the decent protagonist is unable to fight, and in the end he can only arrange the plot to kill the commotion.

This kind of sassy operation, once or twice, is fine, the audience will feel novel, at most one or two sentences.

But all of Nima's movies are like this, it's no wonder that the audience is not bored!

Over time, Hong Kong Island movies have become synonymous with no logic!

After the new century, it is not for nothing that Hong Kong Island films have been unable to open the mainland market and attract audiences to the cinema.

In addition to the fact that the investment production is too small and the actors are too patterned, the script is not good also accounts for a large reason.

"After so many years, plot killing has become the most rubbish finishing method in film and television dramas."

Fang Ziheng flipped to the end of the script and said with a light smile: "For example, this Gao Jin, even if he doesn't die in the end, he was seriously injured by Chen Zhijie and Achai and knocked out of the hospital, vomiting blood and fleeing, which can make the audience agree more, resonate and have more associations than the plot killing." ”

"I see!"

"Thank you, Director!"

Wu Jing turned around and solemnly thanked Fang Ziheng.

was a little bit pulled by the master, and he looked back at the script of "Kill the Wolf 2".

Porous!

How do you look at it and how do you feel twisted.

Fang Ziheng waved his hand and said sincerely: "Brother Jing, you try to modify it first, and come to me directly if you need to." ”

"After the script is finalized, we will talk about cooperation!"

"No problem!"

Wu Jing patted his chest and smiled very happily.

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Afternoon.

Fang Ziheng put down his work and accompanied Liu Qianqian to the supermarket.

The two wore thick down jackets, sunglasses, and scarves, and went straight to the Ming and Qing Palaces in the film and television city.

Go to the supermarket!

Where to go to the supermarket, where to buy toiletries when you come back.

When he came to the Ming and Qing Dynasty Palace, Fang Ziheng spent money to buy tickets, and the two lined up to enter the palace gate like ordinary tourists.

At this time, the sun is just right, shining warmly on the body.

The young lady stood in front, dressed in a white down jacket, with a long dress that covered her knees, revealing a section of padded jeans underneath.

The young lady also wore a white woolen hat on her head, and two pendants hung on both sides of the hat.

Blown by the wind, the pendant swayed, and came back to the hair that was blown away by the wind in the ears.

Xu waited for a long time, and the young lady stomped her feet, took her hand out of her coat pocket and put it to her mouth.

While sighing, he turned to look at Fang Ziheng.

"Hanhan, I'm cold.."

"Oh, put your gloves on."

Fang Ziheng untied the shoulder bag on his shoulder, took out a pair of pink gloves, and handed it to the young lady with a smile.

"Sissi, do they know you're coming out?"

This is naturally Song Yi and Da Tiantian.

After shopping yesterday, the three beauties have established a preliminary friendship.

"Yes."

Liu Qianqian blinked, put on gloves, and said with a smile: "I told you, I almost couldn't get out, Da Tiantian bought two sets of toiletries, and said that he would give me one." ”

"Oh, what do you say?"

Fang Ziheng stretched out his hand to help her straighten the hat on her head, and asked with interest.

"I just said I didn't bring a lot of things, so I had to go to the supermarket."

"Didn't they say to come with you?"

"Of course, I'm coming out after they go to training."