"This lyrics and songs are also rotten." Ren Jinqing said slowly into the microphone.

After saying this, there was silence.

Although He Su and Yu Xiaoxiao were strict before, they were only for performance, and they were quite humble for a few songwriters.

But what kind of coffee position is Ren Jinqing? These songwriters are all juniors to him, and he can be ruthless at all.

"The meaning of your lyrics is that birds eat fish, fish become, nourishes flowers, and flowers make you think of your lover, right?"

After Ren Jinqing finished speaking, the audience in the live broadcast room burst into laughter directly, and many people at the scene were also holding back their laughter, only Jia Yi looked embarrassed.

"Haha, the old man is so humorous!"

"If you think about it carefully, his song is really like this, and there is no problem at all."

Ren Jinqing continued: "I'm not saying that you don't write this word well, this time the topic is reincarnation, your understanding of reincarnation is a little too superficial, going around and around, and finally writing love songs, this is not reincarnation." ”

Jia Yi sweated on his forehead, and nodded again and again: "The old gentleman is reasonable." ”

Ren Jinqing didn't take a stubble, and then said: "Some of the songs now, a little too much focus on the market, back and forth are love songs, all of which are things that men and women love."

"Reincarnation, what a grand concept, why is it so entangled in love? And your love can't match reincarnation, huh?

"You see, you can write like this, a pair of lovers who love each other are reincarnated, become mountain eagles and fishes, become enemies, and then reincarnate again, become flower mud and flowers, their feelings change in reincarnation, isn't this much broader than your love alone?"

After Ren Jinqing finished speaking, Meng Xing's eyes lit up.

This is an amazing idea!

Why can't you think of it yourself?

Yu Xiaoxiao was also excited, and said: "It seems to be changed like this, it really has to be a lot more interesting!" ”

He Su also nodded and said: "Yes, love and kill each other and protect each other, this love has become very poignant in reincarnation!" ”

The barrage has swiped the screen:

"It's worthy of being a teacher, as soon as an expert makes a move, he will know if there is one."

"In the past, I always thought that the songwriters of these national teams were too rigid, but when I look at them today, their minds are much more open-minded than these popular students now!"

"Otherwise, Jiang is still old and spicy, Jia Yizhen still has to practice."

"I'm looking forward to Mr. Ren commenting on Chen Liang's songs now, and counting his "Black Plum Sauce" and "Ah Zhen Fell in Love with Ah Qiang", haha!"

"+1, these days there is "Ah Zhen fell in love with Ah Qiang" everywhere, I vomited, I was looking forward to Mr. Ren scolding Chen Liang."

……

Ren Jinqing said again: "Moreover, you said that the little girl sang out of tune, I can't hear what the main theme is, just listening to the accompaniment, there are too many elements, too redundant, and it is easy to lead the singing person astray." ”

"Yes, yes......"

Jia Yi didn't dare to come out, only dared to nod again and again.

Just now scolded Jin Lan for being arrogant, and now he is embarrassed to be trained. Highlight a food chain.

He only prayed in his heart to let Ren Jinqing comment less.

If he continues, his worth will be gone!

This is live across the country!

The barrage in the live broadcast room also highlighted a tailwind scolding against the wind, and followed the spray:

"Jia Yi is also bullying the soft and afraid of the hard, Jin Lan scolded casually just now, and now he can only say that he deserves to be scolded."

"It's not a scolding, saying that other people can't sing it, and you can't write it yourself."

……

Jia Yi couldn't see the barrage in the live broadcast room, but he could imagine what it was like.

He felt hot in the face, as if he had been slapped twice.

But fortunately, this section passed quickly.

The next person to take the stage was Lu Chujiu.

Guo Xiaoran sat under the stage with his arms crossed, quite confident.

The camera also captured Guo Xiaoran's confident expression, and when it was filmed on the screen, the audience in the live broadcast room watched it and immediately talked about it.

Guo Xiaoran doesn't seem to be afraid of being Rui by Old Man Ren at all. How Meng Xing and Jia Yi died before, he didn't learn at all. ”

"Guo Xiaoran is definitely not afraid, he is the least afraid. Hehe, this time inviting the old man Ren Jinqing to come, it is the most beneficial for him! ”

"Haven't you heard Guo Xiaoran's song before? Guo Xiaoran is very good at writing lyrics in the national style, and he should be very fond of the old gentleman. ”

"Yes, Guo Xiaoran's words are a must, and his national style song is very strong!"

……

Ren Jinqing glanced back at Yu Xiaoxiao next to him and said, "This is the national song, right?" ”

Yu Xiaoxiao hurriedly helped explain: "Yes, Guo Xiaoran wrote it." ”

It can be said that Ren Jinqing is an expert in national style songs, and he is a little more focused on the stage, and took out reading glasses from his pocket.

