Today, the younger brother sat down in the afternoon and began to write, because some characters were separated for a long time, so he turned to the front and began to look at Xue Yong's appearance.

As a result, I took a look at it! I have been reading the two chapters of Jiangzhou Judge and Li Kui's mother.

In all fairness, I don't think it's a good job.

Although some sentences can still be refined, the overall feeling is particularly in line with my aesthetics.

The plot, the characters, the rhythm, are comfortable, and I can see it all laughing.

Then the problem arises.

I feel that the feeling of writing later is not as good as the previous one, which is probably the reason why Junding can't go up.

I don't think it's a big problem with the writing and narration of these aspects, and the characters are okay, but if you think about it carefully, it should be that the plot and rhythm are not good enough.

At this time, I saw that the time was almost up, and I quickly started writing today, and the result was a!

It's awkward to write!

The pen can't fall!

I changed it here and again, and I wrote it now in 500 words.

It's frustrating!

I can't concentrate on my thinking, and my thoughts fluctuate in my mind, so I thought of "Lu Zhishen Drunk and Hit the Three Kingdoms" written by Trumpet before, I don't feel good, it's not good, it's smooth and smooth to watch, but it's not exciting enough, and the emotions are not enough.

So brothers, little brother, I'm sorry for the ticket bouncing today, I'll think about it myself for a while.

I don't want to go on leave without working overtime and getting sick, but I don't want to fool myself by fooling thousands of words.

When you emo, you have to do something happy, just like Zhou Tong and Li Zhong were bullied by Lu Zhishen and began to count the money and share the spoils.

So to show my apologies, let's smoke five ducks today! Just after this paragraph, type "I'm a little duck babbling", and according to the response time, the first five people will receive a Jinling saltwater duck.

Finally, I apologize again, brothers.

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