Lu Chujiu, who was standing on the stage, took a deep breath, and suddenly burst into a sharp throat, and the accompaniment exploded like thunder:

"You say kill the rich and help the poor, I say ride the wind"

"You say that heaven is not benevolent, I say that Huang Tian should stand"

"I fight with my sword, look at the yellow sand, the heaven and the earth are covered, and the corpses are accumulated"

"You climb high, but raise your arms, the yellow flag, change the green flag"

……

Lu Chujiu has an explosive power that is completely disproportionate to her appearance, just looking at her appearance, it is hard to believe that she can sing such a song with a killing meaning.

After the opening moment, the audience in the live broadcast room, including many people at the scene, was directly shocked.

"Wow, Chu Jiu's stage performance is amazing!"

"Yes, I thought she was actually very foundational before, but this time with a good song, she broke out directly."

"Teacher Ren should be satisfied this time, right? He shouldn't have anything to criticize, right? ”

"I don't understand it, but I feel good."

……

Meng Xing was quite happy before Lu Chujiu came to power.

He was not confident in this round of competition, the performance of the gold and blue group was smashed, and he was already scheduled to be at the bottom, and he suddenly felt that he could do it again.

He even fantasized that Jia Yi overturned, Lu Chujiu had been silent, looking mediocre, and he might not have played as well as Guo Lichuan.

So this round, isn't it, a chance to get a second place??

Even the old man Ren Jinqing is here, which is not good for a spoof player like Chen Liang, maybe, he still has a chance to win the first place?

As a result, Lu Chujiu came to power, and with a single voice, he overturned his illusions.

This little girl usually looks inconspicuous, but she didn't expect to be so stunning all of a sudden.

"She's evolved." Chen Ya stared at the stage and said.

"What?" Qin Yunshang tilted his head to look at him.

"Lu Chujiu has evolved," Chen Ya said, "Some singers will suddenly break through after a long period of precipitation and pressure, turn into a cocoon, and evolve." Lu Chujiu is like this. ”

After that, he turned his head to look at Qin Yunsheng: "You should also have a sense of crisis." ”

Qin Yunshang was silent, a little unconvinced.

It seemed that Chen Liang had never praised her so much, and suddenly, she had some hope and wanted Chen Liang to really recognize her once.

……

Soon, Lu Chujiu's performance ended.

She stood on the stage, sweating profusely, her chest rising and falling with excitement.

Everyone's eyes were focused on Ren Jinqing's face.

Ren Jinqing slowly took off his glasses and rubbed his face.

Guo Xiaoran sat upright on the surface, but the string in his heart trembled with the old man's every move.

If you can get a compliment from Ren Jinqing, it will really be a treasure to praise Hua Gon.

For him, he not only received a compliment from his predecessors, but also was recognized by the national team, which shows that his national style words are not only popular on the Internet, but also recognized by the academic community.

If he wins Ren Jinqing, he can go further. Especially other lyricists have been sharpened in value, and he can be praised so much that his value skyrockets.

That's why he's so nervous.

Not only Guo Xiaoran was nervous, but many viewers in the live broadcast room were also looking forward to it.

Most of the people who like Guo Xiaoran's national style words are young girls, and they only think that the national style words are very handsome, but the essence is still a subculture, and they are usually not treated by their parents.

can let Ren Jinqing boast, it is naturally different, and he can straighten his waist and be a man in the future.

Ren Jinqing didn't seem to notice that everyone was nervously waiting for his comments, and wiped his glasses for a long time before he raised his head, was stunned, and said:

"Is it my turn to say it?"

The host hurriedly said: "Mr. Ren, please comment first." ”

"Oh."

Ren Jinqing picked up the microphone and said casually: "The song is indeed very good and very infectious." ”

As soon as he heard this opening remark, Guo Xiaoran was overjoyed and stable.

Ren Jinqing didn't tell you anything "euphemistic" before, he just criticized it when he came up, and he didn't leave any affection.

It is unprecedented to get a "very good" evaluation from him.

Ren Jinqing continued: "This lyric is also about reincarnation, but it is about the reincarnation of history, the peasant rebel army rebelled, led the people to fight the world, and after defeating the world, he became a powerful person again, and then he was rebelled again.

"From this point of view, the way the lyrics interpret the theme is very novel, more ingenious than the first two, which is a point worth commendating."

After Ren Jinqing finished speaking, Guo Xiaoran was still sitting upright, but he was already dizzy with happiness.

The barrage in the live broadcast room was also full of champagne:

"It's worthy of Guo Xiaoran, or his national style words are more on the table!"

"I'm also very excited to listen to this song, and I can't wait to go to the battlefield to kill the enemy!"

"Indeed, it is so well written."

……

After a pause, Ren Jinqing continued:

"Next, it's time to talk about the shortcomings."

After thinking about it, he said again: "When I listened to it just now, I counted several shortcomings, and I calculated them just now...... There are no ten, seven or eight are there, forget it, I won't count it, let's count it wherever it goes. ”

"First of all, the first point, word errors and grammatical errors, many of the lyrics in your song are deliberately used in order to pursue a national flavor, but they are rigid, many words are used very stiffly, and the ancients did not use them like this at all......."

"The second point, the idea is still too superficial, in our China, there is only one dynasty that has successfully revolted in the real peasant uprising, and it has not formed reincarnation as your lyrics say, and your lyrics are a bit far-fetched in order to make up the topic of reincarnation."

"The third point is that many places are forced to rhyme ......"

"What about the fourth point......

Ren Jinqing was talking, and Guo Xiaoran was dizzy again.

I was stunned just now, but now I'm stunned.

I thought before that the national style lyrics would be more of an appetite for Mr. Ren, but he never thought that for Mr. Ren, the national style lyrics were his specialty!

Take this to the expertise of other old men, there is a sentence that can be well described - the class has an axe.

Although Guo Xiaoran is very confident, his lyrics skills are indeed far from enough.

Ren Jinqing, as the vice president of the Jianghe Provincial Writers Association, is very interested in ancient poetry.

I know a lot, and I can criticize a lot, saying that it counts wherever it goes, but in the end, it gave this song as many as 9 shortcomings.

Guo Xiaoran's fans in the live broadcast room were suddenly dumbfounded.

Champagne is early!

Ren Jinqing said that the other players, although they are all bad, did not say that they were so miserable.

Guo Xiaoran is really miserable, and he said for ten minutes without repeating it, which can be said to be hung up and beaten.

Many barrages broke the defense on the spot:

"Is this old man here to scold people? Is there no one who can get his praise? ”

"What's wrong? I think Mr. Ren is very reasonable, and I have learned a lot from what he said. ”

"Being able to say so much shows that Old Man Ren still attaches great importance to Guo Xiaoran! It shows that he has unlimited potential in the future! ”

"Don't be here as a future soldier, Meng Xing's kind can still be saved, Guo Xiaoran and Jia Yi will go directly to the ground."

"Some Chen Liang fans don't jump, now they are gloating, and it will be liquidated when they come to power later!"

"That's it, I spoofed two songs with Jin Lan, and it became popular unexpectedly, and it made them numb, can you really speak with hard power? Something that doesn't go into the stream. ”

"I won't say who it is if someone breaks the defense."

"Chen Liangfen came out and called again! Why don't you call it? ”

……

Although Guo Xiaoran was said to be miserable, Lu Chujiu's performance still received a lot of affirmation.

The first two groups are cannon fodder, and anyone with a discerning eye can see that the next thing is Lu Chujiu and Qin Yunsheng competing for the first place.

Qin Yunshang has a background and strength, if she can't compare to Lu Chujiu, it can only show that Chen Liang's level is much worse than Guo Xiaoran.

That invisibly proves that among these people, Guo Xiaoran is still the strongest in lyrics and music.

And Jia Yi's fan base has never been accustomed to Chen Liang.

So for a while, before Qin Yunshang came to power, countless barrages began to attack him en masse, insulting and cursing Chen Liang.

Not only that, but there was also a barrage trying to divide Qin Yunshang and Chen Liang, saying that "being in the same group is not equal to sharing a common fate, and Chen Liang will not affect Yunsheng's strength."

There is also a person who took Jin Lan out to touch porcelain Chen Liang, saying, "Chen Liang's kind of village cannon is the most suitable for Jin Lan's kind of village flower singing skills, and it is not good to give him a cloud dress."

All in all, the live broadcast room highlights a group of demons dancing.

In the studio, Qin Yunchu looked at these barrages and felt very angry.

But there are too many rhythmic barrages, and she can't interfere, let alone let the water army help Chen Liang speak.

What Chen Liang's new song is, she didn't listen to it specifically, and she couldn't help but be a little worried at this time:

Chen Ya won't still write the kind of funny songs, right?

If he happened to run into the minefield of the old man Ren Jinqing and was sprayed with a poisonous tongue, the two mentors would not dare to give Qin Yunshang a high score.

At that time, it will anger Qin Yunsheng's fans, making them think that the song you wrote for our family Yunsheng'er is bad, and vote against it in retaliation, maybe this first place will be gone.

Although the first place in this round of competition didn't matter to Chen Ya, Qin Yunchu still didn't want him to lose in his heart.

After all, he is JX, Qin Yunchu admires him so much, if he really loses, he will be more or less disappointed.

……

On the stage, Chen Ya turned his head to Qin Yunshang and said, "Do you have confidence?" ”

Qin Yunsheng pursed his mouth and said, "Of course I have, unless you don't have confidence in yourself." ”

Chen Ya smiled, and at this time, the host was also calling for Qin Yunshang to come to the stage.

Qin Yunshang picked up the guitar and went up.

The host was surprised: "Yun Shang'er, is this going to play and sing again?" Is it the same as the previous round, another ballad? ”

Qin Yunshang sat down on the stool and said, "That's right." ”

Hearing her say that she was singing a ballad again, many people in the live broadcast room frowned.